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Bambi

Bambi

    A little slow, but I get there in the end

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Just what it says on the tin!

 

How's my roleplay? What needs work? IC, OOC, my characters, storylines, ideas, grammar? I wanna hear it all! I want to know what you guys like, what's been working, and what I can work on to become better. (Me? Competitive? Nah...) I would really love to hear whatever you have to say on my RP, I promise I can take it. 

 

I've been meaning to put up a thread like this for a while now, but seeing as I've been around for a little while now. So come on, you know you want to... so hit me~!



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Zephyr Carrick

Zephyr Carrick

    Run'Katkta Ohvita

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*Slaps* You asked for it. 

 

On a more serious note, I have been writing with you on various characters with various stories we have had, and I have enjoyed all of it. I really like your writing style(Totally didn't convince you to write in first person), and I also want to see more before I can give you anything heavier on how your writing is going. 



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Kaine Australis

Kaine Australis

    Coopers Cooler

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Bambi

Love your work, totally unbiased and nothing to do with any extra-curricular activities that may or may not have involved a hot tub.
I like your writing style, and i dont usually enjoy firstperson, but i do enjoy your stuff. You write very well.


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Rex Taff

Rex Taff

    jatne beskar'ad master

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Bambi

After reading your last character Bio, I have nothing to say you are amazing keep up the good work


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Aspri

Aspri

    Fallen Angel

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Bambi <3 that is all


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Chikako Liona

Chikako Liona

    Oh My

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10/10/10 Bambi


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