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Matsu Ike

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

SETTING INFORMATION

  • Shipyards Name: Kagawa Shipyards
  • Classification: Orbital Ring Yards
  • Location: Kallalarra
  • Affiliation: Sasori Research/Trandosha/Kashyyyk/SJO
  • Population: Heavily Staffed
  • Accessibility: Over a toxic planet within the system, they are open to seebut have defenses from the network within the system for monitoring hyperspace travel and ships pratolling the system itself to defend SJO space.
  • Description: Designed to be a massive testing and construction area. Kashyyyk provided a reasonable location to construct the shipyards. With friends she had decent relationships with, out of the way and staffed by the people who wanted the commerce building a shipyard provided. It was built using the technology developed by Sasori with a Saotome Rill Frame to provide layers and points of it with Seimei Afterglow Panels working to collect energy and give small amounts of power to use and augment the Saotome Defensive Lattice along the out Sasori Nnth hull. WIthin the interior the Sasori Agena has been used, Matsu chose the location well out fo the way of most and using weapons to set it up much like Kuat's with defenses able to defend it while ships mobile to protect it. THe concentric rings are apread around the planet and almost create the frame work of a dyson sphere allowing the Silver Jedi to maintain and work on entire fleets at a time or provide needed ships. Being connected and working with the Saotome Planetary Defense Network in the system to have monitoring and alerts.

OPERATIONS INFORMATION

  • Production: Starfighters, Passenger ships, Star Cruisers
  • Specialty: Serving as a means to design and build Sasori's custom versions of their ships, with manufacturing lines for it mass produced versions and larger bays for cruisers and dreadnoughts.
  • Output: Moderate output, with mass produced ships on lmines and personal yards for constructing lesser scale or unique vessels
  • Market: Producing ships for Sasori's ship companies Phenex and Saotome.

SECURITY
Medium: Designed with anti starfighter and raiding weapons to protect it and give it minimal protection with semi non lethal projectors for disabling attacking ships, warheads and lasers for starfighters. On the exterior they are set up spaced out and around the shipyard while the interior has a number of security systems to protect it and a keep out unauthorized personnel.

 

External Defenses

Internal Defenses

POINTS OF INTEREST
Main Offices: THe brain of the shipyards, with most of the designers and droid brains that are working to oversee the shipyards. It is one of the fundamental

 

Shipyards: Large drydocks and smaller sectional hangers. For manufacturing ships as needed up to some of the larger ships like the Shangri-La and Kiyomi. Or stations that can be built and deployed.

 

Manufacturing Lines: Built with slave circuits and droid automation to manufacture ships of the line.

 

Residential Housing: Designed using the Living Module's created for stations and facilities. The residential housing section of the station serves to hold the staffs.

 

Habitation Hubs: Built at the poles of the sphere itself, these are designed with the processing and mining faciltiies that use skyhooks and mining droids to scour the planet itself.

 

Manufacturing and Supply sections: Built with manufacturing systems to supply the station. It is mostly industrial and with external scaffolding docks to make fighters and collect supplies from mining vessels to process them. Supplying droids, security and materials across the station. A droid maker to produce the droids needed to maintain the station, rapid prototypers and

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

 

Following the Silver Order's relocation to Kashyyyk from Voss, Sasori dismantled its primary shipyards from that area and went on the move as they were now quite vulnerable to attack without the presence of the SJO.
 
While the shipwright was looking for a new location to set up its new shipyard the Silver Assembly contacted Sasori about a joint venture they had successfully brokered between the Kashyyykian and Trandoshan government, part of series massive public works project to benefit the inhabitants of the Kashhyyk system as a whole.
 
With the above support, Sasori was given permission to build an orbital ring around Kallarlarra, an uninhabited toxic world located within the inner rim of the Kashyyyk system. In exchange for allowing itself to be subject to taxation by the local governments (excluding the SJO) and providing preference to locals for employment, then the orbital ring would enjoy the full might of a dedicated naval task force for security at all times.

 

In terms of production capabilities the shipyards as owned and operated by Sasori and its different companies for all of their uses. To build up ships that can be altered for personal use, The bands and hangers of the sphere itself are filled with quarters and hangers for transporting and moving supplies. The majority of which is automated by droid brains and computer programs. Maintaining it is a biot crew that functions to fill the optimal crew requirements to run the stations.

 

The top and bottom sections of the sphere are large habitation hubs. With skyhooks to head down to the planet itself to mine with droids and equipment. The shipyards being built after most of the big events of the galaxy itself. The plague, the darkness, the netherworld, omega, and others happened before it making it at least able to have a fresh slate. The production capabilities of Sasori going with the station full force along with helping the SJO.

 

Surveying and work with the silver jedi in the system over the planet which was designated by Jyoti once as a toxic hotbed and main reason why nothing was able to use the world. Save for the droids that were being brought in to look over and helping with whatever needs the SJO have when it needs starships of their other companies repaired or tended to. THe larger civilian dreadnaughts that have been developed for evacuation and medical purposes able to be fitted in and resupplied.


Edited by Jyoti Nooran, Yesterday, 02:21 PM.
Cleaning up text in the historical information field.


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Jairus Starvald

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Under review.


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Jairus Starvald

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Matsu Ike

 

After reviewing this submission and consideration with the rest of the Codex team I am going to have to move this to the Pre-Codex.

 

Most of all there is an issue with the way the submission details the historical information and lore pertaining to the SJO. If you have specific questions you can PM either Allyson Locke or someone from the SJO staff team for assistance. I'd also consider streamlining the way the submission is written. Because right now it seems a bit convoluted and difficult to read. 

 

Once you have fixed up the submission you can tag either Allyson or a RPJ to bring it back out into the Codex.


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Matsu Ike

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Jyoti Nooran Allyson Locke if this could be moved to codex please



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This submission has been moved at the request of Matsu Ike. It's now ready to review.

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Srina Talon

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Hello Matsu Ike! I’m glad to be reviewing your shipyard. Let’s begin!

 

Overall, there is a lot of great information here, but there are some things that don’t quite make sense or could use a little bit of clarification for easy reading.

 

 

 

1.) Under Specialty: To make sense with the story that seems to be flowing I would suggest that the text be altered to: 

 

“Serving as a means to design and build Sasori's custom versions of their ships, with manufacturing lines for its mass-produced versions, and larger bays for cruisers and dreadnoughts to be repaired and resupplied.”

 

2.) Under Output: Can you be a little more clear about the following? I’m not sure what you mean by “lmines/mines”.

“with mass-produced ships on lmines and personal yards”. 

 

3.) Security Section: Due to the type of external weaponry listed I do believe that the security level should “High” over “Medium”.

 

4.) Internal Defense Section: This area requires a fair bit of organizational overhaul. Many of the items listed here don’t really seem to be defenses at all and Molecular Furnace is listed both here and lower in the submission under Points of Interest. Please categorize these items more appropriately and describe how each of these items contributes to the defenses of the Orbital Ring.

 

5.) Under Points of Interest “Main Offices” – This sentence is unfinished. Can you elaborate on this?

"Main Offices: THe brain of the shipyards, with most of the designers and droid brains that are working to oversee the shipyards. It is one of the fundamental..."

 

6.)  Under Manufacturing and Supply: This section suffers some of the same troubles as the “Internal Defense Section” – Please describe how these items are integral for the Orbital Ring and consider trimming down what may not belong.

 

An example of this would be the fact there is not only one Garment-Fabricator, but two, listed.

 

Other items seem redundant, or, there are multiples of a machine that do the same thing simply under a different name. An example would be the “Rapid Prototyper” that is listed both in the description and then linked again below. Followed by a Synthicator and a Duplicator.   

 

7.) The History: This section can still use some tweaking and clarification. It reads a little choppy and doesn’t always make sense. Please use your discretion to shore up your thoughts for each paragraph but I've included some examples in the spoiler below. 

 


Edited by Srina Talon, Today, 01:05 AM.

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