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Jaster of Clan Awaud

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent:  Create a Crystal that can purify a Dark Side User

  • Image Source: [X]

  • Primary Source: [X]

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

  • Name: Memory Purification Crystal (Kings Crystal)

  • Manufacturer: Ancient Relic

  • Affiliation: Jaster Awaud

  • Homeworld (optional): Galactic Core

  • Production: Unique

  • Modularity: None

  • Material: Force Crystal, Force Alchemy 

PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS

  • Classification: Crystal

  • Weight: Light

  • Resistances:

    • Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): High

    • Kinetic: High

    • Lightsabers: High

    • Dark Side Force: High

    • Light Side Force: Very Weak

  • Color: Crystal Clear

SPECIAL FEATURES

  • Forces the Victim to relive vivid memories of peace and happiness in an instance.

  • Resistance to all forms of damage to the crystal form, Ancient Force Alchemy is its cause.

  • Switching Force Alignment is up to the Character

Strengths:

  • Purifies a Force User to regain their grasp of the Light Side of the Force

  • Resistant due to Force Alchemy

Weaknesses:

  • Chose to return to the Dark Side of the Force is to the Victim, the Crystal does not force the user to return to the Light

  • Crystal does need to charge between uses, must be charged at a concentrated area of Force Pool such as a Nexus or Altar of the Force.

DESCRIPTION

 This History of the Crystal is not well known, only that it is a naturally forming crystal that is unique in its properties. Found by Jaster Awaud while exploring the center of the galaxy in a mystical nebula. Jaster did not know what the crystal did, but finding such a rare object forced Jaster to bring the object back to the corporate headquarters.

 

 After testing on a small control group of Force Users that were being kept as test subjects and prisoners in the recent conflict with the Sith Empire. The findings were interesting to say the least. Those who were exposed to the power of the crystal seemed to enter a state of paralysis. The Subjects were frozen in place with arms at their sides as they relive some moments of their life where they served in the light. That spark of light has shown signs in the subject where they become confused and are more than to be rehabilitated. The experiment have shown that none of the test subjects were able to become Light Side Users, but renouncing their ways of murder and tyrannical ways. This has shown that they are within the realm of rehabilitation if they choose to do so.

 

 The object also does not require a force user to use such a took. A simple electrical charge to the base of the crystal as shown to activate its nature.


Edited by Jaster of Clan Awaud, 14 July 2018 - 05:04 PM.


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Ria Misrani

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Under Review.



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Jaster of Clan Awaud

 

After a review of the submission there's several items I want discuss.

 

But first, I would like an elaboration on how the crystal itself has the resistances that it does namely to blasters, kinetic weapons and lightsabers. Was it made with lightsaber resistant materials? Did it incorporate minerals that are somehow highly resistant to kinetic weapons and blasts? And if all of this is true then it needs to be reflected in the special features as well as strengths and then you need to provide weaknesses to reflect the strengths. Let me know what you come with and I'll get another look and we can proceed to the next point.



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First time making a Force Artifact. Edited*



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Jaster of Clan Awaud

 

Something I do want to note, because you cannot force a writer into something that they do not want. I ask that you please include a note, that this cannot force a dark side aligned character into becoming a light side aligned character as a disclaimer. Once this is done let me know and I'll get another look at it!


Edited by Ria Misrani, 10 July 2018 - 12:48 AM.
redundancy in edit request


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Edited*



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Jaster of Clan Awaud

 

Last thing and then I can send this forward, please include your 'high' resistances as a strength via Force Alchemy and then we should be good to go.



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Edited*



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Awesome. Pending Secondary Approval. Thanks! Jamie Pyne



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Forces the Victim to relive vivid memories of peace and happiness and forces a dark side user to loose momentary access to the Dark Side of the Force (1-2 min).

Your judge mentioned that switching alignments can't be forced, neither can the above. 


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Would having the victim loose the ability to use the force at all as they relive those memories?



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Would having the victim loose the ability to use the force at all as they relive those memories?

You can't write damage/effects on another writer.

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Lily Kuhn

 

Edited*



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Approved.


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