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#641
Udrusa Chagteath

Udrusa Chagteath

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Submission Name:​ Azuria - The Saber of Udrusa

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...a/#entry1690454

Summary of Modification:​ Change of the lightsaber's external construction look

Reason for Modification:​ For reasons of both artistic change and practicality in combat.

Modification: Replacement of the original image source with this.

 

Thank you!



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Lily Kuhn

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Reason for Modification: Need to update the naming convention and tags to be in-line with other Helix Syndicate products.

Your submission will need to be reviewed and judged like a completely brand new submission if this is moved and unlocked, it will not be immediately re-approved. 

 

Do you still wish to have this moved to the pre-factory?


Edited by Nadja Keto, 12 January 2018 - 01:59 AM.

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#643
Helix Syndicate

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Nadja Keto

There would be no reason to deny it, so yes, please.

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Fiolette Yvarro

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Submission Name: Longbow Plasma Railgun

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations

Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology.

Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (x) as an affiliate.

 

Submission Name: Shortbow Plasma Railgun

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations

Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology.

Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (x) as an affiliate.

 

 

Submission Name: CFE-G2MK7

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations

Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology

Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (x) as an affiliate.


Edited by Fiolette Yvarro, 15 January 2018 - 10:28 PM.


#645
Mereel Vaun

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Submission Name: Second Son's Armor

Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Mereel's boots can magnetize to metallic surfaces in order to keep him from floating off into space when doing extravehicular activities in his armor. 
Reason for Modification: I realized that a life support unit in space isn't too great if you can't walk on magnetic surfaces while in space.
Modification: Magno-grip boots added under "Special Features"


Edited by Mereel Vaun, 18 January 2018 - 12:19 AM.

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Jak Sandrow

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Submission Name: JSA-VAR
Summary of Modification: Changing the production from Unique to Semi-Unique, and adding Ever Dawnracer as a PC who is able to use this weapon.
Reason for Modification: Ever Dawnracer gave me fudge brownies.
Modification:
 
Changing
  • Affiliation: Jak Sandrow
  • Production: Unique

to

  • Affiliation: Jak Sandrow, Ever Dawnracer
  • Production: Semi-Unique

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Credit to snowprincess-artist.tumblr.com for the bio photo, and Kaalia Voldaren for the tags!


#647
Lily Kuhn

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All requests approved, they are currently being updated.


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#648
Lily Kuhn

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Att: There is now a max of 3 modifications per request, and 3 active requests per writer at any given time.

 

As your requests are fulfilled you may request more modifications. (i.e; if you make 3 modification request posts, and one of them gets updated, you may request 1 more)


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Fiolette Yvarro

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Submission Name: Semira Shield System

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations

Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology.

Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (x) as an affiliate.



#650
Lily Kuhn

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Updated


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#651
Maelion Liates

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Submission Name: The Archangel Processing Machine

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...essing-machine/
Summary of Modification: Change production from Unique to Minor.
Reason for Modification: Archangel has grown to be a tier 4 company, and has even developed a Mk 2 of the device. The intention was always to make it minor production when the company was expanded and its locations grew. Now Archangel is able to build large factory ships and has multiple locations it has the funds to create more of these devices.
Modification:

Production: Minor.


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Kyli DT-6767

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Summary of Modification: Changing Image Source/Apperance of Armour
Reason for Modification: More distinct First Order design, separating it from the Galactic Empire design.
Modification: See spoiler

Edited by Kyli DT-6767, 06 February 2018 - 01:20 AM.

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Theme: SVRCINA - Battlefield (Acoustic Cover)

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Lily Kuhn

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Updated


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Vanessa Vantai

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Submission Name: All-Terrain Personal Walker
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...ersonal-walker/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change, affiliation change
Reason for Modification: Picture doesn't work, new company, Fringe is dead
Modification:
Replace picture with https://sociorocketn...jpg?w=580&h=788
Replace manufacturer with Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing
Replace affiliation with Open-Market

Submission Name: GRD-98 Grapple Droid

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...-grapple-droid/


Summary of Modification: affiliation change
Reason for Modification: Tech not specialized enough for the Sith
Modification:


Replace affiliation with Open-Market



Submission Name: SKD-84 Combat Droid


Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...4-combat-droid/


Summary of Modification: affiliation change
Reason for Modification: Tech not specialized enough for the Sith
Modification:


Replace affiliation with Open-Market


Edited by Vanessa Vantai, 12 February 2018 - 10:54 AM.


#655
Therran Graush

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Vanessa Vantai

 

Replace picture with http://starwarsrp.ne...ersonal-walker/

 

 

This links to the submission rather than an image link.


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#656
Vanessa Vantai

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Therran Graush

Just fixed it and added the correct picture link.

#657
Therran Graush

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Updated.


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#658
Kaine Australis

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Submission Name: MandalArms K1 "Doom Hammer" Particle Beam Cannon
Link to Submission: Link
Summary of Modification: Adding an image
Reason for Modification: I was unable to find a suitable image when submitting the technology.
Modification: Image Here

 

Thankyou for all your good works, you are awesome! :)

Edit : Forgot to source the image. LINK


Edited by Kaine Australis, 21 February 2018 - 02:04 AM.

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“It gives me strength to have somebody to fight for; I can never fight for myself, but, for others, I can kill.” 

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Armor - Gun - Cannon - Kad'Kyramud - Jetiikad'ika

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Kyli DT-6767

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Submission Name: Project: AFTERLIFE
Link to Submission: Project: AFTERLIFE
Summary of Modification: None Intended (Clarification)
Reason for Modification: Clarifying the language around the strength increase when comparing it to a Baseline Human, reading over the grammar of the sentence of the 'Endurance & Strength' Strength while ignoring the description's increased depth or comments made with the judge during review leaves the exact increase in my opinion ambiguous with possibility for misunderstanding or confusion on the part of the reader regarding the subject's strength increases up from their pre-augmentation strength performance.
Modification: 
Modification

Edited by Kyli DT-6767, 20 February 2018 - 03:33 PM.

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Theme: SVRCINA - Battlefield (Acoustic Cover)

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Fiolette Yvarro

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Submission Name: Destron X Ion Engine

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations

Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology.

Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (x) as an affiliate.

 

Submission Name: Howlback XII Ion Engine

Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations

Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology.

Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (x) as an affiliate.