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Matsu Ike

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Name: Amberites

Designation: Semi-sentient

Homeworld: Catia a moon orbiting Shri-Tal

Language: Whoever they connect with

Average height of adults: .05m

Skin color: Amber

Hair color: N/A

Breathes: N/A

Strengths:

  • Able to bond with a force user

Weaknesses:

  • Is a crystal

  • is immobile by itself

  • cannot be heard except by a force user

  • Can be shattered

Distinctions: Being a crystalline being primarily within the crystal covered moon of Catia the Amberites bonds with different variates of force crystals most notably Adagen and its several types giving them an amber tinge

Average Lifespan: 40-80 years

Races: There are no other races of the species

Estimated Population: Around 200,000

Diet: They sustain themselves off of the ambient force energies within crystals

Communication: verbal and telepathic

Culture: The Amberite do not have a general culture, they grow on the moon of Catia and are drawn to a force crystal bonding with it and feeding off of it for the rest of their lives. As they feed more and more the crystal takes on a more amber tinge.

Technology level: They do not have the capability to use technology

General behavior: Once bonded with a being, the Amberite through their bond choose a name. Something the other has in their head. They then spend the rest of their lives with the being becoming a bondmate that will be able to learn a few secrets and things to pass on later in life but are not mobile holocrons.

History: The Amberites history is not so interesting, they have been used and sold across the galaxy as lightsaber crystals by jedi and sith lords. The most notable being theDark'chyld crystal used by the One Sith and crafted to fight the jedi. The living crystal slowly begin its life on Catia and grafts itself upon the crystal, slowly letting it grow around the amber crystalline being and producing an amber tinge to the otherwise clear crystals. When it is harvested for a lightsaber crystal there is a chance for it to bond through the construction process with the one making their blade. It is rare but once and if bonded it can speak to the being and at times from the saber itself. Their individual experiences change how they act and perceive the world in time growing to reflect what their bondmate wants.

 

Notable Player-Characters: N/A

Intent: To expand the species of Shri-tal and create something unique within its caves and to flesh out a previous submissions origin



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Vorhi Alestrani

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Okay, let's talk this one out.

 

 

There's no unit of measurement next to the number ".05" I'm gonna assume you meant meters, which make sense, but put it in there.

 

 

This line:

"Being a crystal primarily within the crystal covered moon of Catia the Amberites bombs with different variaties of force crystals most notably Adagen and its several types giving them an aber tinge."

 

 

Okay, slow it down a little, man. I'm not exactly certain what you're implying here. Are you saying that the Amberites crash landed on the moon via impact? Are you saying this occurred after the planet was bombarded with force energy from something?

 

 

Do a little proofreading for typos here and there. Nothing too huge, just small stuff.

 

 

Finally, please change homeworld to "Catia, a moon orbiting Shri-tal."


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Matsu Ike

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Vorhi Alestrani edited and no they were on the moon and have always lived there bonding with the crystals.



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Theophenes

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Ah, "bonds." Okay, now that makes way more sense.

 

 

You've made my requested edits, approved pending further review.



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Valiens Nantaris

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Approved.


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