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#601
Kuat Drive Yards

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Lily Kuhn

 

 

I didn't mean to try and rush you, it had been a week and I did not look to see if my last request had been updated or not. I will further wait to post my request, then.



#602
Lily Kuhn

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Travis Caalgen

There was a miscommunication during the process of writing the rule that led to a misunderstanding about the requirements for transferring SSDs (in that we don't require the dominions to be provided, which should be clarified in the rules sometime in the future because it needs to be).

 

I've pulled your submissions out for re-review. They will not require additional dominions.


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Darth Carnifex

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Submission Name: Legate-class Battlecruiser
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: Expand the standard features and advanced systems
Reason for Modification: Wanted to expand
Modification:
 
STANDARD FEATURES

  • Advanced Sensor Systems
  • Advanced Targeting Systems
  • Standard Avionics Package
  • Standard Navigation System
  • Standard Life Support System
  • Standard Damage and Hazard Control Systems
  • Standard Tractor and Pressor Beam Emitters
  • Standard Anti-Ion Emission Tracker (Anti-Hyperspace Tracking)
  • Advanced Communication Systems, with Encrypted Military Keys

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

 

 

Submission Name: Tetrarch-class Heavy Battlecruiser
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: Expand the standard features and advanced systems
Reason for Modification: Wanted to expand
Modification:
 
STANDARD FEATURES

  • Advanced Sensor Systems
  • Advanced Targeting Systems
  • Standard Avionics Package
  • Standard Navigation System
  • Standard Life Support System
  • Standard Damage and Hazard Control Systems
  • Standard Tractor and Pressor Beam Emitters
  • Standard Anti-Ion Emission Tracker (Anti-Hyperspace Tracking)
  • Advanced Communication Systems, with Encrypted Military Keys

ADVANCED SYSTEMS



#604
Vanessa Vantai

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Submission: Legacy-class Heavy Cruiser

Reason: Needs 5.0 Update

Mod: Move to pre-factory

 

Submission: Warspite-class Heavy Cruiser

Reason: Needs 5.0 Update

Mod: Move to pre-factory

 

Submission: Detryte-class Heavy Bomber

Reason: Needs 5.0 Update

Mod: Move to pre-factory


Edited by Vanessa Vantai, 11 July 2018 - 12:35 AM.


#605
Kuat Drive Yards

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Submission Name: Lightstealth β-18 Reconnaissance Ship
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...naissance-ship/
Summary of Modification: Remove KSD-851 from Special Features
Reason for Modification: Due to Major Contract with CSA
Modification: Remove KSD-851

Submission Name: Incarcerator β-class Corvette
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...class-corvette/
Summary of Modification: Remove KSD-851 from Special Features
Reason for Modification: Due to Major Contract with CSA
Modification: Remove KSD-851

Submission Name: A β-6 Interceptor
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...-6-interceptor/
Summary of Modification: Remove KSD-851 from Special Features
Reason for Modification: Due to Major Contract with CSA
Modification: Remove KSD-851

Submission Name: D5 β-Mantis Patrol Ship
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...is-patrol-ship/
Summary of Modification: Remove KSD-851 from Special Features
Reason for Modification: Due to Major Contract with CSA
Modification: Remove KSD-851

Submission Name: PT Nova-class Courier
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...-class-courier/
Summary of Modification: Remove KSD-851 from Special Features
Reason for Modification: Due to Major Contract with CSA
Modification: Remove KSD-851

#606
Pella Vun

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Submission Name: X-Wing
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...s-class-x-wing/ 
Summary of Modification: change affiliation.
Reason for Modification:moving Incom to wider private market
Modification:
Affiliation to Private and Alliance

Submission Name: X-wing
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...-class-x-wing/ 
Summary of Modification: change affiliation.
Reason for Modification:moving Incom to wider private market
Modification:
Affiliation to Private and Alliance


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Darth Carnifex

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Submission Name: Behemoth-class Super Star Dreadnought
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: Improve some details
Reason for Modification: New Artificial Intelligence was approved, need to replace the old
Modification:
 
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Material:

 

 

Defenses: Extreme

  • Defensive Weaponry
    • Quad Laser Cannons
    • Antimissile Octets
    • Point-defense Cannons
    • Flak Cannons
  • Electronic Defenses
    • Cap Drain
    • De-Ionizer
    • Socketguard
  • Countermeasures
    • Sensor Jammers
    • Comm Jammers
    • Missile Jammers
  • Internal Defenses
    • Defensive Autoblasters
    • Ray Shields
    • Turadium Bulkheads
    • Advanced Biometrics
    • Extensive Security Camera System
    • Laser Grids
    • Labyrinthine Interior with Natural Chokepoints

 

 

STANDARD FEATURES

ADVANCED SYSTEMS


Edited by Darth Carnifex, 23 July 2018 - 08:13 PM.


#608
Darth Carnifex

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Submission Name: Ferrata-class Corps Assault Carrier
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: Add more vehicles to the hangars
Reason for Modification: More vehicles have been made
Modification:
 
Hangar:



#609
Darth Prazutis

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Submission Name: Goliath-class Super Star Dreadnought
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: Improvements
Reason for Modification: New Artificial Intelligence was approved, need to replace the old and add in a new tech approved tech 
Modification:

 

  • Countermeasures
    • Sensor Jammers
    • Comm Jammers
    • Missile Jammers
  • Internal Defenses
    • Defensive Autoblasters
    • Ray Shields
    • Turadium Bulkheads
    • Labyrinthine Interior with Natural Chokepoints

 

STANDARD FEATURES

ADVANCED SYSTEMS



#610
Zef Halo

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Reviewing.

#611
Zef Halo

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Updated.



#612
Kaine Australis

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Submission Name:  The Dozen's Cruiser
Link to Submission: Link
Summary of Modification: Add Sunrise Latakia to affiliation, some cosmetic changes to reflect new ownership.
Reason for Modification: Faction RP dying, should have made it character affiliated the first time
Modification:


 
Submission Name:  The Dozen's Droidfighters
Link to Submission: Link
Summary of Modification: Add Sunrise Latakia to affiliation, some cosmetic changes to reflect new ownership.
Reason for Modification: Faction RP dying, should have made it character affiliated the first time
Modification:


Submission Name:  Fury Class Fighter
Link to Submission: Link
Summary of Modification: Add MandalArms, Closed-Market  to affiliation
Reason for Modification: Make the sub sale-able outside the ME
Modification:

 
Submission Name:  Kiffu-Class Carrier
Link to Submission: Link
Summary of Modification: Add MandalArms, Closed-Market  to affiliation
Reason for Modification: Make the sub sale-able outside the ME
Modification:


Submission Name:  God'Buir Class-Fighter
Link to Submission: Link
Summary of Modification: Add Closed-Market to affiliation
Reason for Modification: Wish to make this one sale-able
Modification:


Edited by Kaine Australis, 15 August 2018 - 08:06 AM.

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#613
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Submission Name: Phaethon - Class Assault Transport.
Link to Submission: Click.
Summary of Modification: Submission Archival.
Reason for Modification: Heading in a new aesthetic direction with the Sun Guard, and would like to archive this submission. Effectively decommissioning the Gunship.
Modification: N/A
 
Submission Name: VCC-01 “Crusader” - Pattern Heavy Corvette.
Link to Submission: Click.
Summary of Modification: Submission Archival.
Reason for Modification: Heading in a new aesthetic direction with the Sun Guard, and would like to archive this submission. Effectively decommissioning the Corvette.
Modification: N/A

Edited by Khonsu Amon, 09 August 2018 - 03:51 PM.

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#614
Veiere Arenais

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Submission Name: Providence (Jedi Praxeum Vessel).
Link to Submission: Click Here.
Summary of Modification:

Reason for Modification: Former Affiliated Faction is inactive and membership has since been changed. I'm renewing the purpose and intent of this Submission to provide for a new Faction interest under the administration of Asha Hex, a long time friend and affiliation of Veiere Arenais.

Modification:
Description: Over the decade that has passed, the former Academy Vessel of the Deneba Jedi Order has been left to roam the Galaxy with only a handful coming and going. Having kept watch from afar and wary of it falling into the wrong hands, following the Siege of Commenor, Veiere Arenais has made contact with the Woman, Asha Hex, whom is responsible for his Son's training and growth within the Force, that she might make good use of the massive ship, knowing her genuine and moral standards will see the former Master's age old ambitions come to light in the shape and form of what the Je'daii were for the Enclave of Svivren.


Edited by Veiere Arenais, 10 August 2018 - 05:29 PM.


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Submission Name: TTH/NGB-001 “Phaedra” - Class Systems Star-Glaive.
Link to Submission: Click.
Summary of Modification: Word Change.
Reason for Modification: Didn't notice until after the thread was locked that a written numerical went unchanged. 
Modification: Image - Change the (Counts as Four Turbolasers) section to (Counts as Eight Turbolasers).

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#616
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Submission Name: Trakranak-class Fleet Control Station

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...ontrol-station/
Summary of Modification: Change Affiliation 
Reason for Modification: Mandalorians Faction is defunct
Modification: Change Affiliation to Closed Market

 

Submission Name: Bes'drahr-class Battleship (Iron Dragon)

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...ip-iron-dragon/
Summary of Modification: Change Affiliation 
Reason for Modification: Mandalorian Clans Faction is defunct
Modification: Change Affiliation to Closed Market

 

Submission Name: Shaadlar Type II Corvette

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...pe-ii-corvette/
Summary of Modification: Change Affiliation 
Reason for Modification: Mandalorians Faction is defunct
Modification: Change Affiliation to Closed Market

 

Submission Name: ACS Modular Drop Pod

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...dular-drop-pod/
Summary of Modification: Change Affiliation 
Reason for Modification: Mandalorians and One Sith Factions are defunct
Modification: Change Affiliation to Closed Market

 

Submission Name: Ra'gr-class Superiority Starfighter

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...ty-starfighter/
Summary of Modification: Change Affiliation 
Reason for Modification: Mandalorians Faction is defunct
Modification: Change Affiliation to Closed Market



#617
Vanessa Vantai

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Submission: Resolute-class Supercarrier

Reason: Needs 5.0 Update

Mod: Move to pre-factory

 

Submission: Tempest-class Light Bomber

Reason: Needs 5.0 Update

Mod: Move to pre-factory

 

Submission: Mynock-class Space Superiority Fighter

Reason: Needs 5.0 Update

Mod: Move to pre-factory



#618
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Submission Name: Imperial-X II Class Star Destroyer 
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...star-destroyer/

Summary of Modification: Change in regards to image
Reason for Modification: Found a new dope image for the vessel
Modification: 

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