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Allyson Locke

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Second chance granted, please make edits according to what we discussed thank you. 



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Disregard this Request, sorry Allyson.


Edited by Veiere Arenais, 17 February 2018 - 05:53 AM.

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Veiere Arenais


Granted

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http://starwarsrp.ne...tis-bor-gullet/

 

I would like the opportunity to change the name of the sub, remove all references to the reason it was denied, and re-submit it for review.


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Helix Syndicate Granted, I'll move it to the Pre-Codex. 



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http://starwarsrp.ne...ic#entry1727131

 

Hey, could I get this moved to pre-codex to get it ready for review again. Now that I am back, would love to give this the chance it deserves

 

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I just want this http://starwarsrp.ne...952-nocnafuria/ or this http://starwarsrp.ne...206-nocnafuria/ moved out so I can make the appropriate edits. Can even be the same judge. Not looking for a second chance just to fix what was asked on the first one.


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Allyson Locke

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Second chances never give the same judged, but after reading this over, I'm going to approve it. Please work with the judge that is assigned to it. 



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requesting a second chance

 

http://starwarsrp.ne...n-clan-compound

 

 

Reasons:

 

lack of communication on my part, and I believe first judge contradicted himself on asking for one thing then in the next post ask for way much for then he normally wanted. as well was informed I could copy and paste the history of dxun by one judge as long as I gave credit and my current judge said I couldn't


Edited by Arekk, 03 June 2018 - 04:23 PM.
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A'den Kyr'am

 

After reviewing the judgement and reviewing what happened in General chat of the discord I'm denying this submission's second chance. The way you acted was out of line. As another note, no you can't just copy paste straight from the Wikipedia and add a couple of lines. You can quote the Wikipedia giving credit and having it properly cited. That is someone else's work and you're not going to be able to claim it as your own. The Codex Judge you asked gave you a good response in regards of the understanding that the ENTIRE submission wasn't going to be the wiki page. 


Edited by Allyson Locke, 04 June 2018 - 01:54 AM.


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I would like to accept the offer of a second chance for the Adept Circle please.

I feel the submission can be fixed with the express caveat that only the vessel is cloaked, not the fighters it launches, and that it must release the illusion in order to conduct offensive operations; as the Fallanassi would cease to participate from the point hostilities commence.


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Kaine Australis

 

Please allow a day for review, I need to have one of the RPJs review with me since I was the one that denied it. 



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Kaine Australis

 

While I appreciate the willingness to work on this, I'm going to have to uphold the denial and go as far as to deny it on concept. Though conventional cloaking devices have a similar effect, they are not totally immune from detection as is the case with the White Current. Per the Wiki, the Fallanassi method of cloaking via Force Immersion would render the vessel undetectable by any means, both artificial and organic. It is simply not compatible with a roleplay environment.