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Azaloth Tostrix

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Several feathered variants
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"Dragon" variant
 
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
 
Intent: To create a viable biological alternative to jet packs for personal flight.
 
Image Source: (In order of apperance)
 
Canon Link: N/A
 
Restricted Missions: N/A
 
Primary Source: N/A
 
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
 
 
Model: Valkyrie wings
 
Affiliation: Closed-Market
 
Modularity: None, cosmetic options available on initial purchase only
 
Production: Mass-Produced
 
Material: Cloned tissues
 
SPECIAL FEATURES
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DETAILED SPECIAL FEATURES
The wings are not merely cosmetic, they give the owner the ability for on demand flight limited only by the user's stamina.
 
Strengths:
 
- Long term flight: The user can fly at a walking speed for just as long as they can walk, lasting for far longer than conventional jet packs
 
Weaknesses :
 
- Does this dress make my wings look fat?: The wings do not fit under normal armour, while most can be easily adapted it takes time to do so and is not possible to do in the field.
 
 
DESCRIPTION
Only some races make truly experience the joys of flight, but why should the rest of us be forced to endure with cheap facsimiles, well that time has come to an end, now anyone with a few credits to throw around can truly experience flight. Using the muscle and bone structure of the Stenax and S'kytri as a base Azaloth Medical Enterprises has successfully engineered a solution, the Valkyrie Wings are able to be attached below the shoulder blade of any bipedal species, or can be used to augment the useless wings of flightless races whom have yet to lose their wings to evolution so that they might again be able to take to the skies.

Edited by Azaloth Tostrix, 14 May 2017 - 02:21 PM.


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Felix Hardy

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Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.


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Felix Hardy

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Azaloth Tostrix

 

Looks all good to me.

 

Tai Fa


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Felix Hardy

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Awesome. Pending Factory Mentor Review.

Jamie Pyne Raziel


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Darth Saarai

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Azaloth Tostrix

 

The concept itself is not an issue in my mind.

 

It is similar to some of the biot analogue we have had that give alternatives to the regular technological options we got. That being said, I will need you to add a few more worthwhile weaknesses to this.

 

Both repulsor-packs as the more stereotypical jetpack have substantial weaknesses in their design.

 

For example, these wings are likely quite vulnerable and large targets, that is one weakness you could add. Please give me three fleshed-out weaknesses and we will take it from there.



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Darth Saarai

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I am archiving this submission for inactivity. Please PM the Factory Admin or RPJs, if you wish to have it return to the factory.



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Darth Saarai

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Moved to Factory Archives - If you want to remove from the archives, please feel free to tag Raziel, Jamie, or Cira.