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Amidala's Lament

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Djonas Vile

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: A personal ship for Djonas Vile
  • Image Source: Joe Botardo
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

STANDARD FEATURES

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

Strengths:

  • Stealth: Equipped with a Stygium cloaking device along with several other countermeasures, the Amidala's Lament is capable of passing through star systems without being detected by even the most dedicated of sensors.
  • Defenses: The Amidala's Lament defensive capabilities are rather extensive. Strong shield technology, reinforced hull, and countermeasures out the wazoo make this ship strong enough to stand on its own in heavy combat situations.

Weaknesses:

  • Stealth Limitations: The stealth device is only capable of cloaking the ship for 10 minutes. Any longer would potentially overload the ship's systems, causing the ship to become a sitting bantha.
  • Hangar: Amidala's Lament was meant to hold only a singular shuttle sized within it's hangar bay.
  • Interior Defenses: The interior of the ship is lacking in standard defenses such as ray shields, security cameras, and the like.

Description: The Amidala's Lament is a prototype version of the N-25 Cruiser, a future project by Royal Naboo Shipwrights. After the prototype was finished, a secret entity managed to requisition the prototype for the budding crime lord, Djonas Vile. When the N-25 prototype reached Djonas' hands, many modifications and additions were brought to the table to make it truly unique. Firstly, Djonas wanted stealth, for when he needed an easy escape from troubling situations. A Stygium cloaking device was included along with several other sensor jamming systems, making the N-25 nearly invisible in any spectrum of sight. A premium paint job and some interior decorating and the Amidala's Lament was perfect for Djonas to call his own.


Edited by Djonas Vile, 15 July 2018 - 05:01 AM.

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<p>Under Review.</p>

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Djonas Vile

 

Yeah, I'm gonna need a ten post dev-

 

Almost made it through that with a straight face, pending approval dude. 


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Awesome. Pending Secondary Approval. Thanks! Jamie Pyne


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Intent: A personal ship for Djonas Vile

Length: 716 meters

 

This looks larger than the max size for a combat vessel for an individual, which is 500 meters. Is there a faction or company that you could associate this with instead?

 

Hangar:  Very Low: 1

 

From the starship template on cruisers:

Hangar: (Please provide the amount of fighters this submission can hold in it's hangar by count of Squadrons, which hold 12 average Starfighters. The higher your squadron count, the lower your Armament and number of advanced systems should be. )

  • 500 Meters: [None: - | Very Low: 0 | Low: 1 | Average: 2 | Moderate: - | High: 3 | Very High: 5 | Extreme: 6]
  • 750 Meters: [None: - | Very Low: 0 | Low: 1 | Average: 2 | Moderate: 3 | High: 4 | Very High: 7 | Extreme: 8]
  • 1000 Meters: [None: 0 | Very Low: 1 | Low: 2 | Average: 3 | Moderate: 4 | High: 5 | Very High: 9 | Extreme: 10]

I'd judge this closest to the 750 meter mark, which means that at very low, this would have no squadrons. I realize that the description states that this can only carry a single ship in its hangar bay. If you want to specify that this is something like a non-combat transport, that would be okay.

 

 

Hyperdrive Class: Very Fast: .4

 

From the template:

 

Hyperdrive Class: (The lower the number, the faster the ship. You may use decimals. [Very Slow: 10 Average: 2 | Very Fast: 0.3] Going below 1 typically requires balancing out with other weaknesses. Links: HyperdriveHyperdrive Comparisons)

 

 

Since this is faster than x1, what is being used to balance out this out?


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Gir Quee

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Djonas Vile, what's the status of this?


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Djonas Vile

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Gir Quee For some reason, didn't get a notification from you on this.

 

I meant to change the hangar part because the original length of the ship was 900 something. Edits have been made though.

 

Changed the hyperdrive to just 1.


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Hangar:  Very Low: 1

 

If you'll change this to "Low:1" to match squadron number to the rating for a vessel of this size, we'll be all set. Alternatively, this could be "Very Low: 0", which would give you an extra rating to play with somewhere else.

 

Hyperdrive Class: Very Fast: 1

 

A similar thing here too. "Very Fast" typically refers to hyperdrives below x1. At unique production level, I wouldn't have an issue with a x1 hyperdrive at the average level. 

 

If this stays at "Very Fast", we may need to lower a rating somewhere else (or keep the hangar at "Very Low:0". 


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Gir Quee Changed the Hangar to Low and the Hyperdrive to Average


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Approved.


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