Second chance granted, please make edits according to what we discussed thank you.
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Hey, could I get this moved to pre-codex to get it ready for review again. Now that I am back, would love to give this the chance it deserves
I just want this http://starwarsrp.ne...952-nocnafuria/ or this http://starwarsrp.ne...206-nocnafuria/ moved out so I can make the appropriate edits. Can even be the same judge. Not looking for a second chance just to fix what was asked on the first one.
requesting a second chance
lack of communication on my part, and I believe first judge contradicted himself on asking for one thing then in the next post ask for way much for then he normally wanted. as well was informed I could copy and paste the history of dxun by one judge as long as I gave credit and my current judge said I couldn't
Edited by Arekk, 03 June 2018 - 04:23 PM.
Link added as requested.
After reviewing the judgement and reviewing what happened in General chat of the discord I'm denying this submission's second chance. The way you acted was out of line. As another note, no you can't just copy paste straight from the Wikipedia and add a couple of lines. You can quote the Wikipedia giving credit and having it properly cited. That is someone else's work and you're not going to be able to claim it as your own. The Codex Judge you asked gave you a good response in regards of the understanding that the ENTIRE submission wasn't going to be the wiki page.
Edited by Allyson Locke, 04 June 2018 - 01:54 AM.
I would like to accept the offer of a second chance for the Adept Circle please.
I feel the submission can be fixed with the express caveat that only the vessel is cloaked, not the fighters it launches, and that it must release the illusion in order to conduct offensive operations; as the Fallanassi would cease to participate from the point hostilities commence.
'It gives me strength to have somebody to fight for; I can never fight for myself, but, for others, I can kill.'
While I appreciate the willingness to work on this, I'm going to have to uphold the denial and go as far as to deny it on concept. Though conventional cloaking devices have a similar effect, they are not totally immune from detection as is the case with the White Current. Per the Wiki, the Fallanassi method of cloaking via Force Immersion would render the vessel undetectable by any means, both artificial and organic. It is simply not compatible with a roleplay environment.
I would like a second chance, honestly this is the second time I've needed to approve myself for a marketplace purchase from my own company. Junko is part of the family and works out contracts for the company as recently as with the consortium and as far back as she worked with the first dominion when there was still a republic. Now in terms of the weaknesses and deployment... they are a defense fleet not expeditionary. THey would be limited to a single system that recruits and builds its own ships. They could easily reach mass deployment across a single system but wouldn't have the numbers to go outwards to their colonies. It is stated in the weakness itself that they are limited to their system and close to the flagship.
Not sure if it's technically a second chance, but I need this taken out of the archives. The agreed upon edits have been made to the submission since it was archives(Possibly before, but I didn't get to it in time). http://starwarsrp.ne...04-vsf-jackals/Arekk Allyson Locke
Edited by Vulpesen, 08 August 2018 - 10:55 PM.
I would like to request a new judge for this submission, based on the fact that the current judge has been vaguely rude re: the content of the submission, overly nitpicky in places, and seems to have not read the submission in its entirety. I am aware that the Codex is currently closed, and I will need to wait, and am perfectly happy with that.