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Kiff Brayde

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TASK FORCE BROKEN CROWN

 

 

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a mobile task force of consisting of Confederacy Defense Force warships for the CIS Invasion of Tanaab
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GENERAL INFORMATION

  • Fleet Name: Task Force Broken Crown
  • Classification: Invasion Task Force
  • Affiliation: Confederacy of Independent Systems, Confederacy Defense Force
  • Fleet Symbol: N/A
  • Description: Task Force Broken Crown is a large fleet composed of ships belonging to the Miranda Sector Armada of the CDF. Designed to be a large, offensive fleet capable of bringing the CIS's justice across the galaxy, it is versatile in composition and distribution.

SOCIAL  INFORMATION

  • HeadquartersFondor
  • Ports of Call: 

Fondor

Bassadro

Miranda

Arkanis

Geonosis

Yag'Dhul

Bestine IV

Thyferra

  • Goals: To defend the Confederacy's geopolitical and military interests both domestic and abroad.
  • ReputationTask Force Broken Crown is a newly made fleet, but the people who command it aren't. High Marshal Kiff Brayde is well known with a good reputation for being a young, able commander capable of holding his own, and has won a multitude of battles in his short career. 

COMPOSITION  INFORMATION

509th Heavy Battle Line - Assault Group

514th Battle Line - Escort​ Group I

515th Battle Line - Escort Group II

522nd Fighter Line - Carrier Group I

523nd Fighter Line - Carrier Group II

543rd Artillery Line- Artillery Group

 

MEMBERS
High Marshal Kiff Brayde: High Marshal of the Confederacy Defense Force and the Miranda Sector Armada, Task Force Broken Crown is under the leadership of High Marshal Brayde. 
 
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Task Force Broken Crown was formed by Kiff Brayde to replace the smaller 186th Siege Line. Formed after the Sith invasion of Pantora and with the upcoming Confederacy invasion of Mandalorian-held Tanaab, Task Force Broken Crown is one of the first operating Confederacy fleets to show off two of the CDF's latests ships-of-the-line; the Thoros-class Artillery Battlecruiser and Saboath II-class Assault Cruiser. Composed to be a versatile yet heavy-hitting fleet, Task Force Broken Crown is only utilized for large-scale battles or invasions, and is composed of six smaller battle lines, all from the CIS Miranda Sector Armada and under the command of High Marshal Brayde. While it has yet to see service, all of its ships and crews have been selected for the distinction in which they have performed service to the Confederacy in the past, making Task Force Broken Crown truly a force to be reckoned with.  

In Task Force Broken Crown each battle line, or group, has its own purpose on the battlefield. The 509th Heavy Battle Line serves as the large offensive body of the fleet, filled with ships-of-the-line to directly engage the enemy in ship-to-ship combat. Escort Groups I and II serve as Vanguards in battle, while seperately they can serve as larger patrol forces or even as a planetary garrison. Both Carrier Groups can be positioned alongside the Assault Group or in the rearguard; their 'weapons' so to speak are the countless fighters stored in their bellies, or in other circumstances armor and troops, giving the Carrier Groups a more support-style role. Finally, the Artillery Group serves as a heavy-hitting rearguard, the three Thoros-class Battlecruisers able to cause massive amounts of damage from non-conventional distances; although it is heavy hitting, the rear placement of the Artillery Group gives it a more sort of support role in the overall fleet. 


Edited by Kiff Brayde, 14 July 2019 - 03:04 PM.

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Gilamar Skirata

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Kiff Brayde 

 

Under review



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Gilamar Skirata

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Kiff Brayde

 

Nothing pops out at me that would cause this to be denied however I have just one suggestion.

 

Looking at this its really nothing but a sheet of numbers that are in practice nebulous at best. While I appreciate the work put into organizing a fleet like this I think its missing something important that really would make this "lore" rather than a numbers sheet.

 

Your description and reputation are severely lacking. With two sentences each you don't give the reader anything to really work with as far as how this invasionary fleet is perceived in the diverse CIS space or even the greater Galaxy. Your description as well could do with a little beef. What sort of compositions? do the lines have special purposes? Do your escort groups specifically escort other groups in this fleet or do they help out throughout CIS space? 

 

If you'd rather leave it as is that is also fine. Just my suggestion.



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Kiff Brayde

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Gilamar Skirata

 

Thanks for the suggestion! I beefed up the description a bit with detailing placement and roles of each group, but the main reason why the reputation and description are lacking (yes, I know) is because that the Task Force really is a new thing. I plan on making an updated lore sub once I've played around with it enough to be able to add more description and history to the Lore :)


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Gilamar Skirata

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Kiff Brayde 

 

sounds good! trainee approved pending secondary 



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Neri Rashal

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Kiff Brayde Gilamar Skirata

 

Approved


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