Register a free account today to become a member! Once signed in, you'll be able to participate on this site by adding your own topics and posts, as well as connect with other members through your own private inbox!
The smell of smoke and static electricity filled the control room, which was solely illuminated by the errant fires which had broken out across the level. Typhojem, the Left-Handed God, had done it's job well. With the Imperial fleet engaging the Faithless outside, and His forces running amok...
Intent: Make a new Kainate bioweapon
Image Source:
Created by Me with ChatGPT
Headers - Teresa Zambrano | Darth Pellax
Canon Link: N/A
Permissions: N/A
Primary Source: N/A
Manufacturer: Malsheem Hypernautics and Manufacturing - Delmara Synthlabs
Affiliation: The Kainate
Market Status...
Intent: Create a unique companion for Darth Carnifex
Image Credit:
ChatGPT - Generated By Me
Headers - Teresa Zambrano | Darth Pellax
Role: Qabr'azm serves as Darth Carnifex's ever-shifting shard-swarm companion, a living reliquary of bone and ash that acts as tool, weapon, and ritual...
Location: New Cov
Equipment: Vibro-daggers, vibro-sword, blaster pistol, mask
Outfit: Assassin Outfit
Tag: Darth Carnifex
Blaster bolts fired all around the woman as she ran through the jungles of New Cov. Having escaped, she could hear the shouting, cursing behind her as attacks came in the...
Malsheem, Deep Space
902 ABY
Darth Carnifex sat within the Sanctum of Memories, legs crossed and hands clasped over His stomach. His face, once serene, was now darkened by the shadow of concentration. It was not uncommon for the Dark Lord to receive visions and revelations during the height of...
The shadow of the war galleon cast a stark gloom over the Jutrand Academy, the massive, bloated warship passing lazily over the heart of the world-city. Weapon emplacements bristled along it's hull, each one carrying enough payload to level an entire city. Fortunately for those below it, the...
The Black Pyramid of Jutrand loomed high above the sprawling cityscape, a terrible edifice to the majesty and horror of the Sith regime that held Jutrand so tightly in it's grip. Lightning danced across it's glossy black surface, the rupture of charged particulates in the air rending the sky...
For a time, the situation had worked in His favor. It had not been ideal, not what they had desired, but He was nothing if not pragmatic and adaptable. They could bridge the gaps with other methods, keep it all cinched together without catastrophic collapse. But, as the years wound forward it...
How time did distort into endless tedium deep within those blackened cells, where all light had fled and only darkness reigned. Social interaction beyond the placid stoicism of her gaolers was virtually nonexistent, save for the strange visitors she received that broke the droning monotony of...
Bad Bad Bad
She could still taste it, smell it.
Putrid iron, coppery and sickly sweet, in its viscous red ichor. Black walls around her in an unlit hall, stone beneath her feet, and the disgusting filth dripping down as the only source of light. Screams that came from every direction, silenced...
The world below had been thoroughly conquered, it's people dispossessed and relocated to work sites within the Empire. Once the world had a name, it had been part of three dozen or so worlds caught in the Sith's advance as it pressed forward across the stars. But whatever that name had been was...
The skies above Jutrand thundered angrily, the overwhelming power of the Dark Side concentrated into a single place causing disastrous atmospheric distortions. Much of this was mitigated by city-sized weather stations designed to regulate the worst of the churning maelstroms, but much was left...
Tergamenion.
A world of bustling production and manufacturing, miles upon miles of factory sprawl beneath a blanket of perpetual smog. No light from Tergamenion's star ever reached the world below, all that there was existed in endless gloom; a dismal twilight illuminated only by the flames of...
This is the first time I've posted a feedback thread since 2020, and seeing all the recent ones crop up got me wanting to post one of my own.
This'll be for feedback and constructive criticism for the character of Carnifex, his personal group the Kainate, and the stories written concerning both.