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Lirka Ka

Lirka Ka

    The mean Elf-lady

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I’ve been writing on Chaos for a decent while now, and Lirka almost the entire time. Haven’t exactly gone out too far and wide but regardless felt that I should ask for some sort of opinions or whatever on Lirka.

 

Faults in how she’s written, critique, all that good stuff.

 

Feedback as a whole is appreciated.


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IC-104

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I don't believe we've ever met. Honestly, if you'd like to thread, I can give you some feedback afterwards!

 

Lirka Ka


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Iniquitous Ren

Iniquitous Ren

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Well TBH I don't really see too much wrong with your character, I like the idea that most of your strengths more or less comes with age and that your weaknesses are emotional based despite the fact your character is 137 it really makes her feel like a real person in this case.

 

Note: I wrote this after reading your BIO so I hadn't had much time to think on this.

 

Also if you go to read my bio know I just made this character so she's not done yet but I left a little something for you to go on.


Edited by Iniquitous Ren, 05 February 2019 - 08:55 PM.