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Danger Arceneau

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Submission Name:   Hana-Class Refinery Station
Link to Submission:  http://starwarsrp.ne...inery-station/ 
Reason for Modification: Danger Arceneau won ownership of the Hana Class Refinery Station at the SSB Auction. Thread here
Modification:

 

Changing ownership and affiliation to Danger and Arceneau Trade Company.

 



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Arrbi Betna

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Submission Name: Bes'uliik Starfighter "Angel" Variant
Link to Submission: here
Reason for Modification: To update the submission as it is being used in current threads and because adjusting will make the submission easier to modify and alter down the line when and where needed/desired.
Modification:
 

 

Nothing is changed aside from adding the sections on the new template that weren't on the old template, adjusting the speed to the new guide, the addition of the stygium cloak and booster engine on the special features/noncombat items list, moving the engine type to the special features/noncombat list from its place on the old template, and the removal of the deflector shield listed in the previous submission (this was requested to be removed before, but the person doing the edits accidentally deleted half the sub forcing us to replace it with a cached copy. I was more concerned about not having the sub deleted a second time on accident that I didn't rerequest the edit at the time).


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Camellia Swift

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Submission Name: Hammerhead Frigate
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: Having become more experienced, and with such a lovely and classic design though, I want to fix the armaments on this submission to better reflect a proper ship.
 
Modification: 
 

Armaments:

  • Heavy Dual Turbolaser Turrets x 3
  • Heavy Dual Ion Cannon Turret x 1
  • Turbolaser Batteries x 4
  • Ion Cannon Batteries x 4
  • Proton Torpedo Launchers x 4
  • Quad Laser Cannons x 8
  • Point-Defense Cannons x 8


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Allyson Locke

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Domino My mistake the way you formatted it really kills my eyes. Please just next time put the change and that's all. 


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Allyson Locke

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Completed


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Cheshire

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Name: Gypsy-Class Electronic Support Shuttle

Link: http://starwarsrp.ne...upport-shuttle/

Reason: Other company bought design rights, production has thus been increased

Modification: From Limited to Minor,

factions listed as The Shadow Empire and The Crystalsong Commonwealth,

manufacturers as Ri'ess Regal Drives and Subach-Innes.

 

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Ayden Cater

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Submission Name: Horn-class Escort Cruiser
Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: Size retcon
Modification:




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Ayden Cater

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Submission Name: Unyielding-class Command Cruiser
Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: Size retcon
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Danger Arceneau

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Submission Name: Czerka-class Medium Transport

Submission:  Czerka-class Medium Transport

Reason for Modification:Changing Product name and Affiliation due to Browncoat Arms & Industrial and ATC per these process.  And changing image.

Modification:

 



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Ayden Cater

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Submission Name: Relentless-class Assault Frigate
Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: General Update
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Name: Arcrystal-Class TIE/CS Shuttle

Link: http://starwarsrp.ne...-tiecs-shuttle/

Reason: To remove any confusion over proprietary technology owned by Sienar.

Modifications: Change Title and Model to _ Arcrystal-Class ID-CS Shuttle

 


Edited by Nyxie, 20 November 2014 - 11:45 AM.

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Cheshire

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Name: Ventus Fighter Interceptor
Link: http://starwarsrp.ne...er-interceptor/
Reason: Same deal as above, plus a tidy-up while we're at it.
Modification:

Propulsion from "TIE Reactor" to _ "2 - Ion Drive Engines"
Affiliation from "The Galactic Republic" to _ "The Shadow Empire, The Crystalsong Commonwealth, Contract Available"

Weapon from generic "Warhead Launchers" to _ "Standard Concussion Missile Launchers"

Grammar corrections

Armament in list format

Disruptive background color removed

 


Edited by Nyxie, 20 November 2014 - 11:45 AM.

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Danger Arceneau

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Submission Name: Lwhekk Aleph-class Manufacturing Ship
Submission:  http://starwarsrp.ne...facturing-ship/
Reason for Modification: Changing Product name and Affiliation due to Browncoat Arms & Industrial and ATC buying exclusive blueprints and production rights here.
Modification:
 



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Submission Name: [Shadow Tech Industries] R&D + Manufacturing Ship
Link to Submission: R&D + Manufacturing Ship
Reason for Modification: SolaraTron Industries, the sister company to STI, is having one made for it as well.
Modification:  

 

Production - Change to Unique x2

Intent - Change to "To create R & D Labs, and manufacturing centers for Shadow Tech Industries & SolaraTron Industries that are both mobile, and difficult to find."

 

Description - Add this small paragraph at the end.  

Soon a second "Cube" ship was added to the fleet.  This second Cube ship was to handle SolaraTron Industries development and production of droids.  As such, all the areas in the first Cube were instead, changed out for the manufacturing equipment required in the making of the different droid models created by SolaraTron Industries.



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Danger Arceneau

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Submission Name: Animus-class Assault Courier
Link to Submission: Animus-class Assault Courier
Reason for Modification: Danger bought the blueprints and exclusive rights to produce and sell in the open market in this thread
Modification:

 



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Alright, to start, I apologize for the amount of work I'm dumping on you guys. I'll try to sort it as best I can.

All products' affiliation/sale status have been altered through this thread.

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Archive this please. It is being discontinued and replaced.


Edited by Nyxie, 01 December 2014 - 04:57 PM.

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Captain Larraq

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Submission Name: Jahaatir-class Electronic Warfare Frigate
Link to Submission: Link
Reason for Modification: The Ship in question was always intended to utilize a type of EMP Warhead to fill in it's missile capacity.Though I've repeatedly gotten my own attempts denied at creating such an item, I recently acquired nearly identical technology At Auction, and am finally completing the design of these ships.I'm keeping the tubes modular and including a secondary type of warhead for use that is already in use on other related Mandal Hypernautics starships.
Modification: Instead of just slapping 25x new missiles into a 'modular' weapons system designed to use probes, I went ahead and dropped the total capacity down to 12x and relabeled the launcher as being designed to use missiles.

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Captain Larraq

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Submission Name: Modified Scion-class Stealth Corvette
Link to Submission: Link
Reason for Modification: To better Cite original work in compliance with plagiarism rules.
Modification:


Please add the following immediately before the Spoiler.

Excerpt from Original Submission- Credit Genesis Rostu


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Submission Name: Bolo-Class Gunboat
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...-class-gunboat/
Reason for Modification: To keep the Techno Union Flavour
Modification: Change homing missiles to homing missiles or Discord Missiles.
Description: Some are being trialled with Peregrine Field Disruptors