Posted 09 November 2015 - 11:19 PM
Posted 11 November 2015 - 12:08 AM
Scouting a chain on non-volcanic mountains it was found to be an ideal location for the military base.
Surely you mean 'of'?
Also, read this sentence carefully and tell me it doesn't read awkwardly! 'it' what, exactly? This sentence is awkward, in my opinion. Please look through your submission for other niggling things, find what you can, and edit accordingly!
Posted 15 November 2015 - 11:44 PM
Lovely, absolutely lovely. Thank you.
Now, my most sincere apologies for the wait. I could have done this days ago... but, this submission is alright. There's nothing glaring; it doesn't try to do more than it should. So with that said, I mark this submission pending approval and hand it off to one of Valiens Nantaris or Lorelei Darke.
Thank you so much for your patience!
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Posted 16 November 2015 - 12:14 AM
In the dev threads the Galactic Alliance bought the Firemane supplied products.Firemane was providing all defensive structures as per their contract. Their placements are mentioned in the thread although the list of defensive structures/armaments is based off a list Siobhan Kerrigan supplied me with in the pre-codex making of this submission.
As for Firemane buying the products from Archangel, I am not sure and would have to confer with the writer.