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Connor Harrison

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: A cybernetic arm for Connor after his own was taken by a lightsaber blade
Image Source: https://s-media-cach...7c1a45ba97c.jpg
Canon Link: N/A
Restricted Missions: http://starwarsrp.ne...elf-immolation/
Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer: Connor Harrison / Matsu Xiangu’s scientists
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Connor Harrison
Modularity: Small modifications can be made, with elements replaced if damaged or worn / faulty
Production: Unique
Material: Cortosis, durasteel, cybernetic components

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Classification: Artificial limb
Weight: 3kg
Quality: 5

SPECIAL FEATURES:
Cortosis offers strong resistance against most forms of damage, including lightsabers, blaster fire, slugs, and melee attacks.

Strengths:
- Resistant to light forms of damage (lightsabers, blaster fire and melee attacks) due to the cortosis-weave overlay on the limb.
- EMP/Ion resistant due to a built in shield which operates when an external hit causes the electric charges within the shield's conducting material to be distributed such that they cancel the field's effect in the cage's interior, in this case, the circuitry of the arm
- Heightened strength from cybernetic enhancement

Weaknesses:
- Non-resistant to heavy damage (direct lightsaber attack, heavy blaster fire) as cortosis can crack and weaken
- Limited movement as not part of his natural body

DESCRIPTION
In a final confrontation with Matsu Xiangu, Connor Harrison suffered a number of physical and mental wounds that left the shell of the former Jedi Master broken and beaten.

One such wound was the loss of his lower left arm from a lightsaber strike. When Connor’s broken body was returned to Matsu and her team to encourage the manifestation of the Dark Side to grow in him and take over his body, they removed the arm and replaced with a dark black cybernetic limb.

Left uncovered with synthetic flesh as a reminder of his sacrifice and his lack of humanity now he serves the Dark Side, Connor will act as a servant of the Force and the enhanced strength of the arm and protection of the Cortosis will be a welcome aid in doing so.

Edited by Connor Harrison, 25 July 2017 - 10:12 AM.


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Rusty

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<p>Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.</p>

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Howdy. My name is Rusty and I'll be happy to...[dramatic pause]...give you a hand with this submission.

Couple of minor things to clear up. Firstly:

Quality: 2


Seems kinda low. Normal clothes have a value of 1, so 2 would basically be pants with a little extra starch in them. Given that you've got cortosis in there, this should be much higher.

Speaking of...

SPECIAL FEATURES:
Cortosis offers strong resistance against most forms of damage, including lightsabers, blaster fire, slugs, and melee attacks.


Unprocessed cortosis is brittle and fairly useless for armor. Different processes were used to make it worthwhile, and each one had different properties. Would you mind clarifying which method you used here?





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Rusty Thanks for that - made a couple of tweaks to hopefully address this. :)

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Cortosis weave does the trick. Thanks much.

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<p>Awesome. Pending Factory Mentor Review.<br /><br />Jamie Pyne @Raziel</p>

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Connor Harrison | Rusty

 

What makes this EMP/ION resistant? You'll want to add something to the materials section to cover this strength.


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Jamie Pyne Neglected that part. Apologies. Edited in.

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Approved.

 

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Edited by Jamie Pyne, 25 July 2017 - 10:17 AM.

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