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Kat Decoria

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: Create a fighter squad team for the Standard N-Wing
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  • Role: The team is a group of pilots lead by Kat Decoria to counter opponent starfighters.
  • Links: N-Wing

GENERAL INFORMATION

  • Unit Name: Cyan Squad
  • Affiliation: SJO
  • Classification: Fighter Pilots
  • Equipment: N-Wing
  • Description: Unit is composed of skilled pilots, they are all sync as a unit due to the fact that they train rigorously together. They all wear black pilot uniforms with a blue SJO insignia on their chest.

COMBAT INFORMATION

  • Unit SizeSmall
  • Unit AvailabilityUnique
  • Unit ExperienceVeteran
  • Combat Function: Cyan Squad follow Kat Decoria's orders, they tend to be support role for larger battle cruisers, star destroyers and such when battling in large space battles. Tactics tend to be aggressive, using their speed to dip in and out of danger. Cyan Squad is confident yet cautious due to experience and appreciation of the dangers of battle.

Strengths:

  • Well trained team of expert pilots
  • The best pilots of the N-Wing able to push the ship to bring out the best in them.
  • Trained for several months to ensure that they know how to work as a team

Weaknesses:

  • Small unit of fighters with only 10 pilots including Kat Decoria
  • Takes time for a new person to be trained into the position. 
  • Limited to the capabilities of the N-Wings in terms of attack power.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Kat had created her first starfighter, which was now being produced to use in combat situations. Now the next step for her was to organise a squad of pilots to work with her in order show off the effectiveness of the N-Wing in these combat situations. She selected her team from skilled pilots that she had gotten to know within the SJO and organised regular training events to understand one another's skills in combat. Kat was leader of the squad and worked the hardest to prove that she was deserving of that position. Her team were then approved to be used in space combat mission, using the N-Wings as their preferred Starfighters.

 

Edited by Kat Decoria, 22 July 2019 - 09:01 AM.

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Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori

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Kat Decoria

 

Hi there, I shall be reviewing this submission. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to ask.

 

Combat Function: [ Describe this unit’s general function in combat. Put things like tactics, habits, goals, how they interact with other parts of a larger army, do they need support or are they the support, etc. ]

 

This here needs to be filled out.

 

Affiliation: SJO

 

Please hyperlink SJO.

 

Also is this a single squad or multiple ones? You have given the unit an Uncommon rating, but both the name of the unit and the wording in the submission itself implies that it is just one Squad (which would be Unique unit in Codex terms).

 

Could you please clarify?

 

Regarding your Weaknesses, your first and third weakness are essentially the same thing as they state the unit does not have many members, while your second is not applicable to a combat situation. I would suggest adding in a weakness that can be exploited by an opponent in combat. Could simply be copied from the N-Wing sub. This is just a suggestion though.

 

Regarding Strengths, your three strengths are essentially the same since they all say that this is a well-trained, crack unit of pilots. So if you like you could merge them into one and add strengths that describe in what type of missions they excel at (based on the intent, they are meant to counter other starfighters, so you could add that they excel at dogfights etc.) or any special strengths their starfighter possesses. For instance, the N-Wing submission says it is fast, agile and molecular/particle shielding. As with weaknesses, this is a suggestion.


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Kat Decoria

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Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori

 

Edits have been made.


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Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori

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Kat Decoria

 

Thank you.

 

I just need you to hyperlink SJO in Affiliation. Then I can give this submission my trainee stamp.


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Kat Decoria

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Done.


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Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori

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Kat Decoria

 

Please remember to tag the CJ next time to make sure your reply is not lost. Trainee approved pending secondary.

 

Neri Rashal


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Neri Rashal

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Kat Decoria Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori

 

Approved


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