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#41
Maria Natalja

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Fabula Cavataio, shame on you! :P

 

However, I took care of the request.


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Alexander Sannes

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Submission Name: Order of the Grey Naboo Enclave

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...-naboo-enclave/
Reason for Modification: Want to give it an outside View
Modification: http://fc08.devianta...all-d2yr2hx.jpg

Add this picture to it please
 



#43
Nimue Stormson

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Major Location:

 

Force Nexus: The Force Nexus on Effekt had been created hundreads of years ago by a group of forces users,elieved to be sorcerers in a failed attempt to try and harness ultimate power. The result was the complete destruction of the city of Kullcor where they’d ruled. The Nexus itself was created thanks to this event by absorbing the energy of the hundreds of dead citizens and become a darkside Nexus. However without anyone to use it the Nexus itself became dormant until it was reawaken thanks to the Sith Lord Darth Arcanix and the ruler of the planet Effekt, where the Nexus is, Empress Nimue Stormson. They’d used the energy from a large tribe of slain dwergi, man-beast creatures who live on the planet, to repower it where it currently remains within the ruins.

 

Size: Small

 

 

Intent: To add a major location which will be part of the planet's storyline, as well as Nimue Stormborns. It will be a plot device and a means of trying to create a weapon for the Empress before becoming a major issue that may or may not need to be destoryed because of the problems it causes with the people of the planet.


Edited by Nimue Stormson, 16 February 2015 - 11:52 PM.


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Valiens Nantaris

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Nimue Stormson

Sorry it's taken a while.

 

Just explain to me the effect of this nexus. Will it allow a Force user to draw on additional power or is it just an emotional Force nexus?


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Nimue Stormson

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Valiens Nantaris

 

More drawing on additonal power. Given it's pervious intent, which is over at this point, I think it's better it act as a power source type of nexus.



#46
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Alright, I will allow this because it fits well. However, I do not want to see it being misused.


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Nimue Stormson

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Valiens Nantaris

 

Don't worry. I know the boundaries with force nexus'. I don't intend to misuse it. :)



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Judas Foster

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Submission Name: Rhaegos

Reason for Modification: Appearance changes.
Modification: Attachment of this image. Here's the credit. Just remove the other pictures as well and their respective credits.

[ Sword | Armor | Ship ]

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Mordecai Zambrano

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Ibby

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Submission Name: The Blind Ones

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...the-blind-ones/
Reason for Modification: A change in measurement for the eggs.
Modification: In the bullet point labelled "Offspring", I mentioned that the egg was 6 inches in circumference...I meant to put diameter, as a circumference of 6 inches would mean the diameter would be about 2 inches across...a very strange-looking egg, to be sure.


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#51
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Ibelia Sitos

Edit made.

 

Compliments again on that sub.


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Valiens Nantaris

 

Thank you :)


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#53
Ue-‘Kuo-‘Koe’c’cu-Eou

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Submission Name: The Blind Ones

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...the-blind-ones/
Reason for Modification: I finally got around to not only drawing a more accurate idea of what I want the head to be, but also resized it. Hooplah for breaking the chain of procrastination!
Modification:  Exchange this picture for the picture of the head, please! 


Edited by Ue-‘Kuo-‘Koe’c’cu-Eou, 06 April 2015 - 05:08 PM.

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#54
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Ue-‘Kuo-‘Koe’c’cu-Eou

 

Edit made. Please make your edit requests under the account name with which you originally posted the sub next time. :)

 

(Nice sub, by the way)


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Ue-‘Kuo-‘Koe’c’cu-Eou

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Lorelei Darke

 

Oops! Sorry >.> 

 

 

And thank you xD 


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Zahori Denko

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Submission Name: Deilos

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne.../16723-deilos™/

Reason for Modification: Decided to have the planet somewhere closer to where Jae'koris works.

Modification: Change coordinates to M-16, Region to Expansion Region


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Submission Name: The Blood Monarchs 
Reason for Modification: Changed the Blood Monarchs into the Morpho Security Division. Further addition of clone squad, making the unit size (96 soldiers and 6 officers)
Modification: Commander Temi is no longer with the One Sith and works for the Techno Union. The Morpho Security Division carries the same weapons as before but now wear the following armor:
CS-004 Olympian Battle Armor

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#58
Quietus

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Tmoxin Temi

 

 

 

This link is linked to the main forum page. Please fix this.


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#59
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Anja Aj'Rou

 

Done.


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Reverance

 

 

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...d/?hl=nuhlrokka

 

This is linked to your submission in the OS forum. Please change it to the official codex submission.


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