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Approved Starship Jai'galaar Bes'uiik - Shriek-Hawk Iron Beast

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION

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TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

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SPECIAL FEATURES
STRENGTHS
  • Starfighter Equivalent Bes'Uiik
  • Very well Armed
  • Extreme Defensive Measures
  • Various Stealth Capable systems for select individuals
  • SLAM Engine systems allow for Extreme Speeds
WEAKNESSES
  • SLAM engines reduce movement to near zero when active. Only really usable in a straight line.
  • Stealth Systems for only select individuals (PCs)
  • Very Large, and Very heavy for a "Vehicle" Landing in places can be difficult.
  • Takes up about as much space as a Heavy Star Fighter, instead of a vehicle spot.
  • Pretty much for Combat, or Personal Travel planet side only.
  • Holds no cargo on board. Tractor Beams only hold so much.
DESCRIPTION
Many iterations of the Bes'Uiiks have been made and forged for the Mandalorians in the past. Many were in the shape of the rather famous Basilisks. However, these were instead shaped after the idea of being more of a starfighter capable vessel instead of a tank. Thus, the inspiration came from the Shriek-Hawks. Bat Like creatures that are well known in the Mandalorian culture for being the inspiration for Clan members, and even paintings on Mandalorian helmets. Now, they are a closer integral part of the combat for Mandalorians. Created by the Priest Clan, and to be used by the Mandalorian Protectors, the hope is that these new Bes'uiiks will bring about a better age for the Mandalorians.
 
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Chaaj Priest Chaaj Priest

It is a very cool sub! I totally love it! However this is considered a spaceship because it can also travel in space. Because of this, I moved the sub to the right place, and I have to ask you to modify the template.
 
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Chaaj Priest Chaaj Priest

Thank you! For easier transparency would you be so nice to seperate the vehicle and starship parts? Like this for example. It is enough to list the links in one of them, I'll not ask you to do this twice. There is no problem with the links and the rest of the sub, but the ratings seem overpowered, both the vehicle and the starship have to be balanced separately, not together.

And one more thing, you wrote to the Affiliation it is open market for the Mandos, and a Major faction, however the Limited means this; and the Mandalorian PCs' numbers are more than this, because nearly every faction have Mandos and the site has many independent too. What you wanted here, that would be at least Mass Production.
Limited (Only one small group of characters. IE: A Single Minor Faction, Company, or Group within a faction.)
 
MANIAC MANIAC

Alright. I apologize for misunderstanding on what you meant of combining them together. I believe I have fixed it.

I changed up the wording of the production to better reflect what I was going for.

I have edited it how you have asked. Let me know if I messed up the ratings. I think I got them, but I might be off.
 
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Chaaj Priest Chaaj Priest

Not a problem and I thank you for your cooperation and patience!
  • The ship' ratings are 2 (limited) / 1 (semi-unique) point(s) over than balanced.
  • The vehicle's ratings 1 (limited) point over than balanced.
For example, If you modify the squadron count to none, and add one significant weakness to the space part, I can approve it if it is 1 point higher (but not with the vehicle, but there it is easy to modify the weight to very heavy instead of extremely heavy; after all, these ratings are compared to the similar class).
 
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