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#381
Lyth Meran

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on second thought edited. 

ignore 


Edited by Lyth Meran, 17 September 2017 - 09:11 AM.


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http://starwarsrp.ne...15976-akama-14/

I would like to second chance this submission. The respective judge and I could into a disagreement about mechu-duru, which I believe the submission would be immune to specifically due to it being stated for it being stated for it to only work on inanimate/robotic objects, and not anything that's living. The sourced submission was also approved for it having biot. 


Edited by Malen, 20 September 2017 - 11:20 PM.

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http://starwarsrp.ne...15976-akama-14/

I would like to second chance this submission.

 

 

Hello, as per the instructions for a second chance, could you please elaborate why? I need context to understand the entire picture :) 

 

If your submission has been denied, and you believe it has been so unfairly, then post the link to your submission, and ONLY the link, along with your case for why it should be approved, and we will take the matter into consideration amongst the group and come to a consensus..

 


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Edited. My apologies. 


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I would like the Eri heavy long-range tractor beam to be second-chanced please...

 

http://starwarsrp.ne...e-tractor-beam/

 

I feel that the submission has been treated unfairly, and the FJ has been suggesting edits that would defeat the purpose of the item, which is to provide a means to tow objects whose hazards require long safe distances to safely handle, such as planet-killing asteroids. I feel that restricting the ability to install the item to orbital stations or planetside emplacements would be detrimental to its ability to deflect planet-killing asteroids or its ability to handle other situations that are best handled with tractor beams.

 

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Cathul Thuku Malen

 

Under review. 


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I like to second chance, I.M.D. Pipistrelle MkI

 

I have done the dev thread, please review to make sure you're happy with it. 


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Cira Status of the second-chance request for the Eri heavy long-range tractor beam? http://starwarsrp.ne...e-tractor-beam/

 

I think Malen also had a second-chance request pending...


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ignore.



#390
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Draco Veree

 

Oh fuddy duddy.

 

That was me being a derp and accidentally hitting the wrong link.It was supposed to be approved.Sorry, I'll fix that. 


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Second chancing this fighter.

 

Issue:

Are light turbolasers too much for a 15m fighter?

 

Factory Standard:

 

The goal is balance. 

 

Unless you have a superweapon or restricted materials in your submission, then what you put in the "weapons" or "defenses" field doesn't seem to hold as much weight as the actual "rating" assigned the field. 

 

If "high" is in one field, then one of the other fields needs to be "very low" et cetera.

 

This Submission:

The rating for armament is extreme, which fits given that it does have two light turbolasers - on one each wingtip. 

 

However, the fighter has significant weaknesses including no hyperdrive and no deflector shields. Which is reflected in the "very low" and "none" ratings for those fields.

 

Doing the calculations in the spreadsheet, my submission comes out even in points, which is the goal and considered "balanced." 

 

Therefore, this is a balanced submission and should be approved. 


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Cira the others?


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I'll review them in a bit, I got busy. 


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