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Tenzin Olcron

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To aid Tenzin in battle situations on his mission.
Image Credit: ThomasBlack1 (Links under each character below)

Role: This is the special unit for Tenzin Olcron.Since Tenzin is the General of the Challenger (their ship) and the Jedi Master in Charge, he is also in charge of this squadron. 
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GENERAL INFORMATION
Unit Name: The Tanto Squadron (Troopers)
Affiliation: Tenzin Olcron and the Iron Lotus
Classification: Combat Squadron, there is a little bit of everything on this team.
Equipment:

 

 

COMBAT INFORMATION
Availability: Unique, There are 10 soldiers in this squadron and they are all elite in their own way.
Deployment: Limited, They can be sent anywhere from 1-10
Strengths:

  • Excellent in close combat
  • Sharpshooters
  • Combat Awareness
  • Follow Orders

Weaknesses:

  • Personalities Can Collide
  • Not Ideal for Undercover Missions

 

 

Description: These were soldiers that were originally slaves.They were forced to learn to fight and eventually be sold as mercenaries or body guards.They spent their whole life training and on the day of being sold, a man bought all of them for a price the seller couldn't refuse.When the sale went private their Slaver was murdered in front of them.From there they were given freedom, but was offered a job as a soldier for the individual who freed them.Without hesitation this group of trained soldiers agreed happily and haven't looked back since.

 

 

ALL MEMBERS OF TANTO SQUADRON:

 

Commander Toro
Wraps
Clubs
Maze
Dice (13)
Bright
Chips
Cleaver
Stripe
Drake

 


Edited by Tenzin Olcron, 18 January 2018 - 09:40 AM.


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Feeto Chivaro

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Tenzin Olcron

 

Under review.

Under review.


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Feeto Chivaro

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Tenzin Olcron

 

NPC Combat Unit Template This template should be used to construct combat units and is ideal for mercenary groups, military combat groups, private sector forces, royal protection details, and other combat units with specific tasks/missions/designations that make up a larger cohesive army for factions. This template is NOT for large scale combat units or entire armies.

 

Can you please remove this from the submission? It doesn't need to be included. 

 

Image Credit: ThomasBlack1

 

You will also need to include links to the pages where each of these images is hosted.


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Tenzin Olcron

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Linked to every picture and deleted.  

 

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Tenzin Olcron

 

Availability: Rare, There are 10 soldiers in this squadron and they are all elite in their own way.

Deployment: Minor, They can be sent anywhere from 1-10

 

Given the nature of this submission, you should change availability to Unique and Deployment to Limited.


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Tenzin Olcron

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Fixed

 

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Tenzin Olcron

 

Strengths & Weaknesses: This unit is very strong alone and together.They all have somewhat unique traits that make them good in certain situations.If the wrong soldier is to be put in the wrong situation, then they would be vulnerable.Strategy is key and if it is correctly implemented in missions, then success is at a higher percentage than failure.Their armor is strong and can prevent minor blasts, but if a standard blaster hits the same place twice then it can penetrate the armor and cause great damage.

 

I'm afraid this is going to need more development. Please list the individual strengths and weaknesses this unit has in combat situations. Use bullet points if that's easier.


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Tenzin Olcron

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Feeto Chivaro Does that work?



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Armor Protects from Minor Blasts, making multiple blasts or heavy blasts fatal

 

You can remove this, as it would be more appropriate for a factory submission than a codex one.


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Tenzin Olcron

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Feeto Chivaro Okay, removed!



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Approved, pending secondary.


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Approved


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