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Gherron Vael

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Valiens Nantaris Alright, will do. I'm on my phone at the moment, so next time I reach a computer, I'll set it up.

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Andrea Kryze

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Valiens Nantaris Gherron Vael Conforming my approval of this swap. Sorry to post this late xD

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Balaya Praelior

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@Valiens Nebtaris

 

http://starwarsrp.ne...1-the-foretold/

 

I have the edits in google doc and am ready to fix it.



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Valiens Nantaris

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Darth Praelior

Despite the egregious misspelling of my name...the submission has been unlocked.


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Valiens Nantaris

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@Vi'kas Mirtis

Not sure how I missed you. Your new sub will be unlocked.

 

However mark my words well. Try this again and you will no longer be welcome in the Codex.


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Lord Ajihad

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Valiens Nantaris

Yeah, sorry about that:mellow: . I thought second chance was only if you thought your original post was unjustly denied. Won't happen again.


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Zephyr Carrick

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http://starwarsrp.ne.../49895-nemesis/Was denied due to time constraints at the time. and having to leave the site. I never finished the last post in the thread, So I pumped one out, and hope to have this reopened to be judged again. I might have to update the submission due to the new Codex regulations.

 

Thanks in advanced. 



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Nickolas Imura

It will be restored and reopened.

 

Please post there and tag Anja Aj'Rou when you're ready for it to be judged.


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Zephyr Carrick

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Valiens Nantaris, Thank you



#30
Balaya Praelior

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Croa

 

Revised submission following advice and rulings, have over 1000 dev posts built into testing, using, augmenting and showing the aggressiveness of the species. Revised strengths and weakness, distinctions, culture, some history and emphasis on them being a parasitic sithspawn that makes the host body something best for itself through altering the body and slowly killing it.

 



#31
Valiens Nantaris

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Balaya Praelior

This is acceptable.

 

You may post it as a new species submission.

 

As this is a particularly thorny submission I will be assigning a judge as normal, but they will be working with a colleague behind the scenes. If they reach a verdict of pending approval, final approval will be done by Lorelei Darke or Kyra Sol as I denied the first posting.

 

If you have any questions, please PM me.


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Bloodknight

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The "D" Rose

 

 

In retrospect, I'm not sure how this went over my head. Probably due to lack of sleep. In any case, I'd be happy to remove the rather inappropriate nickname for this plant and replace it with one that doesn't sound like it came from the mind of a pre-teen high on hormones.


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Bloodknight

Alright, but remember that this is your final chance. I don't want a whiff of scandal about this.

 

I will retrieve it. When you are ready and have finished the edits tag me and I will allocate a new judge.


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Draco Vereen

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http://starwarsrp.ne...gana-homestead/

 

I'd like this second chanced. Upon realizing what components were requiring additional development, most of these things were incredibly basic (stun fence to keep out wildlife, specifically stated to keep out wildlife and not shock children or family pets), Training and Servant Droids (Stated to be used solely for training and mundane purposes), A Star Wars exercise room, star wars bug zappers, and a basic short term shield (stated to only last long enough for the family to not get insta-ganked by a turbolaser); Along with several dev'd and approved Factory submissions. 



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Draco Vereen

I'll take this on personally.


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Elaine Thul

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Valiens Nantaris can you please dig this out



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Valiens Nantaris

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Elaine Thul

Done.


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Jareth Johnathon Holst

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(http://starwarsrp.ne.../48517-lateria/)

 

Had a planet I was building but when one of the species subs were denied I iced it. Looking to recycle some of the ideas for it in a rework and I wanted to make sure I was going through proper channels if you wouldnt mind opening this one back up (accompanied with some pretty major edits)


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Jareth Johnathon Holst

I'll allow you to do a new submission for it, though ensure that the edits outlined by my judge on the previous occasion be followed.

 

This will not count as a second chance.


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The Shadow King

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Can I have this brought back out for a second chance please?