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Darth Vyrassu

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* Intent: To further flesh out the details of Akvase City

* Image Credit:
* Header custom made by me
* Sith Citadel
* Sith Citadel 2
* Imperial Military HQ
* Imperial Alliance Hall
* Jen'ari Museum
* Akvase City Plaza edited by me
* Gerti Cantina
* Akvase Spaceport

* Canon: N/A

* Links: N/A

SETTING INFORMATION
* City Name: Akvase City

* Classification: Metropolitan

* Location: Jena'tes

* Affiliation: The Jen'ari Empire

* Demographics:
* Humans: 65%
* Other: 30%
* Sith Species: 5%

* Wealth: High - The Cities income is rated high due to the constant income from Crystals, Casinos, Bars, Nightclubs, as well as the Jen'ari Empire institutes a tax upon all citizens of the Empire and businesses to support Jena'tes and Akvase City

* Stability: High - Akvase City is under strict complete control of The Jen'ari Empire and is under constant Imperial Military control. The Dark Council strikes fear into it's citizens to obey Imperial Law, those that break the law are subject to severe consequences such as imprisonment at the Jen'ari Imperial Prison hidden in the Jena'tes Tundra Section. On occasions one will find execution as a result of crimes.

* Description: From a distance Akvase City is seen as the biggest city on Jena'tes. A massive metropolitan imperial city shrouded in the darkside and constant cloud cover making the city seem very dark, even darker at night. The city lights up bright with the constant lightning flashes in the sky.

POINTS OF INTEREST
\\ Jen'ari Imperial Sith Citadel //

The Jen'ari Imperial Sith Citadel was designed to be 100% Identical on the outside to the Reconstituted Sith Empire's Citadel. The inside back in the old republic was a Labyrinth of tunnels to confuse anyone trying to sneak inside. This time around Darth Vyrassu had a different interior design. The Citadel was filled with several useful things such as: Sith Archives (Sith Grand Library), Sith Combat Dojo, Grand Sith Entrance Hall, The Sacred Black Library, Sith Lord Offices, Dark Lord Offices, Dark Lord quarters, Dark Council Chambers, Imperial Tactical planning rooms, galactic map room, briefing rooms, Sith quarters, Meditation chambers, medical bay, armorsmith, weapon crafting rooms, Ministries department, minister offices, R&D labs, Area S4, Emperor's audience chamber, Emperor's quarters, Emperor's Throne Room. The citadel is constantly under guard by Imperial Sith Troopers, Imperial Commandos, The lethal Sith Marauders and various other sith.

\\ Imperial Military Headquarters //

The Imperial Military HQ is the capital of the entire Jen'ari Imperial Military. Inside the building includes barracks for those stationed at the HQ, Tactical planning rooms, offices, shooting ranges, gyms, armory, and a detention center. The building is under constant guard by Imperial Sith Troopers, Imperial Officers and various Sith. The Spheres of Imperial Offence, Defence and Logistics work through here.

\\ Imperial Alliance Hall //

The Imperial Alliance Hall, or also known as the galactic trade center is where business can be conducted with The Jen'ari Empire by other factions of the galaxy in peace. The building includes a signing room, galactic map room, meeting room, cafeteria, private sleeping quarters and a mini shopping mall.

\\ Jen'ari Museum //

The Jen'ari Museum stands as a defining moment of Darth Vyrassu being alive for over 5,000 years. Vyrassu has collected relics and artifacts through out his life from all eras and has placed them here, the museum features items from the great hyperspace war, the great galactic war, the cold war, hundred year darkness, clone wars, galactic civil war 1 and 2, as well as personal artifacts he has collected.

\\ Akvase City Plaza //

Akvase City plaza was a social center. A big open plaza surrounded by various shops. In the center of the plaza was a big fountain that has a 100 foot high broze statute of Darth Vyrassu. Around the fountain was neon hologram trees and various other sculptures of art. Many citizens of the Jen'ari Empire came to the plaza to socialize and enjoy the art as well as to shop at the various unique shops.

\\ Gerti Cantina //

The Gerti Cantina was 3 things in one building, a bar, a restaurant and a night club, each feature on a different floor. The bar was a place for socializing, listening to music live or by jukebox, have a drink and relax. The restaurant was a very fancy place serving the best kind of food in the outer rim imported from all over the galaxy. The Nightclub usually always had a live band, had a small bar, a dance floor in front of the band stage, and around the room was various circular stages with poles where various female species did exotic dancing.

\\ Akvase Spaceport //

The Akvase Spaceport is the biggest Spaceport on Jena'tes. All major planetary traffic, visitors, civilians, tourists, and guests come through here. Each individual that comes here without a Jen'ari Empire citizenship card is required to check in with the Imperial port authority to register their ship, name, cargo and purposes on Jena'tes, failure to do so results in detaining or execution.

SECURITY
Security Rating: Maximum
The city is under guard constantly by several factors that keep the city safe such as:
* Ion Cannons
* Turrets
* Sith Troopers
* Order of the Jen'ari (Sith Order)
* Imperial Officers
* HK Assassin Droids
* Security Cameras
* The city is very secured all ships coming into the city must be scanned and documented with ship name, pilot, crew and purpose of being in Akvase City. Anyone visiting the city is subject to be searched as well, and visitors and civilians are not permitted weapons within city limits unless given a weapons permit from the Imperial HQ.


HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Akvase City now stands where a dense jungle once was. Vyrassu discovered Jena'tes back during the Cold War in The Old Republic. He always envisioned building on Jena'tes for the Reconstituted Sith Empire, but he was never able to follow through with the plans due to war. Now over 5,000 years later Vyrassu resurrected the Reconstituted Sith Empire using the name The Jen'ari Empire and came to Jena'tes with his Empire and captured the planet. Vyrassu ordered and led a campaign to clear a massive portion of the jungle and kill the wild life to make way for the Jen'ari Empire capital city. It was a long process but the hard work came into fruition with a massive metropolitan city named Akvase City that would serve as the capital central city of the Empire. A large portion of the city was designed as a copy of the only city Vyrassu came to know as a home, Kaas City on Dromund Kaas. The city's tallest most prominent building was the massive Sith Citadel in the heart of the city, a monument of The Jen'ari Empire's power, the exterior designed identically to the Reconstituted Sith Empire, however the interior built to suit much more of the Empire's needs.

Edited by Darth Vyrassu, 12 December 2018 - 11:26 AM.


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Darth Vyrassu Under review


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Darth Vyrassu

 

 

SECURITY
Security Rating: Maximum
The city is under guard constantly by several factors that keep the city safe such as:
* Anti Air Turrets
* Ion Cannons
* Turrets
* Anti air missiles
* Sith Troopers
* Sith Commandos
* Sith Marauders
* Sith Inquisitors
* Order of the Jen'ari (Sith Order)
* Imperial Shadow Guards
* Imperial Officers
* HK Assassin Droids
* Radar scanners
* Security Cameras
* The city is very secured all ships coming into the city must be scanned and documented with ship name, pilot, crew and purpose of being in Akvase City. Anyone visiting the city is subject to be searched as well, and visitors and civilians are not permitted weapons within city limits unless given a weapons permit from the Imperial HQ.

 

I'm going to have to ask you to tone the security part down. The security you've listed is one that would befit something more like a military base, and not a metropolitan city that includes night life, bars, casinos, nightclubs, etc.

 


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Scherezade deWinter

It's not a normal citizen city, it's a Sith Imperial military city so I don't see the purpose behind lowering security as it's meant to be a martial law Imperial city, even says that Akvase is highly secured with military in the APPROVED planet codex submission of Jena'tes

Edited by Darth Vyrassu, 08 December 2018 - 11:03 AM.


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Scherezade deWinter

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Darth Vyrassu

 

It's not a normal citizen city, it's a Sith Imperial military city so I don't see the purpose behind lowering security as it's meant to be a martial law Imperial city, even says that Akvase is highly secured with military in the APPROVED planet codex submission of Jena'tes

 

 

Quoting directly from the Jena'tes submission:

 

Akvase City is the Capital city of the Jen'ari Empire, it houses various shops, cantinas, casinos, Imperial Compound, Jen'ari Sith Citadel, as well as homes and condos and apartments. The city is filled with various walks of life and entertainment. Akvase city is a massive metropolitan city with skyscrapers reaching high into the sky.

 

 

No, it does not say that.

 

However, even if it had, the maximum level for a city and the maximum level or a military base are two very different things. By all means, keep the security for Akvase at maximum, however, the level of beefiness will still have to be toned down.

 

An alternative option would be to re-sub (or change the template entirely) Akvase as a military base and give it some city-like fluff.

 


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Darth Vyrassu The editsare much better. It's still a wee bit too much but I think I will pass this along now. Pending secondary approval.


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Scherezade deWinter |Darth Vyrassu

 

Next time I'd like you to be less dismissive about a CJ's judgement. They are here to help balance the submissions, minimizing the risk for problems in the future. 

 

 

 

* Sith Troopers
* Sith Marauders
* Sith Inquisitors 
* Order of the Jen'ari (Sith Order)

 

You can fold all of that into a single mention of the Order of Jen'ari. Unless you are stating here that there are other Sith protecting this city, that aren't part of the Jen'ari Order?

 

 

 

* Description: From a distance Akvase City is seen as the biggest city on Jena'tes. A massive metropolitan imperial city shrouded in the darkside and constant cloud cover making the city seem very dark, even darker at night. The city lights up bright with the constant lightning flashes in the sky.

 

Is this a Force Nexus effect or just aesthetics?


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Jairus Starvald

Edits made, and only the weather is cause of the nexus, I stated pretty clear that the city just looks dark Cuz of the weather

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Darth VyrassuScherezade deWinter

 

With the edits this looks fine now.

 

Approved!


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