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Mythos

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"Command that mountain to move in My name and it shall be so"
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

 

  • Intent:  Have Mythos create something for his personal use. Something Iconic.
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION

  • Name: The Spear of Mythos Or as it is known by the tribe of Nahilium. The Star Scepter. 
  • Manufacturer: Mythos
  • Affiliation: Mythos
  • Modularity:  No
  • Production: Unique

  • Material: Phirk. Alchemized Ebony. Lava Crystal and Kyber Crystal. 

    Size: Two Handed
    Length: -2.8 Meters height of the Spear
    -40cm is the length of the Cutting Edge.
    -1 1/2 cm Thick overall. 
    Weight: 19kg

    Effective Range: Battlefield 

    Rate of Fire: Single Blast

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

  • Classification: Artifact/Spear/Thing? Wabbajack. Idk on this one Judge Hence why the template looks like Willy Wonka's house. 
  • Size:  Large
  • Weight: Heavy

Special Features / Abilities 

- Alter Environment Aura (Lava) 

- Oppressive Nexus 

- Handle and grip on four places in the spear 

- Collapsible 

- Combat pommel with second crystal. (Kyber) 
 

Strengths:

The Spirit of Angramar- The Spear has it's own aura around it altering the very weather around it to be most of the time chaotic. It holds the spirit of a Smoke Demon created from the life essence of the moon of Angramar and then captured and enslaved inside the Lava Crystal at the blade. The Sheer power of the spirit trapped inside the spear gives the wielder incredible control over the weather around him. 

Oppression Nexus- Using the teaching of the Sith Lord Adas through the Axe of Adas, Mythos creates this, his ultimate creation, the nexus it sports is special. Not only does it give him the power of a dark side nexus, any lightsider that comes within 5 meters of the spear is instantly bombarded with the flashes of the battle of Atrisia and the battles of Ancient Korriban. A mix between the mental harm done by both the skull and the axe, both keys to creating this weapon. In addition to this, abilities specifically attuned to the light side of the force becomes dampened in this 5 meter radius and standing in the radius and not being attuned to the darkside can downright cause nausea. 

Designed by a Juyo Specialist- The spear is still very much a combat weapon. It breaks down into two blades; one designed to hack and cleave and the other to thrust and puncture. It will deflect blaster fire but redirecting them back is incredibly difficult even for Mythos himself. In a combat training eviorment Mythos accurately deflected a single blaster bolt back to the training droid that shot it in an entire training day. it is possible but incredibly hard, much like the Rudis deflecting blaster bolts alone is difficult. 

Actual Lighting! Fear the power of nature's wrath!- The main boon given by the spear is an easy manipulation of the environment but it does this so well that a Sith Lord with a powerful enough hand for Sith Lightning can conjure actual lightning to strike his foes. Lightning from nature is much different than sith lightning and the spear allows the user to simply point and bash their enemies with lightning but this has to follow the laws of science and nature. It is impossible to do indoors or in space. The atmosphere needs to allow it. The victim must have ground for electricity to travel from the clouds to the victim ect. Important to note that casting a single bolt of lightning takes almost perfect focus and taxes the user greatly, it is highly unlikely that any humanoid can cast more than four. 

Range- Lightabers are shorter than this weapon as are the majority of weapons in the galaxy that warriors use to engage in close quarter combat. 

The Light Hidden Within the Darkness- Lady Kay Helped Mythos bless one of his blades and he was careful to keep it in a place where it would be free from any corruption. With Her help he was able to imbue the blue kyber crystal with the Light of the Jedi. On the Pommel of the weapon is the blue crystal isolated and insulated with several layers of Terentatek leather and oil. Alchemy and rituals keep the darkness away from it and it remains there pure, as a counter balance to one of the most evil weapons in the galaxy. There must always be balance or so Mythos always says. 

Devourer of the weak- It feeds on the souls of the weak willed making it stronger however the amount of souls the blade would need to consume in order for it to actually grow in any palpable way is impractical. For this to come into play the blade has to physically kill the target with the blade, blood must soak the Phirk. Hundreds killed this way won't even make a small increment, it would takes thousands upon thousands. Mythos considers it a waste of time. 

Weaknesses:

Nuclear Heat- The Oppression Nexus is something Jedi can focus and detect in Meditation across the galaxy with ease. It is a known dot in the galaxy in the mind's of those attuned to the light as is the Suns to Tatooine natives. If you seek to destroy this evil it will never be hard to find, nothing so benign can possibly hide. 

Impractical weapon- As a weapon a spear is impractical, hard to fit into most vehicles because of it's size, small corridors, tunnels ect. 

Heavy- Even for it's size it is a heavy weapon. It's material is normally light but the heavy Alchemy on the weapon makes each part feel like lead pumped with cement inside. At least it's got some blunt trauma.

This Ain't Kansas No More Dorothy and That's not Toto. That's a tree branch flying at ya at 120 mph.- Having a literal Storm around you at all times is bad for your health to say the very least. The aura around the spear is constant, even in space the transport of this weapon is extremely hazardous. The control it gives you over your environment becomes a curse quickly as you must use it constantly in order to survive the storm which you have now become the eye of. What in normal combat or even walking could be considered a "Loss In Concentration" with the spear it quickly becomes a matter of life and death as a rouge tree bark flying at 60mph may skewer you like kebab or worse, be struck by your own bolts of lightning. 

Only the Mighty- It takes a serious amount of willpower and physical strength to wield this weapon alone. To use it effectively in combat it takes a truly experienced Sith Lord with knowledge on the weapon. It taxes even the most worthy and qualified to the point where if battles drag on for longer than five minutes they might not have any stamina left. Using it at full power for more than six minutes is impossible for anyone. 

A monster inside seeks revenge- Angramar lives tortured inside the spear. Should the seal be broken and he be set free Angramar would seek to exact punishment for he who cast him into such a fate. 

?- It has inside the Lava crystal a piece of the Mysterious Ancient Eye found in Ankghypt. This is one fragment of an artifact of untold power but as of now it's effects seem unknown or hidden. 
 
DESCRIPTION
Very few things alchemically speaking Mythos created other than Sith Spawn and the odd weapon here or there. Yet Mythos was taught by the best, King Adas in the Axe of Adas through all his years wielding it slowly but surely began teaching him his secrets and Mythos learned but did not execute. It was later he would come to have his Rudis, created by the Dark lord of the Sith himself and the Wrath. It's design also fueling his own ideas but again, he refrained from actually putting them into place... no.... He still needed more than just that. 

After living years as a hermit in Midvinter, leaning their craft he discovered their ability to isolate crystals and metals to create an even more powerful version of durasteel and the steel known in the galaxy. Valkyr steel, the best blades in the galaxy according to some and Mythos himself had faced one in battle before.  Years he spent there honing his craft as a blacksmith, knowing from Adas that half of the work of Alchemy was in itself creating the weapon, the physical part, the part of the warrior before the force. The first step was simple but it took him so many years to achieve because it took so many years for the opportunity to arise. Mythos killed his own son and used his soul as the first meal of the spear during an invasion of The Resurgent Empire. The blade had been tempered with the steel of one Mythos had loved. In Tyfferra would the blood of the enemy come. Once the steel had passed both those bloods it was time for the final pieces to come together. 

With the help of Kay he had the piece of the light to place in the spear, With the Help of the Anubians he soul charged the weapon in the Black Pyramid where He, Himself came back from the dead and fueled the blade using the countless souls funneled through him by @Skrovek in his world of Erebos. After all these years he was so close but it still needed a living entity inside it much like the Axe of Adas needed one to be so powerful. Adas said it himself. "The Weapon must have a host, willing or unwilling matters not" 

Mythos sought not to seek out a powerful entity but to create one and then enslave it. With the help of Warok the Defiler he was able to do just that. He took the living essence of his own world and gave it form through a Sith Ritual, then took that form manifest and bound it to the crystal to serve as the host of the spear.

​With all the pieces in place Mythos traveled far to the moon of Nahilium, to a tribe of beings of the Nachata. Their is the prophecy that here is where the "spear that bleeds the sky" will be made. Mythos was not there for prophecy, he was there to caatch a solar flare that would hit an Asteroid he had the pieces on. Only the heat of that flare would soften the metal to the point it could be molded. So with the fire of a star, for sixty nine days and nights Mythos carved the spear using the Axe of Adas as a hammer of sorts. When he emerged, the moon was drowned in thunder and lightning. This moon is located in asector of the galaxy close to the Sii-Ruuvi cluster unmarked in any star chart Mythos had seen. 


Now complete the spear rests upon his shoulder in the ranks of the Sith Empire as much a banner of status and power and authority as it is one of combat and martial prowess. 
 


Edited by Mythos, 16 July 2018 - 02:21 AM.

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Under Review.


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Hey! I'll be your friendly neighborhood factory judge today.

 

So first thing i'm noticing. You mention having Stygian crystals, do you mean Stygium?

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Adron Malvern Roger that i think i got most of em. 


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So I'm seeing Phrik, Alchemized Ebony, and Stygium Crystals. That makes 3 Restricted Materials. Per the RM rules you can only have 2 RM within a submission. Please adjust the submission to be in accordance with this rule.

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Sorry I'm late! Fixed it. Please let me know if there are any references to the Stygium crystal i left out. Also. Since The Effects of Stygium are only in effect on Ships would it be cool if we left it in? I just like em cause of their nature. Also a lot of the things in this thread are not linked, i could do that for some of them. Like that with Warok the Defiler ect. It's just tedious looking for em XD 
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So sorry for the late response.

 

I will have a response for you tonight.

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So I'm a little unconvinced on the Light side Imbued Kyber crystal as well as the entire staff being imbued with Sith Alchemy.

So the staff was alchemized to keep the darkness away from the crystal?
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Adron Malvern No worries! 13 hour flight today so no hurry haha! I was making the Light side of the Crystal as more of a Flavor effect than anything. Basically Terentatek Leather and Blessed oil to put the Crystal in the weapon, blessed with the light from the moment Kay helped him with it.

The idea is for it to arrive and exist within this weapon and maintain it's purity. I was planning to use it in situations where instead of a Torch i would use a Small Version of Force Light to go into a dark dungeon and stuff like that. "Whoa that was cool" Moments. Impractical but who needs efficiency when you have cool points!? 

You think i should just scrap it tho? I can make something else with it later. 


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As it is, i believe i can allow it to proceed!

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any lightsider that comes within 5 meters of the spear is instantly bombarded with the flashes of the battle of Atrisia and the battles of Ancient Korriban

 

Please keep in mind you cannot force any damage or effects on another writer's character. 

 

That being said, approved.


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Awesome. Pending Secondary Approval. Thanks! Jamie Pyne


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Mythos | Adron Malvern

 

You may not have a Force Nexus, an alchemized item, an item imbued with Force Powers, and a Phrik material in one submission. Please review the Factory Standardized Rules, specifically related to Restricted Materials.


Edited by Jamie Pyne, 24 July 2018 - 05:01 PM.

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But i Did with My AxeJamie Pyne 

There's no way to make items as powerful as I used to make them? Can I use Dev thread? I have a lot of work i can link for this item but not enough, i can work more. 

 

If there is no way to create Items like i used to. Deny it and Archive it. Although i will state it does not seem fair That in order to create powerful items I need a time machine, if that is the case, which i hope is not 


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That axe was created in 2015, nearly three years ago at this point. The factory has changed admins twice since then, and the rules along with it. I would suggest that if you're not familiar with those changes to re-review the rules that were most recently posted as of December, 2017. Development threads have been removed from the factory as of seven months ago. Restricted Materials were reclassified to allow for two per submission depending on where they fall on the RM list. Again, I would suggest reading this list if you intend to use RM's in the future.

 

Per your request, I will archive this submission.


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Moved to Factory Archives - If you want to remove from the archives, please feel free to tag Jamie Pyne, Zef Halo or Lily Kuhn.


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