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Jemimah-class Heavy Carrier - The "Sarai"

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Tamar M'Raki

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create the imperial capital ship of the Mikkoni Empire and royal family that participates in Mikko's Military Defense.
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION

  • Manufacturer: Scientists of Mikko and technicians of the Confederacy of Independent Systems.
  • Model: Jemimah-class Heavy Carrier
  • Affiliation: Tamar M'Raki; Confederacy of Independent Systems
  • Production: Unique

  • Material: Reflec coated Matrix Armor Plating; Agrinium Reactor Core Coating; Quadanium Frame; Reflective coating

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

STANDARD FEATURES

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

 

Strengths:

  • Surprise: Coated in reflec, reflective plating and built with a number of anti-detection systems the Sarai comes just shy of invisible with the lack of any actual heavy duty stealth technology. It is not impossible to detect, due to it's size, but if one is not actively searching for it it is capable of getting the drop on it's targets.
  • Swarm Protocol: Where the Sarai fails to present in speed and maneuverability she makes up in sheer quantity of complimenting fighters; the fighters themselves being a deadly weapon on their own by design.
  • Full Automation: With the implementation of a Heuristic Processor the Sarai is fully capable of going into full automation and operate on a skeleton crew should the situation prove dire enough to warrant such a procedure.
  • Heavy Duty Defense: Equipped with a "The Aegis" class Shield Generator and a large number of advanced battery emplacements, what the Sarai lacks in offensive intensity it converts to defensive efficiency.
     

Weaknesses:

  • Volatile Reactor: While the implementation, and construction to compensate for it, of a Daedalus Reactor theoretically provides a vast amount of energy there is an ever present risk. Should the reactor be damaged, sabotaged or any of the constructed software and hardware limitations be changed voluntarily or involuntarily the Sarai could systematically disintegrate into nothing.
  • Ion Problems: While the Sarai utilizes the highly efficient "The Aegis" shield generator it does not boast efficient resistance to ion and electromagnetic damage. As such the vessel is vulnerable to such attacks and that leads to other problems.
  • Coarse Correction: Due to it's size and number of systems devoted to other, more important, aspects the Sarai lacks significantly in the areas of speed and maneuverability. In combat it relies heavily on it's emplacements due to it's minimal ability to reposition itself and avoid fire from enemy vessels.
  • Compliment Please: While the Sarai is capable of defending itself, it's abysmal ability to reposition itself in regards to enemy location requires it to be complimented with other vessels to provide it with a proper line of defense against vessels attacking its blind spots (fore and aft); this is due in part to the fact that many of it's weapons are located along it's sides.
  • Command Bridge: While it is not an immediately dangerous problem, it is a glaring flaw in the construction of the Sarai in it's placement as a prototype for a future line. The command bridge is located towards the back of the vessel's surface and surrounded by emplacements for this reason.

Description: There was little hesitation in putting forward the Emperor's decree to bolster their military and defense forces. The project served as both a test for future production for the Confederacy of Independent Systems main military force and a defense of their home. Solomon recognized the technological prowess of those outside their worlds borders in the galaxy and constantly sought to advance Mikko with their cooperation.

The Sarai was a project overseen directly by crown princess Tamar M'Raki and the Emperor himself; a warship dedicated to the defense of the planet they called home. A stepping stone in the direction of providing similar ships to the Confederacy the Sarai served alongside the Zedekiah-class Defense Station and the Solomon-class Furnace Walker as a show of power and technological prowess on part of the Mikkoni Empire.


Edited by Tamar M'Raki, 02 April 2018 - 12:13 AM.

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Under Review.


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Tamar M'Raki, this is about two ratings too high. Please lower two ratings from wherever you'd like.


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Adjusted defense to Very High and Hyperdrive to Very Slow; I also adjusted the fighter count to the proper number as I did the math wrong.

 

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Tamar M'Raki, we typically don't include hyperdrives for rating balance purposes for capital ships since they don't typically impact the ship's combat performance. The exception for this is if the hyperdrive goes faster than average, in which case ratings must be lowered.

 

Please lower a rating from somewhere else (and with that, you can bump up the hyperdrive back up to average or slower).


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Tamar M'Raki

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Adjusted hangar and hyperdrive accordingly!

 

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Compliment Please: While the Sarai is capable of defending itself, it's abysmal ability to reposition itself in regards to enemy location requires it to be complimented with other vessels to provide it with a proper line of defense against vessels attacking its blind spots (fore and aft); this is due in part to the fact the hyper velocity cannons do not point up or down.

 

I don't see any mention of hypervelocity cannons within this sub (such as its armament listing). Is this something that was originally in an earlier draft version of this ship?


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That was entirely my mistake. I reused a weakness from my sub of the Zedekiah-class and forgot to change that clause. It's fixed now.

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Awesome. Pending Secondary Approval. Thanks! Jamie Pyne


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Approved.


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