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Tefka

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After a submission has been approved, it will be locked. If you want to make a modification to it at a later date, post your request here with the following outline
 
Submission Name:

Link to Submission:

Summary of Modification:
Reason for Modification:
Modification:

 
And while the reason for the modification can be as minor or major as you like, be aware that minor modifications will have a lower priority, and that if you attempt to make several modifications in a short span of time, your request may be denied. For more extensive, or vague, modifications, Roleplay Judges will unlock your submission and bring it back out to let you make changes. After you're satisfied with your edits, it will be reevaluated.

 
Furthermore, please post only the desired edits rather than the entire submission to highlight the change and speed up the evaluation process.

 

You may only submit one request per category at a time. This request may contain up to five items to be modified.


Edited by Jamie Pyne, 11 February 2018 - 03:28 PM.
Added rule from the Factory Standardized Rule page for clarity


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Mira Rekali

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Submission Name: Aegis Class Heavy Dropship

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...eavy-drop-ship/
Reason for Modification: Stealth Upgrade. Please add the modification at the bottom to the end of the Paragraph.
Modification: When Project Dark Tide was completed and Incom Corporation began fielding Stealth-X Starfighters, Alyesa Praxon-Organa agreed to field up to fifteen new upgrade kits to Omega Protectorate forces for the Aegis Class. These kits would include the Starry Night Camo, Retooled Tibanna X burning engines and the Sensor Suite similar to the design in the Stealth-X. This would enable the Omega Protectorate Forces to strike anywhere, anytime. They would also be equipped with the similiar anti-tampering devices as the Stealth-X models to prevent capture or reverse engineering.


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Mira Rekali

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Submission Name: XJ-7 Stealth-X Elite Starfighter
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...te-starfighter/
Reason for Modification: Increased Production because a Tier IV company can handle it and this ship was almost Mass produced with heavier weapons and so forth back in the day.
Modification: Increase from Limited to Minor. Remove Popo from permission line as PC Characters shouldn't really be requesting authorization from him anyways for this product. In addition, change Affiliation to Levantine Sanctum or Alyesa Praxon-Organa discretion. 


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Submission Name:Reason Class
Link to Submission:Here
Reason for Modification:Voluntary nerf and modification of armaments.
Modification:

 

 Current  Change to  Weapon point change

Armaments:Dual Heavy Turbolaser Batteries (100)  >Dual Heavy Turbolaser Batteries (100)

                   Heavy Turbolaser Batteries (150) >Turbolaser Batteries (150)  -600 Turbolasers
                   Light Quad Turbolaser Batteries-Quick Mounts (50) >Quick Mounted Turbolaser Batteries (50)  - 600 Turbolasers  

                   Large Energy Torpedo Launcher (6) >Large Energy Torpedo Launcher (60) +54 Heavy launchers (432 Turbolaser equivalence)
                   Dual Laser Cannon Batteries (150) >Remove  -1,200 defensive guns
                   Flak Batteries (75) >Flak Batteries (75)
                   Point Defense Batteries (100) >Point Defense Batteries (100)
                   Ion Cannon Batteries (20) >Ion Cannon Batteries (20)

 

 

Over all point change = -1,368 capital guns with reduced/removed modifiers including altered defensive guns.

 

Please also set all the text color to standard to assist with link legibility. 



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Chloe Blake

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Submission Name: YZ-1200 Aurora Hawk
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...00-aurora-hawk/
Reason for Modification:  Adding the small electronic add-on of ECHO Copycat. 

 

Modification:

 

Add to Non-Combative Attachments:

ECHO Copycat: Hallucin  >An advanced electronics add-on for smaller starcraft, Hallucin transmits a false Friendly ID to all craft in sensory range.



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Camellia Swift

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Submission Name: Rendili Starfighter
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...li-starfighter/
Reason for Modification: Extremely petty reason of wishing to change the image and image credit
Modification: 

 

Image Credit: By Edward Del Rio



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Submission Name: Fury
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...pic/34662-fury/
Reason for Modification: To make weapon load out better, and bring sizes in line with canon.

Modification:

 

Dimensions

Height: 33m

Width: 88m

Length: 100m

 

Exchange standard deflector shield to advanced

Exchange twin turbo lasers for twin precision cannons

Also exchange hyper drive, to a krayt Drive


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Vanessa Vantai

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Submission Name: Massassi-class Corvette

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...class-corvette/

Reason for Modification: Starship update for use by the Abrion Systems Authority.

Modification: Changing primary hyperdrive from "Class 3" to "Class 1"



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Daro Tarsi

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Submission Name: Ovmar-class Space Station
Link to Submission: [x]
Reason for Modification: After the acquisition of various 'upgrades' Ovmar finally decided to implement them into his personal retreat for increased security.
Modification: Addition of a Stygium Cloaking Device, Thrust Trace Dampers and a Gravitic Modulator according to the following dev thread: Death of Rasho the Hutt (Odium's writer has given me permission to use his stygium). Also an AI and with it a Electronic Warfare Suite, with these dev threads: M1SH4, Creation of the AI.

 

If there are any question I will answer them gladly.


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Submission Name: Suvian Sciences Triple THreat

Link to Submission:http://starwarsrp.ne...-triple-threat/
Reason for Modification:  I have too many ships. 
Modification:Archive this please.

 

Submission Name: SS Phoenix

Link to Submission:http://starwarsrp.ne...f-jeff-solaris/
Reason for Modification: I have too many ships. 
Modification: Archive this please. 


Century Technological Advancement Enterprises - Prototyping Droids, Weapons and Computer Systems.

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Captain Larraq

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Submission Name: Prowler-class Mesen'Loras
Link to Submission: Link
Reason for Modification: I got the math a bit wrong on the dimensions.After reviewing the available images and gifs, I'd like the existing Length, Width, and Height section to be replaced with the following...
Modification:



Dimensions


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Ayden Cater

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Submission Name: Glory-class Cruiser
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: With a posted Speed chart to properly gauge things, I determined that this needed a slight nerf.
Modification:

  • Increase Maneuverability by 3 (To 13)
  • Increase Speed by 2 (To 11)


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Allyson Locke

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Finished



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Ayden Cater

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Submission Name: OS-G1 Guardian
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: General update
Modification:



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Submission Name: OS-B1 Avenger
Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: General update
Modification:



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Ayden Cater

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Submission Name: Unyielding-class Command Cruiser
Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: Updating the ship with a recently approved weapon system
Modification: Change the Armaments to the following




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Ayden Cater

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Submission Name: Warden-class Heavy Cruiser
Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: Updating the ship with a recently approved weapon system
Modification: Change the Armaments to the following




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Submission Name: Horn-class Escort Cruiser
Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: General Update
Modification:




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Submission Name:Reason Class
Link to Submission:Here
Reason for Modification:Voluntary nerf and modification of armaments.
Modification:

 

 Current  Change to  Weapon point change

Armaments:Dual Heavy Turbolaser Batteries (100)  >Dual Heavy Turbolaser Batteries (100)

                   Heavy Turbolaser Batteries (150) >Turbolaser Batteries (150)  -600 Turbolasers
                   Light Quad Turbolaser Batteries-Quick Mounts (50) >Quick Mounted Turbolaser Batteries (50)  - 600 Turbolasers  

                   Large Energy Torpedo Launcher (6) >Large Energy Torpedo Launcher (60) +54 Heavy launchers (432 Turbolaser equivalence)
                   Dual Laser Cannon Batteries (150) >Remove  -1,200 defensive guns
                   Flak Batteries (75) >Flak Batteries (75)
                   Point Defense Batteries (100) >Point Defense Batteries (100)
                   Ion Cannon Batteries (20) >Ion Cannon Batteries (20)

 

 

Over all point change = -1,368 capital guns with reduced/removed modifiers including altered defensive guns.

 

Please also set all the text color to standard to assist with link legibility. 

The dual laser cannons were supposed to be removed and the flack, point defense, and ion canons left alone. The way it is now I'm down 25 defensive batteries but the ones I have are double barrel count. 



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Submission Name:  The Bane Of Coruscant
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...e-of-coruscant/
Reason for Modification:  Transfer of Ownership to Danger Arceneau in this thread. 
Modification:

 
Transfer of Ownership to Danger Arceneau 

 

Adding the Iron Crown T-2000 "Outrider" Otherdrive - Hyperwavefront Arrhythmia Inductoras given to Danger Arceneau by Rave Merrill in this thread. 

 
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