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Arcadia-N-30
Region: Outer 

System: Z0-XX
Suns: 1, Solari, 
Orbital Position:  habital zone
Moons: 1, Kyros
Coordinates:


Rotational Period: 26 hours
Orbital Period: 456
 
Class: Terrestrial
Atmosphere: Type 1
Climate: Temperate
Gravity: standard
Primary Terrain: grassland and urban
 Native species: Ithurian (extinct)
Immigrated species: all types this is a trade hotspot and all are welcome so long as they have the coin to pay.
Primary languages: Galactic Basic
Government: Federal republic
Population: 9 billion
Demonym: Arcadian
Major cities: Arcadia, Aries, Neos
Major imports: System standard trade (Food and other natural things that Arcadia has a hard time producing)
Major exports: System standard trade (Weapons, Droids, Medicine, Chemical, Metals(common), Fuel, etc.. )
Affiliation: N/A
 
Culture: The people of Arcadia partake in very many traditions as this is a melding pot planet and makes the most of its people. A people divided are unhappy and unhappy people buy less product, less product means less income and that is bad for business! The general rule of thumb is work hard for what you have and coin can save your life. The majority of people who live on Arcadia do not stay long and those that do typically do so for power of mass wealth as the government is corrupt and usually follows the major faction holding power. Many of the festivals although do stem from a mix of the now extinct original species (Which were Ithorians, wiped out during the first years of the war after many of the jungles were targeted as the first extermination sites) and human festivals most revolving around: Life, Hope Prosperity and Luck. The most notable being The Games, in which 7 promising Children are given an item of power and work together to defeat challenges set by the 3 elders of the planet (one from each large city Arcadia, Aries and Neos) over a 4 day span the chosen children (if they succeed) are then selected for training to become the next set of city leaders (equal to that of a mayor) the games are held every year and elections are held every 10.

 

Technology: The technology of Arcadia is a plethora of different species melding together making Arcadia one of the most advanced planets in the outer rim, however the use of the technology us within the hands of the major faction holding the biggest stick.

 

History: Concerned about the safety of the civilians who had suffered greatly during the great Star wars  Wars, An anon founded Arcadia as an organization dedicated to providing support to the refugees and survivors. Treating humans and Other species equally and doing everything in its power to tend to them and their needs. Leaders quickly earned a reputation among the refugees which allowed them to maintain order within the organisation and the survivors. however soon crime would grip this world once again causing a great world war. Devastating bombs used against harmless and innocent refugees and places of sanctuary destroyed the land that once promised prosperity and recovery to the people lay in ruin.

After the devastating conclusion of the four year long conflict, expanded from an organization of good into a giant city with its own government. While the name "Arcadia" officially referred to the government in power, the Capital city itself was generally also called by that name. With virtually the entire world lying in ruins, unsuitable to sustain most life, Arcadia became the center of the world and its only still functional city, housing the entire remaining world population. With the creation of Arcadia as a city and government came two primary objectives: To eradicate the crimelords who had been the cause of great turmoil and suffering to many of the refugees and restoring the world from the horrible scars it had suffered after centuries of warfare. The nameless hero having earned the reputation of a legendary hero because of his efforts in the war and feats of great compassion, became the leader of Arcadia, commonly referred to as "Lightbringer" by citizens.

However soon the Great hero named Lightbringer disappeared many believing him dead tried to assume the role of leader. This once again tossed the planet into a struggle for power many of the candidates becoming large business moguls trying to buy the loyalty of the people by creating new and powerful products turning the planet of Arcadia into a mass trade planet the planet being ruled by the 6 masters of the realm and strongest company names on the planet. Each company expanding and making the City of Arcadia into 3 districts Aries, the outermost layer. Neos, the secondary layer and Arcadia the innermost layer. The layers seperated by domed walls to hold out radiation an other threats the population has since boomed and grown immensely.  

 

 Notable PC's: N/A

 
Intent: To create a prosperous planet of trade to make trade between factions in the lower quarters of the galaxy easier.



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Maria Natalja

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Looks interesting, but there are some things which will have to be corrected:

  • Even though native species are extinct, you should still mention then and then point out, that they are extinct. Please add the native species.
  • Language: Galactic Basic Standard
  • What do you mean with 'All standard trade'? There are so many different kinds of standard: city's standard, planetary standard, system's standard, galactic standard, etc. Please clarify that and point out some of the goods they trade.
  • Please change 'the winning side' to something different. It's not very good to phrase it like this in a submission.
  • Culture section is a bit too short. Please add a bit more to it. I understand how terrible it can be to add some more culture when it's asked for, but since culture is such a wide term, you can basically add everything to this section. :)

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There are some things I asked for which you may have not noticed:

 

 

Even though native species are extinct, you should still mention then and then point out, that they are extinct. Please add the native species.

 

 

 

Please clarify that and point out some of the goods they trade.

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(Which were Ithorians, wiped out during the first years of the war after many of the jungles were targeted as the first extermination sites)

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I actually meant it to be added to the Native Species section. ;) Please add it there.


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Looks good enough. Approved by me, pending secondary.


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... I have a moon named after me

*swoons*

 

Approved.


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