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Akarui

"Luminous"

As seen from Aku

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: Create the home planet of my species a new RP spot to develop.
  • ​Image Credit: Planet!
  • Canon: N/A
  • Links: N/A

GENERAL INFORMATION

  • Planet Name: Akarui
  • Demonym: Akaran
  • Region: Outer Rim
  • System Name: Hikari
  • System Features:
    • Sun: Hikaru Prime; Main Sequence star, tinted a pale blue
    • Orbital Position: First/Second (Habitable zone), reason being, Hikaru San and its orbital neighbor, Hana Kin, have oblong orbital paths, and opposing orbit directions, in which the planets switch positions halfway through the orbital period. In passing, Hana Kin gains its name from the fact that it briefly eclipses the sun and the corona makes the planet appear as a giant “golden flower” in the sky.
    • Orbital Period: 502 days
    • Rotational Period: 36 hours
    • Moons: Five, in order from largest to smallest; Akai Tsuki (Red Moon), Shiroi Tsuki (White Moon), Ao Tsuki (Blue Moon), and the “twins”, Yoi and Aku. Outside of this, the planet possesses a wide set of rings that maintain a geosynchronous orbit with the planet itself.
    • The Hikaru System is only home to three planetary bodies:
      • Akarui: The primary planetary body in the system.
      • Hana Kin: Another terrestrial planet in the habitable zone. This planet has an elongated, opposing orbit, with Akarui, which it trades positions with midway through the orbital period. It is another habitable world that holds no sentient life, but is scattered with unknown treasures. Shares very similar dimensions with Akarui.
      • Sakura: A Gas Supergiant towards the outer edge of the system. The massive planet really has no outstanding features, other than its pink color, but is key in the lore and mythology of the Kitsune.

Coordinates: O/60
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  • Major Imports: Nothing yet
  • Major Exports: Nothing yet

GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION

  • Gravity: 1.7 times standard
  • Class: Terrestrial
  • Diameter: 14,648 km
  • Atmosphere: Type-1, Oxygen/Nitrogen mix
  • Climate: Temperate, but more akin to a Mediterranean climate due to the large ocean and small continents. Only one desert, in the north and one polar cap, being in the south.
  • Primary Terrain: One large ocean with four main continents with a total area of 377,972 square km. From south to north; The south pole is mainly solid ice with few mountain peaks and shorelines that jut out from the thick glaciers. The first continent, directly north, lies length-wise parallel to the southern continent, covered in lush deciduous forests with a mountain chain running along its center. It is split from the second by a narrow sea. The second continent continues the pattern, except for the narrow peninsula on the east side of the land mass. The Capital is on the southern coast of this continent and is surrounded by more forests, no mountains here. The final landmass lies just off the eastern coast of the third continent, except it extends just north of the equator, with more forests in the south that rapidly turns into a sprawling desert that makes up the northern half of the landmass.
  • Major Locations:
    • Kitsuhana: The millennia old capital of the Kitsune. Located on the southern coast of the middle continent. The city has expanded over the ages into a bright and sprawling city rising from the surrounding forests and extending out into the ocean. The main hub for all things business and entertainment. Some notable locations include: The Grand Market, Kitsuhana Port, and the Royal Theatre.
    • Taiyou Citadel: Located within the capital itself, nestled within the eastern most corner, the citadel is by far the most prominent landmark within the city itself. For generations, the ruling Queens and their families have resided within it's stark white walls. The citadel can be a self-sustained bastion if needed, with powerful defenses and the Royal Guard stationed within at all times. In current times, the white citadel has somewhat darkened due to the current corrupt leadership.

POPULATION

  • Native Species: Akaran Kitsune are the main sentient species. Other flora and fauna exist that resemble non-sentient species on any number of forested planets, but most of the native species have evolved without any outside influences.
  • Immigrated Species: None
  • Population: Moderately populated in terms of primary population as compared to land mass
    • Akaran Kitsune: 37 million
    • Hisan’na (Wretched) Kitsune: 4 million
  • Demographics: With the population of Kitsune on the planet isolated from outsiders, there are no Galactic races found on the planet itself. The Hisan'na however, are outcasts from the southern regions and live primarily within the caves of the northern desert. These Wretched Kitsune differ from their regular counterparts by having devolved into primal versions of themselves while in isolation. Poor vision, muscular atrophy, and a pronounced back arch are only a few visual cues to denote one from the general populace. With the border tightly controlled, one would rarely see one.
  • Primary Languages: Kitan
  • Culture: Day-to-day life on Akarui is peaceful and not normally strife with conflict or grief. The Kitsune, being the social creatures they are, gather across the planet and converse with anyone they meet. Whether it be for business or pleasure, there is always rowdy laughter and good natured conversation in the air. They are also a people of music and will you will never go far without hearing some folk song that differs in every rendition it is performed. They have a loose religion based more around multiple Gods and Spirits that guides them in their lives. Shrines and other places of worship are scattered throughout the cities and towns.

GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY

  • Government: Totalitarian Stewardship currently in place of the regular Monarchy
  • Affiliation: Kimiko
  • Wealth: Low, compared to Galactic standards due to their isolation, the use of the barter system, and sourcing currency internally. The upper classes, however, can be easily distinguished from the average citizen.
  • Stability: With the complete subjugation of the clans, the planet has the feel of a prison world. All feel the sting of the whip when it comes to the Steward's desires and no one is safe from being tried for treason and sent to the salt mines (figuratively speaking). The nine lead clans have built quite a following of those who desire change and are awaiting the right opportunity to wage open rebellion against the Steward.
  • Freedom & Oppression: With the power hungry Steward sitting on the Throne for nearly the past four centuries with no competition, the Kitsune have lived under her thumb at the whim of her decisions for some time. Though they were once peaceful, they now live in servitude to the Throne under the watchful gaze of the Royal Guard and are treated as slaves. The desire to return to their once former glory has sparked ideas of rebellion across the planet, led, though in secret, by the strongest of the clans.

MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY

  • Military: The primary military force planet side is the Royal Guard, who maintain the only technology in the system and use it to great effect at keeping the populace under control. They also manage a handful of Old Republic-era ships used for patrolling and as physiological deterrents to keep the other clans from rebelling. The regular militia is ill-equipped compared to Galactic standards, using mainly handheld weapons such as swords and spears. The clans militias outnumber the Loyalist forces, but are outgunned due to the technological limitations.
  • Technology: Due to the isolation from the Galaxy, the Kitsune have been deprived of technology since the days of the Old Republic. The most advanced tech being from that era and being barely held together by the Royal Engineers for use by the Steward and the Royal Guard. Archaic blaster technology is scarce and only used in Royal Guard units protecting the capital and surrounding land. As far as vehicles, there are only a handful of ancient speeders that are used in the transport of personnel over long distances. Most other ground transport is by foot or pack animals.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

The legends state, that the 'Golden Fox' descended upon the planet during the creation of the universe and planted the seeds of life within the crust of Akarui...that is only legend.

The real history is rather cut and dry with the Akaran Kitsune living a relatively peaceful existence in their own little corner of the Galaxy. Keeping relatively safe from outside influences up until sometime around the Great Galactic War. An unknown Jedi Master and her Padawan were drawn to a Force disturbance on the planet. Upon realizing the sentient Kitsune, they sent word to the Republic and began trading with the people. This only lasted for a few decades, when the Republic withdrew and lost all contact and knowledge with the planet.

For the next several millennia, life continued in its own archaic way. Nothing of significance happened until the Gulag Plague, which spread throughout the Galaxy, hitting Akarui hard resulting in the death of over fifty percent of the population. This included the last actual 'Queen' who had no real successor, leaving the throne in the hands of her daughter now known as the Steward.

During her reign, she became disillusioned and power-hungry, secretly making political and social moves without the consent from the leading clans on the council. This led to a build up of friction within the council against the Steward. They began plotting rebellion, but never could actually act on their plans until Kimiko happened upon the planet in her travels.

Her chance arrival caused great cheer from the general populace, seeing the prophesied heir's return had greatly raised their spirits. But the Steward wanted no such thing to occur. Swiftly, she had Kimiko imprisoned, which sparked open rebellion from the clans, and with help of her companions, she managed to escape.

The attempted rebellion had begun, and for a time, the clan's militias had the Loyalist forces on the run. Kimiko had confronted her sister, the Steward, to a duel to decide the fate of their people's future. Ceres bested the younger and less experienced Kimiko, forcing her and the rebellious forces to retreat and lose all the ground they had gained.

Ever since then, Ceres has tightened her grip on the planet, forcing those who rose up against her into servitude. Now, the planet awaits to finally be liberated and join the Galaxy!


Edited by Kimiko, 09 June 2018 - 01:22 PM.

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Jyoti Nooran

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Kimiko Under review.



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Kimiko

 

Hello there, 

 

Overall this is a neat sub, but there are a few items to address, mostly formatting issues. 

 

 

System Features:

  • Sun: Hikaru Prime
  • Class: Terrestrial
  • Diameter: 14,648 km
  • Orbital Position: First/Second (Habitable zone), reason being, Hikaru San and its orbital neighbor, Hana Kin, have oblong orbital paths, and opposing orbit directions, in which the planets switch positions halfway through the orbital period. In passing, Hana Kin gains its name from the fact that it briefly eclipses the sun and the corona makes the planet appear as a giant “golden flower” in the sky.
  • Atmosphere: Type-1, Oxygen/Nitrogen mix
  • Orbital Period: 502 days
  • Rotational Period: 36 hours
  • Moons: Five, in order from largest to smallest; Akai Tsuki (Red Moon), Shiroi Tsuki (White Moon), Ao Tsuki (Blue Moon), and the “twins”, Yoi and Aku. Outside of this, the planet possesses a wide set of rings that maintain a geosynchronous orbit with the planet itself.
  • The Hikaru System is only home to three planetary bodies:
  • Akarui: The primary planetary body in the system.
  • Hana Kin: Another terrestrial planet in the habitable zone. This planet has an elongated, opposing orbit, with Akarui, which it trades positions with midway through the orbital period. It is another habitable world that holds no sentient life, but is scattered with unknown treasures. Shares very similar dimensions with Akarui.
  • Sakura: A Gas Supergiant towards the outer edge of the system. The massive planet really has no outstanding features, other than its pink color, but is key in the lore and mythology of the Kitsune.

 

 

Could you reorganize this section to make features specific to Akarui more clear? Some of the information on Akurai specifically is better suited for the geographic section, and the atmospheric section will need to be moved in keeping with the template. 

If you don't mind, then I can move things around for you as a matter of convenience. 

Also, what kind of star is Hikaru Prime? 
 

 

  • Grove of the Gods: A sacred spot in the southern mountains, claimed to be where the entire civilization originated from when the Gods descended upon the planet to bring it to life. Members with exceptional 'powers' make a pilgrimage to the grove and meditate to gain it's knowledge and secrets and return as leaders among the people. Currently within the domain of the Toujou clan.

 

I'd like to see some more detail here about your Force Nexus, like alignment, and any specific effects it may have on individuals within its presence. 
 

Population: Moderately populated in terms of primary population as compared to land mass

  • Akaran Kitsune: 37 million
  • Hisan’na (Wretched) Kitsune: 4 million

 


Can you provide links for these species referenced? 
 

 

  • Affiliation: Kimiko, ORC

 


Please hyperlink your character profile and the ORC homepage for reference purposes. 


Edited by Jyoti Nooran, 31 May 2018 - 11:14 PM.


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Kimiko

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Jyoti Nooran

 

Hello! And thank you so much! Believe it or not, this has been in the works for over a year. I do have a few questions on the points you highlighted (numbered for convenience).

 

1. Which parts specifically would need to be shifted around? I would like to try my hand at fixing before troubling you with it :)

 

2. I need to figure that out, where should the information go?

 

3. Roger roger.

 

4. I thought the planet was to be approved prior to species submission? I have the race in the works.

 

5. Going to take ORC out due the planet being targeted for a dom once approved if that's okay?


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Jyoti Nooran

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Kimiko
 

1. Which parts specifically would need to be shifted around? I would like to try my hand at fixing before troubling you with it

 

I see the edits that you've made to the section, and these are mostly fine. I just need you to drop the atmosphere field down in the Geographic Information Section.

 

2. I need to figure that out, where should the information go?

 

You can expand on all the effects of the Grove in the Major Location section. 

 

4. I thought the planet was to be approved prior to species submission? I have the race in the works.

 

It's either or really, I just wanted to see if you already had a species ready to link. After you have successfully submitted the species, please be sure to have them hyperlinked in this sub. 
 

5. Going to take ORC out due the planet being targeted for a dom once approved if that's okay?

 

That's fine. 


Edited by Jyoti Nooran, 04 June 2018 - 12:28 PM.


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Kimiko

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Jyoti Nooran

 

Okie dokie...I think that should do it...

 

Ready for inspection!


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Jyoti Nooran

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Kimiko

 

Thank you for the edits. 

Approved, pending secondary.
 

Edit: I initially overlooked this, but you'll need to complete a dev thread for the Force Nexus as per our rules on restricted and banned items. Once I have that, then I can stamp this. 


Edited by Jyoti Nooran, 08 June 2018 - 01:31 AM.


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Kimiko

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Removed and will add once the dom is complete.


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Alright, that's perfect. 

Approved, pending secondary. 



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Approved.