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#401
Natalie LaForte

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Submission Name: Lunara Ochenta

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...enta/?hl=lunara
Summary of Modification: Archival
Reason for Modification: Going to be using Lunara as a PC
Modification: Archival? 


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#402
Anweald Bermann

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Submission Name: Fort Galderra
 
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...-fort-galderra/
Summary of Modification: Name Change, add Platinum Mine, add Monastary
Reason for Modification: Growth of the town into a city, platinum discovered, monastery restored
Modification: First, change "Fort Galderra" to "Castle Galderra" - leave tags and mention of Fort Galderra in the post so it can be searched
 
Secondly, these items are meant to follow immediately after "Galderra Royal Treasury Headquarters"
 



[color=#20b2aa][b]High Neyhral[/b][/color]
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[url=https://pe-travers.deviantart.com/art/Old-Monastery-552986730]Old Monastery[/url] by PE-Travers
High Neyhral is the ancient Monastery that holds the Order of Neyhral, who practice the Force Philosophy "Galderra Magic." They do not teach anyone how to use this Force Power but the chosen one, and there can only be one each lifetime. There are very few of them left, and they stay solitary within their monastery. The town frequently supports them with food, and the government does not tax them.
[u]Defenses[/u]
1 Local Militia[/spoiler]
[color=#20b2aa][b]Mining Facility Gamma-12[/b][/color]
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[url=http://www.spaghettiandmeeples.com/tag/sci-fi/]scifi miniature[/url]
Mining Facility Gamma-12 is the newest mining facility as it was just recently it discovered a deposit of [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Platinum]Platinum[/url]. The King has made an order that it will not be used for construction or hoarded by the government, instead it will be used as currency and also sold as an export to boost Galderras Economy. Advisors suggest this could help pay their resource problem and have a stable, natural income of necessary resources. It uses galaxy-standard mining equipment. It is not located within Galderra Walls
[u]Defenses[/u]
15+ Soldiers[/spoiler]


Previews of edits: High Nehyral, Mining Facility Gamma-12


Edited by Eddak Manod, 14 January 2018 - 03:41 PM.

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#403
Veiere Arenais

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Submission Name: The Force Enclave of Svivren.
 
Link to Submission: Click here.
Summary of Modification: Name Change to: "The Silent Enclave".
Reason for Modification: A simple name request to better fit the running theme around the Je'daii Order and their similar location submissions.
Modification: Requesting a rename of the Submission Title itself to match the above Summary. 

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#404
Kalyn Shif

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Submission Name: The Standing Stones of Bakura

Link to Submission: Link
Summary of Modification: Change name from "The Standing Stones of Bakura" to "The Silent Stones of Bakura", as well as any other areas in the submission where it is referred to as "Standing Stones" instead of "Silent Stones"
Reason for Modification: To bring the name of the Temple in line with other Je'daii structures, allowing them to be more cohesive
Modification: See Summary of Modification; Altering all mention of "Standing Stones" to "Silent Stones"


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#405
Aryn Teth

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Submission Name: Vero

Link to Submission: link

Summary of Modification: Change of Coordinates from M-52 to N-51

Reason for Modification: The planet was subbed with the intention of being used for a Galactic Alliance dominion, but the coordinates were accidently selected as the location of an ORC dominion prior to the map update.

Modification: Change of Coordinates for the planet from M-52 to N-51


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#406
Zeradias Mant

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Updated.

 

Eddak Manod

 

Do you have a thread link I can put in the thread as well supporting these new developments?


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#407
Anweald Bermann

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Zeradias Mant

 

 

 

Growth of Galderra grew from this thread which gave way to a Major Project with a Major Faction. If you need a thread for the Platinum, I can make it.

 

The Monastery was discovered in this thread.


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#408
Isamu Baelor

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Submission Name: Arondight

Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Archival
Reason for Modification: Need it archived.
Modification: Archived.


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#409
Allyson Locke

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Approved only because the planet is not on the map. Once a planet makes it on the map it cannot be archived. 



#410
Darth Tacitus

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Submission Name: Rath Exigo

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...exigo-the-rake/
Summary of Modification: Requesting archival
Reason for Modification: Using him as a player character
Modification: Archival


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#411
Helix Syndicate

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Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Enforcers

Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Updating image and description.
Reason for Modification: To reflect changes in the Helix Syndicate.
Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.


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#412
Helix Syndicate

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Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Shock Troopers

Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Updating image and description.
Reason for Modification: To reflect changes in the Helix Syndicate.
Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.


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#413
Helix Syndicate

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Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Rangers

Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Delete/Archive.
Reason for Modification: They will be replaced by something better.
Modification: Deleting the thread entirely would be preferable, but if that isn't an option, please have it archived.


Edited by Helix Syndicate, 22 January 2018 - 12:50 PM.

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#414
Khonsu Amon

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Submission Name: Thyrsian Sun Guards
Link to Submission: [ Linked Here. ]
Summary of Modification: Updating Equipment to reflect newly approved Factory submission.
Reason for Modification: Updating Equipment.
Modification: Please replace the link and text from the Military Mobility Shield with the following, VDS-01 “Aegis” - Pattern Military Mobility Shield, and thanks!  
 

http://starwarsrp.ne...obility-shield/




#415
Zeradias Mant

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All subs have been updated.


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#416
Anweald Bermann

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Submission Name: College of Galderra, Pzob Orbital Array - Commenor Embassy, Fort Galderra
Link to Submission: Links made in Submission Name due to amount.
Summary of Modification: Pull for Edits
Reason for Modification: Due to unforeseen circumstances, I must edit all locations
Modification:


I need to edit all locations, please bring out for edits and unlock

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#417
Helix Syndicate

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Submission Name: Deglarch
Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Template needs to be updated and reorganized, change tags.
Reason for Modification: Trying to keep things up to date and uniform.
Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.


Edited by Helix Syndicate, 23 January 2018 - 02:12 PM.

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#418
Helix Syndicate

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Submission Name: Rahgot
Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Template needs to be updated and reorganized, change tags.
Reason for Modification: Trying to keep things up to date and uniform.
Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.


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#419
Itash Mecetti

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Submission Name: Didact Cyclone Troopers
Link to Submission: X
Summary of Modification: Swap out images and update image credit.
Reason for Modification: To keep everything nice and consistent.
Modification:
 


Edited by Itash Mecetti, 03 February 2018 - 07:14 AM.

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#420
Marina DeVoe

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Posted my ship mod request in wrong forum.

 

Disregard this.


Edited by Marina DeVoe, 13 February 2018 - 07:39 AM.

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