Posted 13 March 2019 - 02:25 PM
Figure since he has reached Master Rank I'd see what everyone else thinks of the character and issues people see with him or the way I write him at times. So don't worry about showing criticism if you have anything. Always looking to improve as a writer.
Cheers in advance!
Posted 13 March 2019 - 02:40 PM
I haven't seen him do anything master yet as that's fairly new (congrats by the by!) but as a character I thoroughly enjoy him! I've been torturing him since he was a wee padawan, so seeing his ark and how he's changed.
The only critique I would have is on his mid combat healing trick he does. It seems a bit excessive, letting him heal otherwise deadly wounds in a second before wailing away with his saber on foos. But that's more an ascetic thing as you don't abuse it to just win a fight.
That's all I got for now. Keep on truckin boo~
Posted 13 March 2019 - 04:31 PM
Yeah, healing isn't normally something I do too much in combat. I felt bad looking over that afterwards, there could have been other things I did but fully appreciate your comment!
Asaraa Vaashe Daughter!
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