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Sullust Base - Galactic Alliance

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Judah Dashiell

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Name: Galactic Alliance Base
 
Image Source: Various, see spoiler for links
 
Intent: To provide a headquarters and central source of military/relief/diplomatic efforts for the Galactic Alliance. 
 
Classification: Generic 
 
Location: Sullust. The base is located within an undisclosed non-volcanic mountain chain that could best be described as slightly south of the equator. Ninety-five percent of the base is located underground and within the mountain chain. 
 
Affiliation: Galactic Alliance 
 
Population: Galactic Alliance Base can hold 110,000 sentients. It can comfortably sleep 72,396 sentients in the barracks. Many of the other 37,604 sentients found in the base either live in various areas on Sullust or are merely passing through. 
 
Naval Personnel : 50,000
Army Personnel : 50,000
Diplomatic/Medical/Support/Misc : 10,000 
 
 
Defenses: 
 
 
Points of Interest: 
 
Hangar, Hangar Barracks, Starfighter Mechanical :
 
 
Recreation Center : 
 
 
Army Barracks, Shooting Range,Tactical Training Center :
 
 
Various Points of Interest :
 
[]Medical Bay - Complete with surgery suite and complete recovery and rehabilitation. 
 
[]Central Control - Nerve center for the Base. Contains communication relays, data, and encryption services. Can communicate with all Galactic Alliance entities. 
 
[]Mess Hall 
 
[]Diplomatic center
 
[]Tactics Room
 
[]Library & Classrooms - Similar to the Jedi Temple libraries. Excellent for studying tactics, history, or leading a lecture in the latest military procedures. 
 
 
 
Description: Taking a cue from the native Sullustians, the Galactic Alliance chose to build underground due to the toxic atmosphere found. A chain of non-volcanic mountains were found the perfect location for the Alliance military base.Blasting through dirt and rock, the base is quite simple in construction, with reinforced chambers and tunnels. Specialty bricks were created to handle the problem of the lava rich ground, keeping the underground structure safe from the heat and destructive magma flows. 
 
 
Within the base, clearly marked passageways guide Alliance personnel throughout the cavernous space. Blast doors mark off certain locations, a safety feature installed for breaches of lava or enemy forces. Most of the base is divided on either side by Naval or Army operations, with the more common areas located in the central areas of the base. 
 
 
History: As the Galactic Alliance grew, the planet of Sullust was chosen for the first location of a military base for the faction. With meetings held, Starchaser gave a group of individuals (Dashiell, Kerrigan) ideas to build upon. As the Alliance grows, so will the tales that will be a carried out in its subterranean walls. 
 
 


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Judah Dashiell

 

This submission is under review. Expect some form of initial judgement within twenty-four hours of this post.


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Ilias Nytrau

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Scouting a chain on non-volcanic mountains it was found to be an ideal location for the military base.

 

Surely you mean 'of'? :P

 

Also, read this sentence carefully and tell me it doesn't read awkwardly! 'it' what, exactly? This sentence is awkward, in my opinion. Please look through your submission for other niggling things, find what you can, and edit accordingly! :)


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Ilias Nytrau

 

 

Cleaned up that sentence as well as a few others. 



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Judah Dashiell

 

Lovely, absolutely lovely. Thank you.

 

Now, my most sincere apologies for the wait. I could have done this days ago... but, this submission is alright. There's nothing glaring; it doesn't try to do more than it should. So with that said, I mark this submission pending approval and hand it off to one of Valiens Nantaris or Lorelei Darke.

 

Thank you so much for your patience!


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Judah Dashiell

Out of interest, did you RP buying the equipment for this?

I ask because my memory is bad, but I don't remember Archangel selling you the Tempest cannons or Firemane the others.


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Valiens Nantaris

 

 

In the dev threads the Galactic Alliance bought the Firemane supplied products.Firemane was providing all defensive structures as per their contract. Their placements are mentioned in the thread although the list of defensive structures/armaments is based off a list Siobhan Kerrigan supplied me with in the pre-codex making of this submission.

 

 

As for Firemane buying the products from Archangel, I am not sure and would have to confer with the writer. 



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Judah Dashiell

OK, no problems on Firemane then.

 

<_< Seems I was mistaken what my own company makes too...so aha....

 

Approved

 

*Quantum tunnels away*


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