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#81
Allyson Locke

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Rohak Vizsla

Under review

#82
Lisza Starseeker

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Allyson Locke Can I get this sub brought back out? 


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#83
Allyson Locke

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Lisza Starseeker Done. 



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Khonsu Amon

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Allyson Locke | Irajah Ven | Zeradias Mant - Whenever you have a chance, could I ask that this submission be removed from the archives and placed back in the Pre-Codex section? Thank you. :)


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Irajah Ven

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Khonsu Amon

 

Done


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Velok the Younger

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Allyson Locke

 

This got archived while I was moving: http://starwarsrp.ne...o-walk-the-ice/

 

The weapon in question was commissioned for the Whiphids, as explained in its description, by Velok.


Edited by Velok the Younger, 01 September 2018 - 03:52 PM.


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A'den Kyr'am

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Allyson Locke

I wish for a different judge on this submission please.

http://starwarsrp.ne...80-the-otadaye/

I have already given everything he's asking for and I'm not willing to lower security standards on it

#88
Allyson Locke

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All handled...yes. 



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Vespasian the Elder

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Allyson Locke

http://starwarsrp.ne...h/#entry1880727

I am requesting this to be reviewed.

I personally see no sense, maybe due to lacking explanation, why to remove a crucial detail from the submission.
Everywhere else I note the encouragement to expand on details and the necessarity to give them, but not here?
We shall give squadron counts, lengths of ships, character heights or ages but not manpower? That sounds rather nonsensical.

So I request to either explain it to me in a logical way which makes sense or to simply re-judge the submission.

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Allyson Locke

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Its not a critical detail necessary for the submission. If you want hard numbers then you should keep them in your notes. RP doesnt function on hard numbers and only provides confusion to other writers.

After reviewing your submission, you were very hard pressed to not change when the judge provided an explanation for you. You were unwilling to be open minded. A judge is there to help you bring your submission to the standards of the board at large.

Also ship length are needed for fleet sizes, character age and height are descriptors but you dont have to put it. Your judge explained it, but it seemed you didn't want to accept it.

The hard number should and needs to be removed to keep it in line with other submissions and the template. You're more than welcomed to keep the number in your notes and present them when rp happens, but do not readily expect your opponent or another writer to be so ready with hard numbers, since we do not function with hard numbers.

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Vespasian the Elder

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Feth.

 

As you say. Open it again and I will remove the number ...


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A'den Kyr'am

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http://starwarsrp.ne...t/#entry1909407


I'd like a second chance at this with a different judge that is more helpful as my current one gave no help, crowd resourcing is not helping

#93
Irajah Ven

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@A'den Kyr'am

 

As per our PM, I'll be archiving this sub at your request.


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