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DC-15 A2 Heavy blaster rifle

- - - - - Heavy blaster rifle DC-15 A2 DCC Industries

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Richard Von

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
 
Intent:Rifle for military use within the Fel Empire.
Canon Link: N/A 
 
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
 
Manufacturer: DCC Industries http://starwarsrp.ne...dcc-industries/
Affiliation: Fel Empire
Model: DC-15 A2
Modularity: No
Production: Mass-Produced
Material: Durasteel receiver, Desh armor and heat plating, Duralloy stock, Nickel iron sights.
 
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
 
Classification: Blaster
Size:  Large
Weight: Heavy
Ammunition Type: Power cell
Ammunition Capacity: 125 Shots
Reload Speed: Average
Effective Range: Long Range
Rate of Fire: Low
Stopping Power: Very High
Recoil: High
 
SPECIAL FEATURES
 
Special padding on the Duralloy stock making it more comfortable and stable.
 
The barrel has an attachment to screw off or on for maximum customizability.
 
Under the barrel of the weapon is a flashlight that can be switched to a laser for CQC.
 
 
Strengths
 
* This heavy rifle uses amazing quality Tibanna giving it increased power and range.
 
* The gun is outlined in Desh plates and paste giving it increased armor to withstand greater damage and the paste gives it greater cooling abilities compared to the standard rifle.
 
Weaknesses
 
* This heavy rifle is rather large it has an attachment to cut off the length but it still is long and rather heavy with the added armor plating making it useless in CQC
 
* This heavy blaster has a lot of recoil and very slow fire rate the user must be at least decent strength to withstand the power behind its kick.
 
 
Description
 
This heavy blaster rifle was designed by DCC Industries for the Fel Empire to be used for military purposes, this rifle is very long and has decent weight it was designed to be a heavier version of the DC-15A blaster rifle keeping most of the physical features but modifying it to create more power and accuracy while costing mobility and fire rate. It has amazing firepower which can go through most common armors and small unarmored vehicles. This rifle has an amazing range and can be mounted with many different kinds of scopes to fit the user's needs. The barrel can be screwed off to shorten it if needed for shorter range combat it also has a mounted flashlight that can be switched to a laser for CQC accuracy its located under the barrel.

Edited by Richard Von, 17 August 2018 - 10:33 PM.

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Gir Quee

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Under Review.


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Manufacturer: DCC Industries

 

If you'll hyperlink this to the company submission page please. 

 

Size:54 inches, Large Weight: 20 LBS Heavy

 

These actually use ratings, rather than specific measurements. Here are your options for these fields per the template:

 

Size:  (Please choose a size between Very Small, SmallAverageLargeVery Large and Extreme.)

Weight: (Please choose a weight between Very Light, LightAverageHeavy, Very Heavy and Extreme.)

 

It has amazing firepower which will leave massive holes in whatever it hits going through most battle armor if it didn't penetrate completely the force of impact alone would kill a regular human

 

 

This is a bit too powerful,and it doesnt take into account different situations or different types of armor. As a suggestion, you could state that this is "designed to pierce through common battle armors". 

 

I have not seen a blaster weapon that producesenough physical impact to kill someone. While energy weapons do seem to produce some physical impact, this is a secondary effect at most, as they inflict most of their damage through thermal energy rather than kinetic impact.


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Richard Von

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Done,

 

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It has amazing firepower which will go through most common armors and have some small physical impact.

 

"Will" is another word to avoid, as again, this looks like it's dictating damage to an enemy. If you would please replace "will" with "can","designed to" , or some other wording which suggests damage.


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Richard Von

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Done, I changed it to include the mention of being able to pierce small unarmored vehicles such as speeders.

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It has amazing firepower which will go through most common armors and small unarmored vehicles.

 

This is a no-no, as it's using "will", which as I mentioned above, is not an acceptable word to use when describing damage.

 

If you want to use "designed to go trhough most common armors and unarmored vehicles", that is all right. But again, we cannot tell someone what damage is going to occur. That's ultimately up to the defending writer.


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I see i misunderstood the issue which is now fixed.

 

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Approved.