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Intent: a person weapon for Darth Neoplix, as well as a possible weapon for his troops.

 

Manufacturer: Darth Neoplix personally manufactures all his own weaponry

Affiliation: Darth Neoplix, the Jenari Empire, Close Marketborderlands-oxcgn-78.jpg

Model: Atlas A-12 Revolver

Modularity: Designed, as all of his weapons are, to be extremely easy to modify. Whether it be wiring in other power sources to increase the power output or ammunition capacity, or swapping out barrels, each piece is designed to be easily replaceable.

Production: Semi-Unique

Material: mainly Durasteel, several phrik components, plassteel synthetic components

Classification: Variable Projectile energy pistol

Size: large

Weight: heavy

Ammunition type: variable projectile cylinders. Neoplix’s weapons use interchangeable projectile magazines, each with the same loading port, but some which can fire plasma, masers, armor piercing, electric, stun, ion, solid slug, and explosive rounds.

Ammunition Capacity: each cylinder holds only 12 rounds

Reload Speed: slow

Effective Range: long range

Rate of Fire: depending on the projectile, can vary from low to high

Stopping Power: high

Recoil: High

Special Features: HUD linked targeting system, user identification lock preventing anyone but him from using it, implanted explosives to remove detonate the weapon at will, variable range targeting scope, supercooled magnetic drive to all mass-possessing projectiles.

Strengths: variability, overall power, versatility, etc…

Weaknesses: weight, recoil, and inexperienced users will find it difficult to fire accurately.

Description: the ultimate hand held pistol, this weapon was designed by neoplix to give him an advantage over others on the battlefield. With his massive strength, the weight and recoil are relatively easy to manage, and their pinpoint accuracy, and extremely heavy capabilities, combined with its variability, make it extremely useul.

 



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John Locke

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Under Review.



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Neoplix

 

Hi, I'll be looking over the submission here for you and there are a few things which jump out at me to start off. 

 

Firstly I will need you to complete the full template, including a link to the image source before we can approve this. 

 

Also, you classify the weapon as

 

Classification: Variable Projectile energy pistol

 

but from what I can tell this is a purely projectile based weapon that uses projectiles which can deal energy damage. Could you please clarify this?

 

Rate of Fire: depending on the projectile, can vary from low to high

 

If there is a variation like this, it will be helpful to anyone you are writing against if you could provide more detail, specifying which projectiles fire at which speeds.

 

 

implanted explosives to remove detonate the weapon at will

 

If you could also explain how these explosives are triggered? Is it through the force, a radio signal. WOuld an opponent be able to trigger them, destroying the weapon?

 

Please tag me back when you've had a chance to review the questions. As always these are only questions and recommendations. If you want I will approve the gun as it stands after you provide an image source.



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Neoplix

 

What is the status of this submission?



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I am archiving this for inactivity. Please tag factory staff if you wish it brought out of the archive.



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Moved to Factory Archives - If you want to remove from the archives, please feel free to tag Gir Quee or Jairus Starvald.