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#581
Kaida Taldir

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Irajah Ven

 

 

It seems two pieces of equipment accidentally got lost when you updated the Exemplars

 

 

In Equipment, could you please change this line:

 

 

to this:

 

 



#582
Irajah Ven

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Kaida Taldir whoops thank you very much. 

 

Updated both.


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#583
Tathra Khaeus

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Submission Name: ​Edemar

Link to Submission: X
Summary of Modification: Changing stuff to fit current times
Reason for Modification: Well, I made the planet for a faction; said faction is gone and I wish to update the planet.
Modification:

 

The modifications were overall just be additional history and the re-wording of a lot of stuff regarding the planet. I'd prefer just to have access to the submission itself so I can take my time with it. It'll be quiet an overhaul.

 


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#584
Irajah Ven

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Done.


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#585
Noah Corek

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Submission Name: Republic Army Rangers

Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Add a little more lore to the unit
Reason for Modification: See above
Modification: Add this below equipment: 

Motto: Rangers Lead the Way, All the Way

 


Edited by Noah Corek, 07 October 2018 - 12:14 AM.

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#586
Irajah Ven

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updated


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#587
Zark

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Submission Name: The Dawnguard

Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Changing name to The Dawnforged
Reason for Modification: Had forgotten there was already an IC Jedi group by that name, and I'm a beautiful unique snowflake so.
Modification:

 


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#588
Irajah Ven

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Updated


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#589
Kaida Taldir

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Submission Name: The Revenants

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Update equipment.
Reason for Modification: Got some new stuff, replacing some gear. Cleaning up format a bit to make it more readable.
Modification:

 

In Equipment, replace the current list with this:

 

Weapons/armour:

 

Misc:

 

Cybenetics:

 


Edited by Kaida Taldir, 25 October 2018 - 01:46 PM.


#590
Siobhan Kerrigan

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Submission Name: Sistren of the Eternal Flame

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Change Deployment from Limited to Minor. Update equipment.
Reason for Modification: Acqired some Minor production gear in the marketplace. Upgrading Deployment rating after reassessing unit role and equipment. I've learned that Limited means something like platoons or squads, so a small boost reflects the size I expected this pyromancer unit to have.
Modification:

 

 

In Deployment, change this:

 

  • Deployment: Limited

to this:

 

  • Deployment: Minor

 

 

In Equipment, add:


Edited by Siobhan Kerrigan, 17 October 2018 - 05:09 AM.

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#591
Kaida Taldir

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Submission Name: Watchers of the Night

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Change Availability to Rare.
Reason for Modification: Reassessed unit based on discussion and examination of their equipment and role.
Modification:

 

 

In Availability, change this:

 

  • Availability: Unique.

To this:

 

  • Availability: Rare.

 



#592
Allyson Locke

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Done.



#593
Siobhan Kerrigan

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Submission Name: Leonina Varkathras

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Additions to Possesions and Historical Information. Edit in Skills.
Reason for Modification: Update character a bit.
Modification:

 

In Role, change this:

 

  • Role: Order of Fire equivalent of a Jedi Guardian, swordmistress, instructor. ​

 

to this:

 

  • Role: Order of Fire equivalent of a Jedi Guardian, swordmistress, instructor. 2IC of the Order.​

 

 

In Notable Possessions add:

 

Leonina possesses a suit of Centurion Battle Armour. She owns a crossguard lightsabre with a dual phase mode, bifurcating cyclical ignition and other standard lightsabre systems.

 

 

In Skills, change:

 

this:

  • Force Sense

 

to this:

  • Battlemind

 

change this:

  • Breath Control

 

to this:

  • Force Resistance

 

In Personality add:

 

 

As is common among members of the Order of Fire, Leonina has both an Order rank and a military rank. As an officer she is serious and rather by the book, but not a martinet. She values initiative and quick thinking, but expects discipline. Gloryhounds, cowards and blood knights get short shrift from her. The same applies to sadistic and cruel beings. The Cathar does not glorify war, but views it as necessary to avert greater evil. However, she regards those who use it to commit atrocities as abhorrent. She realises that innocents die in war, but draws a distinction between collateral damage that is an unfortunate byproduct of war and willfully massacring civilians and the like. This is connected to her experiences during the Republic-One Sith War.

 

 

While Leonina has drifted from Jedi orthodoxy and now espouses views that are closer to Potentium or certain Grey Jedi beliefs, she still stays away from the darker aspects of the Force. She regards the Dark Side as something that is more internal, rather than being some of kind of demon that pounces on naughty Force-users. But this does not mean that darkness does not exist. Her views can cause friction with the more darksided members of the Order. However, Leonina is not preachey or a missionary, she simply expects her subordinates to comport themselves as professional soldiers and disciplines those who do not. She stresses personal responsibility on all levels. Leonina is a soldier, so she will kill in battle. However, she kills in hot blood, not in cold blood.

 

 

In Historical Information add:

 

 

Leonina has risen through the ranks of the Order of Fire and Firemane to become an officer with the rank of Colonel. This makes her one of the Order's most senior officers, right after Siobhan Kerrigan herself. She supervises many of the day-to-day affairs of the Order and is one of its most visible leaders. While she does not possess the raw power of some other Mistresses of the Order, she is a constant, steady and level-headed presence. She works long hours and has a good eye for detail. Her new role has also broadened her horizons, enabling her to develop her skills as a commander.

 

 

Siobhan trusts her, regarding her as loyal and competent. While being a senior officer means that Leonina spends more time behind a desk than she would like, she commands field operations in person whenever practical. Although she has adjusted to military life and does not wish to return to the Jedi, she remains in contact with her friend Phylis. Recently, she led the Order of Fire contingent during Firemane's expedition to the lost planet of Tephrike.


Edited by Siobhan Kerrigan, 14 November 2018 - 06:53 PM.

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#594
Karrigan'Xalda

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Submission Name: Tecuanimeh

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Update Equipment and Strengths/Weaknesses.
Reason for Modification: Got new stuff. Reassessed unit a bit.
Modification:

 

In Equipment, add:

 

 

In Strengths and Weaknesses, change this:

 

  • Composed of Force-sensitive Xioquo. The Tecuanimeh focus on Cryomancy, Force Concealment, Telekinesis, Force Flash and in using the Force to generate regular darkness, providing concealment. Their members are Apprentices or Knights.

 

to this:

 

  • Composed of Force-sensitive Xioquo. The Tecuanimeh focus on Cryomancy, Force Concealment, Telekinesis, Force Flash and Force Cloak. Moreover, they can use the Force to generate regular darkness to conceal themselves. Their members are experienced Knights. However, they are trained for stealth, subversion and assassination, not frontline combat. They also do not carry lightsabres and lack strong defensive abilities.

Edited by Karrigan'Xalda, 09 November 2018 - 12:22 PM.


#595
Kaida Taldir

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Submission Name: Kazal's Dune Raiders.

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Update Equipment.
Reason for Modification: Replacing a piece of equipment with a better model. Updating gear.
Modification:

 

 

In Equipment, change this:

 

  • Reinforced Duraplast armour.

 

to this:

 

 

 

In Equipment, add:


Edited by Kaida Taldir, 07 November 2018 - 07:43 AM.


#596
Anya Venari

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http://starwarsrp.ne...8450-liavondra/

 

Submission Name: Liavondra

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...8450-liavondra/
Summary of Modification: Archive submission.
Reason for Modification: I wish to redo this submission completely, and archiving is more efficient then trying to cut and pace in an old sub.
Modification: Archive submission.



#597
Valae Heavenshield

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Submission Name: The Silver Circle [NPCs]

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...er-circle-npcs/
Summary of Modification: Updated graphic, updated information concerning PCS and NPCs, updated location, updated ship
Reason for Modification: To update the sub to reflect new story changes and revamp
Modification: See spoiler. I am happy to update the sub myself, if that is easier.

 


Edited by Valae Heavenshield, 07 November 2018 - 12:17 PM.


#598
Glory

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Submission Name: Glory Hounds

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Update Equipment.
Reason for Modification: Got new custom suff.
Modification:

 

In Equipment, change this:

 

 

In terms of ground transport, they can call upon speeders and, if something heavier is required, Yazgid IFVs. However, they do not have any heavier armoured fighting vehicles than those.

 

 

to this:

 

 

In terms of ground transport, they can call upon speeder bikes, Bladesinger Combat Speeders and, if something heavier is required, Yazgid IFVs. However, they do not have any heavier armoured fighting vehicles than those.

 

 

In Equipment, Explosives, change

 

this:

 

 

to this:

 

 

In Equipment, Misc, add:

 

 

In Equipment, Sidearms, add:



#599
Allyson Locke

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Updated. 



#600
Maelion Liates

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Submission Name: Elysium Base

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...3-elysium-base/
Summary of Modification: Archive submission.
Reason for Modification: Location was destroyed IC and will no longer be used.
Modification: Archive submission


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