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Lothar Lundgren

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

 

  • Intent: To create a personal weapon for Lothar Lundgren.
  • Image Source: N/A
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Restricted Missions: N/A.
  • Primary Source: N/A.

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

  • Manufacturer: Lothar Lundgren
  • Model: Odiiran.
  • Affiliation: Individual Character Name (Lothar Lundgren.)
  • Modularity: No.
  • ProductionUnique 
  • Material: Durasteel, energy crystal, hilt materials.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

  • Classification: One/Two Handed Sword.
  • Size:  Large
  • Weight: Heavy

SPECIAL FEATURES

  • Force-Imbued: This is a force-imbued blade.
  • Hand Crafted: Lothar Lundgren handmade this weapon just for himself.

Strengths:

  • Force-Imbued: Lothar has force imbued Odiiran, giving the blade a glowing white hue.
  • Very Sharp: Like most other force-imbued weapons, Odiiran is quite sharp. The blade is slow to dull as well.

Weaknesses:

  • Heavy: Odiiran is a heavy blade. Any species smaller than a Valkryi would struggle wielding the blade one handed.

DESCRIPTION

Lothar Lundgren forged and imbued this blade himself, with some help from Thorve Emberfall, the lead blacksmith for the Je'daii Order. Lothar created this blade to complete one of his Trials for the Je'daii Order, which he needs to do in order to continue onto the next step of Je'daii Ranger. The Valkryi meditated on the blade after forging it, connecting the blade, the energy crystal within, and himself all together. This is where the white hue emanating from the blade originates from. The most notable limitation of this blade is it's weight. A being smaller than Lothar would have extreme difficulty wielding the blade one handed. Odiiran will be Lothar's primary weapon, as it bears resemblance to a traditional Valkryi weapon. 


Edited by Lothar Lundgren, 13 January 2018 - 01:54 AM.

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Under Review.


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Lothar Lundgren

 

This looks fine but I just want to confirm that the only effect of the imbuement is the glowing, correct?


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Lothar Lundgren

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Jamie Pyne

 

I was under the impression that force imbuement also made the blade stronger, citing here under "Description."


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Lothar Lundgren

 

You will need to add whatever specific function of Force Imbuement you are using to the Strengths section as it can do a varying degree of things that can apply here.


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Lothar Lundgren

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Jamie Pyne

 

Edited.


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Lothar Lundgren

 

I'm not sure that your edits went through, unless I am missing what was changed?


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Lothar Lundgren

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Jamie Pyne

I added very sharp to the strengths.

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Lothar Lundgren Oh! I apologize.


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Approved.


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