Well, having done a good bit of time with you in the First Order, like Tanomas Graf I have a few things to say,
This character is superb. The way you write military/fleeting is interesting yet simple in the way that I don't have to look up my military jingo every paragraph. It feels like one of the Original Trilogy episode scripts for Imperial personnel, its professional, and I understand it without a bat of the eye. Your dedication to being an Imperial Naval Officer is impeccable, I thought I could do it but I far pale in comparison to your style of being the on point model of an Imperial Fleeter.
A little note on the writer, you are one or were one when I was with the FO (Active that is) one of the, if not the, most active and helpful fleeters in our faction, whenever a dev was needed for the IFV, or any other branch, you were there posting, even if it is your third in a week. Every dominion and faction event that I can recall you were there, playing the part like a pro. You were also very fair in your writing, if you made a move that was too over the line, you made the fair concession (For instance Kaeshana) and played nicely as best you could.
To summarize, I have nothing but good words for you the writer, and your marvelous character, and I hope you do not follow in my fallacies and keep on fleeting, even if it isn't for the FO, you are a great part of the Chaos fleeting community (In my mind at least) and it would not be the same without you.
Good job, Carlyle Rausgeber.