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Primarch Iedolas

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THIS IS A CANNON ITEM

 

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

GENERAL INFORMATION

  • THIS IS A CANON ITEM.

  • Planet Name: Kaikielius.

  • Demonym: Kaikieli.

  • Region: Core Worlds.

  • System Name: Kaikielius System

  • System Features:

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  • Kaikielius (Celestial Body I): The seat of power in the System, and major source of both population and resources. Off planet, it is less a place for tourism and more dedicated for pure trade Planet has 365 days and rotational period of 24 hours. Pleasing in temperature, with atmosphere Type I, it’s weather reminds a lot like the one in earth. Planet has Five Moons, and one Sun, called Ka.

  • Cinto de Dios: The Asteroid belt around the planet with billions of rocks. Hard to navigate through the same, and is highly avoided by merchants that preferred to go up and down the belt. It’s name comes from a deity in the kaikieli religion that watches and protects. There is rumour of one exorgoth somewhere the belt. The asteroid is known for having great amounts of quadrillium, aluminium and alusteel.

  • Celestial Bodies I.II: The Six Moons of Kaikielius, these satellites are mostly habitable, profitable, and filled with life, the moons are called:

  • STAMPA: Type I atmosphere, a trade and farming moon. Stampa is a wild planet with forests, lakes, oceans and mountains, governed by Kaikielius, the moon has found prosperity in exporting and importing goods. Studies show caverns of crystals, fertile forests, green fields, mountains of steel, and rich inner oceans, great plantations of carababba tabac and auraspice.

  • STRUMENTU: Type II atmosphere, a mining moon. Material used for buildings and starships are mined daily in the once prosper and beautiful moon, becoming a polluted place with mining machines and factories. A moon with rich deposits of titanium, trimantium, tricopper and arcetron.

  • TREVANI: Type II atmosphere, also called Dark Daughter. Due to its orbital position, the moon receives very little light from Dios, a mining moon, rich in metals and gems, the place is a haven for and smugglers and is used as a punishment to work in it’s mines, the whole satellite has became a shipyard, and factories. Its greatest export and product being lommite and quadrenium, also with rich deposits of aurodium and hfredium.

  • MAREA: Type I atmosphere, called the Sea Moon. A place famous for its retreats, lab facilities, and research, the whole moon is covered by oceans with constant, nearly endless rains.

  • HELLAND: Type I atmosphere. A dead place. The place was transformed into a graveyard, crawling with tombs and crypts, shrines and mausoleums, where the fallen nobles of old and most renowned warriors in their history are buried in statis like slumber. Dead, but with bodies preserved through technology so that they may be seen as they were, and not how as bones and ashes.  

  • ODUR: Type III atmosphere, a sacred place. The elzeri consider the moon a place where their gods once lived alongside mortals. Covered by gases expelled by vulcanic fissures on the ground, the moon is filled with temples and shrinesused for pray and the faithful. A place rich in carbonite,

  • Coordinates: S-23, between Ashera and Reecee.

  • Major Imports: Raw materials, consumer goods, technology, luxury items, processed foods.

  • Major Exports: Refined metal (quadrillium, alusteel, titanium, trimantium, tricopper) goods (carbonite, carababba tabac and auraspice), food, pure ore (lommite and arcetron).

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GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION

  • Gravity: Standard.

  • Climate: Temperate (Most of the world is a bit more cold than hot, specially during the nights. In a comfortable way, specially in the more populated zones. The high umidity and cold winds blowing down the northern mountains, make it a sweet world to live. The planet also is familiar with standards season such as spring, summer, autumn and winter.)

  • Primary Terrain: Deep forests, high mountain grounds and inland oceans, combined with great masses of fertile grasslands and rich urban zones, with very small deserts and tundras, the planet offers hundreds, if not thousands, of locations to live.

  • Atmosphere: Type I.

  • Major Locations:

  • Old Capital, formerly known as Kesipli: The old capital of Kaikielius, before it’s relocation and construction of Mensoge. The second  greatest city, surrounded by forests and a small desert. The city still holds a magnificent look and architecture of the old glory days of house Praji, now the city has fallen under the grace and control of House Hightower.

  • The Royal Capital of Mensonge: Said to be one of the most glorious and outstanding cities in the core worlds. Mensonge was built in contrast with the farming zones, green lands and under the grace of huge mountains around the city. The royal capital received that name for hosting the Royal Palace, where the King of Kaikielius resides. More than half the population of Enfer is Elzeri, and while they lived in ground houses, now, with more wealth, they live in tall buildings.

  • The Great Palace of Enfer: Built with tall towers, a palace that varies from black and red metal and stones. Huge, with great banners of the noble houses of old that ruled the planet for many years, the palace has huge black doors that take to a gran courtyard, where practice of weapons is often seen. The great stairs in the yard lead directly to the Great Hall where lies the Sun Throne, made of crystal, both fragile and royal.

  • The Inlanders Sea: A wild and savage sea that takes over 25% of the planet. Much fishing and hunting is done in this ocean, with many types of weird life forms found. Small islands are common in the sunset.

  • The Gugugunanga: Right in the middle of the inlanders sea, there is one big island, fertile and flat. With many small keeps and castles around its extension, the island is mostly made of farmers and fishers.

 

POPULATION

  • Native Species: Human.

  • Immigrated Species: Elzeri (A Chaos Approved species) and other aliens.  

  • Population: Heavily Populated. (250 billion permanent residents).

  • Demographics:

The planet has found itself with a population of more Elzeri than humans. After centuries of mixing and breeding, the humans now hold less population than the Elzeri. Other alien races are welcome to stay, and are found such as Rufian Twi’lek, Zeltros, Miralukas, Arkanian Offshoot (Called Arkos in Kaikielius), Kaleesh, Ugnaughts and even a Vahlan clan.

- Elzeri: 50% of the general population.

- Arkanian Offshoot: 15% of the general population.

- Human: 5% of the general population.

- Vahla: Less than 3,0% of the general population.

- Kaleesh: 4% of the general population.

- Ugnughts: 10% of the general population.

- Twi’lek: 6% of the general population.

- Nagai, Rattataki, Miraluka: 6% of the general population.


  • Primary Languages: Galactic Standard, and Elzerish.

  • Culture:

OVERVIEW: A capitalist society, trade and money are the common pursuits in Kaikielius. Status and power, all those in the middle of the pyramid society desire to gain more and to make their small houses known in the great court.

DAILY LIFE: Despite the plots and common power hunger amidst those with noble titles or those that desire to grow in society. Life in Kaikielius by the common man is quite calm, the pursuit of happiness, they are taught to raise families and make them big, to ensure their lines and to make sure they will work hard for society. The King of Kaikielius has common announcements every now and then and it’s quite loved by the masses, just like those Lords and Knights with small lands and keeps around the planet. There are almost no drugs in Kaikielius and it’s system, like there are very little big crime lords in the planet. A free world, Kaikielius teaches the younglings to be true, brave, and proud, and also, most of the natives and those that live in the planet have converted to the Primal, worshiping the local deities and praying for them. One of the greatest sports in the planet is racing, and tourneys where swords and spears meet themselves in a glorious battle. Art is something quite relevant, as most inhabitants have their own art, combined with Elzeri and aliens technologies, the art in Kaikielius is a bit, somewhat, mixture of gothic with futuristic, leaving the constructions in the planet with a steampunk look for foreigners. Their deities, the Dios, are worshipped as the gods that created the whole universe and allowed the Elzeri and alien races to find a home and peace in Kaikielius. Prays and offerings are quite common in Primal sanctuaries, and once a month, the skies are filled with ships travelling to Giruvegan, to offer pray for the gods.

 

GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY

  • Government: Elective monarchy. A planet ruled by Dukes of the Nine Great Houses, the Nine Great Houses are the oldest families in each "population type" (One Arkanian Offshot great house, one elzeri great house, one vahla great house), families with old bloodlines. The Nine Great Houses control many small houses around the planet of lords and ladies. They all gather in proper time and elect their King. The Kings job is to rule Kaikielius for life, or until dismissed of his job by the majority votes of the Nine families.

  • Affiliation: Serves under the The Protectorate.

  • Wealth: High.

The planet is known for trade. Imports and exports, beyond that, the general population all have a job. The planet is the also the place where many thriving business conglomerates have their headquarters, ensuring a profitable society.  

  • Stability: High. With High law enforcements and the noble houses ensuring the law amidst its citizens, crime rate is quite low. Thievery and burglary are most common, but so rarely murders and other heinous crimes are committed. Due to the great fear of Kaikielis law for heinous crimes, such as Death Penalty for murderers and rapers, it also includes ostracism of his whole family. Or worse, to work on the mines of its mining moons, where hard work can make a man last at maximum 4 years.

  • Freedom & Oppression: Low-Medium. It's not a free world where you can curse you’re local lord or duke in the local bar, since most other citizens due work for them. Usually that ends up with big taxes on the man's family, or him being fired.

MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY

  • Military: A dedicated military power that protects the system. Divided in five great branches, those being:

  • Cavalleria: The naval forces of the Protectorate.

  • Espadas: The ground forces of the Protectorate.

  • Predators/Praetors: Those in charge of the public safety.

  • Royal Knights: Guards that protect the royal household.

  • Magisterium: In charge of ensuring the law is applied.

  • Technology: Modern. (Up to date with worlds like Alderaan and Naboo).

HISTORICAL INFORMATION:

 

This wonderful world was settled somewhat between 25,200 BBY or 25,053 BBY by Humans fleeing the horrors of war that roamed the galaxy. The locals were known as Kaikielii. An aristocratic world, Kaikielius was ruled by the noble Great Houses of Old, of which the oldest and most prominent were the Triad of House Praji, House Vahali, and House Juoni, with lesser houses vying for power. An early ruler of the planet was a member of House Praji, that was a crucial member in the signature of the Galactic Constitution, thus turning his world in a Core Founder.

 

A time in Kaikielius history know to the people as the Time of the Plenty, it was in the year 5.000 BBY when the world was heavily urbanized, with so many people in the planet, the nobles and wealthy fled to ring cities in its atmospheres, leaving the poor and citizens of the planet to its fate. Not long, with so many aliens together, a plague arrived, from somewhere the Unknown Regions of Space, brought to Kaikielius by a Hutt crime lord that want it to synthesizing it into a drug for its trade to thrive even more, soon, failures occurred and the drug turned into a deadly disease called Red Death. The plague took 8 out of 10 people, taking little more than ten years to be properly treated, when cured, the epidemic left a planet marked by death and sadness. Forcing the nobles of the Great Houses of old to return to the people to show that it was safe to live on the planet again. The ingenious Praji brought large groups of Ugnughts to live on the planet, where they themselves hired them for little more than the slave service. The reconstruction, demolition and de-urbanization of the planet was long and expensive, and soon, Kaikielius rose like one ofgreat ecological planets of the Core.

 

Once a proud world that was one of the founders of the Old Republic. Little more than 800 years ago, not long after Palpatine fell for the second time, Governor Nahdonnis Praji made himself King of Kaikielius under the New Republic banner. Until the Yuuzhan Vong war came, where the planet was found by two large flotillas, colony ships, of the Elzeri. Allowing the ships to board their planet and the people to join the big and green lands in Kaikielius, soon proved to be a mistake. As the elzeri brought weird idols and strange customs to the humans, beginning to mix with humans and creating hybrids, which made even great houses like House Juoni to have them in their bloodline. For the desire of the long lifespan of the elzeri was highly admired by the kaikieli, but as soon as those hybrids proved that they lived more than average humans, leading their houses, the lines of hybrids were, not long, totally taken by elzeri brides and heirs.

 

War rushed through this, the Praji against the elzeri, the elzeri tribes against each other, the Noble Houses turned against one another, a war for religion, for identity, for race. A greater war through the galaxy made the major powers in the galaxy to turn a blind eye for the small conflict in Kaikielius. After a decade of civil war, a great warrior rose in the planet, named Michel Gomesraji, half elzeri and half human, he defeated every single nation in the planet, murdering the last members of House Praji and declaring new Great Houses to take their place. Offering a fair solution, to have the council of Nine Great Houses chose one to rule as King or Queen for life, Michel Gomesraji became the first ruler of what was now called Alcarost. A name the population chose for they would rise from inside the planet damaged from war, only this name “Alcarost” meant Holy Land. The name stuck, and Alcarost it was called by the locals in their prays. Religion was united under the Abenzoados, in worship of the pointy ears deities, and soon, the planet slowly marched for progress, after Gomesraji died, his planet elected a new ruler. And the march for evolution began, this new King of House Stark, went on to find other alien races, like the elzeri in days past, to settle in moons and many other parts in Kaikielius, thus bringing a more diverse society, allowing those races to become nobles and thus ensuring them a equal chance of ruling Kaikielius.


For the next 700 years, the elzeri prospered and humans diminished in size, soon the world became more populated by the elzeri, and that was it. History became legend, legend became tale, and peace brought prosperity and wealth. And with the fall of the Galactic Alliance, the Conclave of nobles saw themselves alone in the core, with enemies not far, by a new movement lead by House Solidor and House Thurien, the conclave decided to vote on a new flag and new way of rule. Thus, creating the Protectorate, with the sole ideals of protecting, defending, ensuring prosperity, bringing peace to the core worlds. The Ring Cities of Kaikielius were occupied by nobles, transforming them in private states and keeps of their courts, and the world moved on.


Edited by Primarch Iedolas, 17 July 2018 - 09:33 PM.

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Alright there are a few things we need to address, so let's dive right in.

 

First, as this is a canon planet submission please add a "canon" or "canon planet" tag to your post, it is a requirement of all canon world submissions.

 

Second, please link Elzeri to the appropriate species submission in your list of races.

 

 

 

  • Major Imports: Raw materials, consumer goods, technology, luxury items, processed foods.

  • Major Exports: Refined metal, unprocessed ore, carbonite, food, technology.

 

Going to need you to list the specific metals and ores here that this system exports.

 

 

 


All paying homage and serving the eight Nine Houses in Kaikielius, those houses being selected amidst the populations spread across planet. Each population has one, up to three Small Houses, those like the Arks control at least one Great House.

 

This part of your government description lost me. Perhaps its a typo or just not worded precisely, but what exactly do you mean by "each population"? Does this mean the Small Houses control the Great Houses? I am assuming Ark is a family name, but it isn't referenced elsewhere in the submission.

 

 

There are no drugs in Kaikielius and it’s system, like there are no crime lords in the planet.

 

That is quite a statement. I would recommend changing this to "very little" or "almost none". Severe punishments can only go so far to eradicate vice.

 

And lastly, according to the canon article for Kaikielius, the planet was heavily urbanized after 5000 BBY. Granted, that was a long time ago, but I would at least like some mention in the history section about what led to the planet's return to its more pastoral roots. Are all the ring cities gone?


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Done, but could you point out to me where can i find the link about metals? The ones restricted and the ones that are not restricted?


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Here is our list of restricted materials, which are not allowed in planet submissions unless the world is an established canon resource.

 

We don't maintain our own list on the site, but here is a list of canonical SW metals and here is a list of ores. As long as they aren't on the restricted material list and their properties are understood/explained by canon, they are okay to use so long as you've explained their presence.


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Done. *fingers crossed*


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Excellent.

 

Pending Secondary Approval

 

Allyson Locke | Zeradias Mant | Irajah Ven


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Approved