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Affiliation: Closed Market
Manufacturer: One Sith | Drakos Systems
Model: Dolos Class Frigate
Modularity: N/A
Production: Limited
MaterialTitanium Reinforced :Matrix Armor, G Evasive Plating, Duraplast(in some systems),,Glasteel, Dallorian Alloy, Agrinum, Turadium
Classification:EWAR/Support/Balanced Frigate 

Length: 450 m
Width: 100 m
Height: 200 m

Armament: 6
4xM4020 Sensor Jammer(each worth for 10 turbolasers)
1 Heavy General Purpose Warhead Launchers (for the EWAR missile)
6 General Purpose Warhead Launchers
4  MR32 Deck Canon
6 Sensor Scrambler Turrets
20 Point Defense Lasers
 
Defenses: 16

Hangar: N/A

Special Features
Redundant Molecular Shields
-PED-21 Distress Beacon
Standard Comm Suite( IFF Transponder, Comm Laser, Ranger Transciever, Ion Scambler, [URRL=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Holo-transmitter]Holo-Transmitter[/url, Hyperspace Transciever])
-PED-21 Distress Beacon
-Laser Communications
-Anti slicing systems
Standard Targeting Suite(Including But Not Limited To ANQ 3.6 Tracking Computer, Multi-Frequency Targeting and Acquisition System, Target-Aggressor Attack Resolution Software, Combat Multi-View Display)
Standard Navigation Systems(Including but not limited to Baelor Class Hyperdrive, OU Navigation Computer)
-Standard Life Support Systems
-Tractor Beam Projector
-Escape Pods
-Socket Guards
-Encryption Module
-Lateral Controls For Shields
-Sensor Systems/Array(Hyperwave Signal Interceptor, Aural Sensor, Dedicated Energy Receptor, Electro-Photo Receptor, Life Form Indicator)
-Encryption Module
-Cap Drain
Combat De-Ionizers
Standard Engine Systems(Inertial Compensators, Primary Ion Drive, Repulsorlift, SLAM, Maneuvering Thrusters, Combat Thruster)
-Anti Ion Weapon Systems
-Heavy Armor Plating
Maneuverability Rating: 9
Speed Rating: 10
Hyperdrive Class: 0.6

Strengths:
-Good EWAR Frigate
-Heavy Armor Plating
 
Weaknesses:
-Highly specialized since it is only fitting in an EWAR role
-Most weaponry consists of point defense/sensor scramblers
-Highly expensive to make
-Weak amount of starfighters.

Description: Among the major factions in the galaxy, the One Sith and other major factions lack a dedicated EWAR frigate one can use to fight. Seeking to build up on the frigates the famous Admiral Cyrus Tregessar has done, the Anzati worked with OS engineers, and Malos Kas to create a new EWAR frigate; furthermore, this is his first capital ship, a testament to her far he has come as a designer.

The hull features Titanium Reinforced Matrix Armor, making the ship quite tough, considering the fact that Matrix Armor is tougher than both Durasteel, and Titanum; additionally, it also features G-Evasive Plating, allowing it to maintain the maneuverability that is commonly seen in ships that might have lighter hulls.Glasteel is also featured in the viewports. Dallorian Alloy, and Agrinum can also be seen in the interior of the ship in order to stop the critical overflow of certain systems. Turadium, among other metals(Durasteel) is also used in the interior of the ship. 

The interior of the ship features state of the art security systems. Mass drivers –that launch projectiles electromagnetically- are featured in key intersections of the ship. Blaster turrets, as well as chainguns also back up the mass drivers, making this ship optimum for fighting soldiers that attempt to board it; additionally speaking, ray shields are also used, and blast doors (which are comprised of Durasteel) are used as well. Krayzen also made sure to add in the ability to vent the air. All of these systems are controlled by various security stations, and in the bridge, and the blaster/chaingun/mass driver turrets each feature IFF tags to be able to distinguish OS soldiers from other enemy ships.

The hyperdrive of the ship is the Baelor Class Hyperdrive, nicknamed after Isamu Baelor. Krayzen also made sure to add in an OU Navigation Computer. The hyperdrive features a HIMS device, allowing for it to be able to escape interdictions fields that can be used by enemy ships, as well as not fall to interdiction tactics. In terms of the navigation computer.

In terms of the shields,  this ship features redundant molecular shields- a form of shielding that can convert energy from laser energy attacks and convert the energy to be used to power our ships. Other than having ray, and particle shield projectors, it also has ion projectors to protect the ship from ion based weaponry, something that is important in its EWAR role.

Knowing full well that a ship like this needs good power, Krayzen had redundant hypermatter reactors be installed. Hypermatter reactors are well known for generating a lot of energy. What makes this hypermatter reactor different from other hypermatter reactors is that it can be linked with other reactors, increasing the power output of the ship in exchange for higher risk of the reactor failing, and the ship powering down. That was why Krayzen had a liquid hydrogen cooling system with ostrine coils. The hull of the hypermatter reactors also feature agrinum, and dallorian alloy in order to help the capacitor banks. Like the Imperial Class Star Destroyer, they also feature acastrophic release braces. 

Despite having a wide array of systems(that are common in most frigates in SW), this ship isn’t without its weaknesses. Most of its weaponry consists of defense weapons, as sensor/point defense laser canons are well known. The ship is also highly expensive, making it’s production limited; therefore, this weapon is a must have for any OS naval officer.


Development Thread: http://starwarsrp.ne...-the-best-kind/
Intent: To create an EWAR frigate for the One Sith
Who Can Use This: Limited
Primary Source:
http://starwars.wiki...stroyer/Legends
http://starwarsrp.ne...fe-starfighter/
http://starwarsrp.ne...ss-interceptor/


Edited by Jamie Pyne, 27 July 2017 - 11:47 AM.
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RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
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Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
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Krayzen Dratos

 

 

 

Manufacturer: One Sith

Please hyper link the faction's home page

 

 

 

Armament: 6 Defenses: 12

 

 

Hangar: 1 squadron

 

 

Maneuverability Rating: 9 Speed Rating: 10 Hyperdrive Class: 0.6

 

You have above standard armament, Above standard defense, a squadron, above standard speed and above standard maneuvering, heavy armor, heavy shielding, anti-ion defense.

 

this will need to be balanced somehow. 

Since you say 

 

 

-Most weaponry consists of point defense/sensor scramblers

make the armament rating 2. This will let you keep the defense rating at 12 which makes sense with the shielding, armor, and defensive systems this has. This goes a long way in balancing this ship.

 

 

 

-Weak amount of starfighters.

 

so do you consider this a frigate/carrier with light hanger capacity? or is this an escort frigate with a squadron added? If it is the later remove this from the weaknesses.  As a carrier/frigate ar 90% max size it can have 3 squadrons. Losing 2 to make room for other things is cool. with the drop to armament 2 and defense 12 with 1 squadron it makes sense for it to keep the better than standard speed and maneuvering it has.

 

so remove the "weak starfighter" weakness and keep the speed and maneuvering where they are.

 

 

 

-Redundant Molecular Shields

 

 

In terms of the shields, Krayzen made sure to copy the Mon Cala style of shielding; this ship features redundant molecular shields- a form of shielding that can convert energy from kinetic/laser energy attacks and convert the energy to be used to power our ships. Other than having ray, and particle shield projectors, it also has ion projectors to protect the ship from ion based weaponry, something that is important in its EWAR role.

 

You cannot copy Mon Calamari shielding. You would have to reverse engineer it. Also mon cal shields are not molecular shields. No big deal just you need to remove the whole copying mon cal shielding part. You can still have redundant shielding without them being mon cal. Now here is the bad news. Molecular shielding is something we normally ask for development on. It is very advanced shielding. Then throw redundant molecular shielding on top of that and you need more development.  So you have some options here

1. Just do redundant shielding with no development

2. Keep it as a copy of Mon Cal Shielding, remove the molecular shielding part, list it as triple redundancy, and do a 20 post development thread reverse engineering them.

3. list it as molecular shielding with 10 posts development for limited production molecular shielding

4. list it as redundant molecular Shielding with 20 posts development for limited production redundant molecular shielding

 

 

 

The hull features Titanium Reinforce Matrix Armor, making the ship quite tough, considering the fact that Matrix Armor is tougher than both Durasteel, and Titanum; additionally, it also features G-Evasive Plating, allowing it to maintain the maneuverability that is commonly seen in ships that might have lighter hulls.Glasteel is also featured in the viewports. Dallorian Alloy, and Agrinum can also be seen in the interior of the ship in order to stop the critical overflow of certain systems. Turadium, among other metals(Durasteel) is also used in the interior of the ship. 

 

usually when you have heavy shielding you would need to have light or at the most standard armor. My MCS ships sacrifice armor to have the heavy shields they do. Since this is limited and these are not near as heavy sheilds, the heavy hull is ok. You just need to list Heavy Armor Plating in the strengths and special features sections.

 

 

 

-Lateral Controls For Shields

this is not really needed. All shields have this. But if you wish to keep it there then thats cool.

 

 

 

-Cap Drain Combat De-Ionizers

please list "Ion Weapon Defense" in special features

 

 

 

Standard Engine Systems(Inertial Compensators, Primary Ion Drive, Repulsorlift, SLAM, Maneuvering Thrusters, Combat Thruster)

SLAM and Combat thrusters are not standard features. Please list SLAM and Combat Thrusters in the Special Features

 

 

 

Baelor Class Hyperdrive

this hyperlink needs to be fixed it links back to this submission not the approved tech page.

since you have done dev for this already it requires no additional development here :) just fix the link



 


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Ok; I just realized most of the stuff I had in strengths were supposed to be in the special features section. I'll address you other staff to as well; I apologize for the mistake.


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When I meant Mon Cala style shielding, I meant they use redudant shielding. Per Wookipidea:

distinguishing feature of Mon Calamari cruisers was the redundancy of weaker shield generators contributing to the shielding system. Mon Calamari cruisers carried three times the usual number of generators for ships of their size. Although each generator was weaker than the Imperial standard unit, the quantity of shield generators allowed for faster energy replenishment. Also, this made the generators much harder to destroy, as they could not be seen clearly and were in fact inside the ship. These shields also allowed Mon Calamari Cruisers to survive better against spacial elemental threats.
http://starwars.wiki...ri_Star_Cruiser


Edited, and moved the systems stuff to special features; also changed Tractor Beam Projector to Tractor Beam Projectors.
 
-I also halved the squadron size, in exchange for keeping the armament rating. I added in Ion Defense in special features as requested. Is the squadron size sufficient? 
 
-Added in power of EWAR weapons. 
 
I'll crank out the dev thread later today/tmr. 
 
Reshmar

EDIT: I so that I didn't write about the Imperial I-Class SD, so I added what I wanted to write- that this frigate features catastrophic brases; I also sourced the Imperial I SD.

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to keep the armament rating at 6 you will have to lose the squadron completely 

even an escort frigate only has armament 5 and its defense is only 4

your claim of armament 6 is unbalanced per your weaknesses and description. IF you want to keep the half squadron and armament 6 you will need to lose the heavy armor plating and bring the defense down to 9



 


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Would there be a dev that's required for me to keep the armament rating? Also, for future reference, do you know where this is stated as? I didn't see it in the starship template thread. 


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we have a set of examples people use to balance out their ships.

under starship templates at the bottom there are 4 examples for frigates

anti-starfighter, heavy, frigate carrier, and escort frigate

 

also there is a ship reference chart that lists these same ships types.

 

the templates, examples and chart can be found here 



 


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Stated that there isn't any starfighters. 


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Reshmar

 

No point clogging the starship forum.

 

Can you archive this till the dev thread is complete? 


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Moved to Archives - PM Spencer Jacobs for removal / if denied for Second Chance please post and tag Spencer Jacobs for review.

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Dev thread is finished.

-Added this to hull: http://starwars.wiki...armor_component

-Removed Titanium
 
-Added dev thread

-Added Socketguards

 

-Added a comm laser

-Added Encryption Module


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Krayzen Dratos

 

with the shields being redundant molecular you will need to put the hull armor back to what it was before.  Please remove the AR-0B ablative material. The matrix armor is already borderline too strong for the shielding.

 

 

In terms of the shields, Krayzen made sure to copy the Mon Cala style of shielding; this ship features redundant molecular shields-

 

Mon Cal shields are not molecular. You need to remove this part.

 

Add "heavy Armor Plating" to your strengths.

 

 

Please list "heavy armor plating" in special features

Please list "anti-ion weapon systems" in special features 

Please list "anti-slicing Systems" in special features

Please list "combat thrusters" in special features

Please list "SLAM" in special features

Please list "lasers communications" in special features



 


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As stated before, Mon Calamari ships use redundant; the quote I used from Wookipidea states that. What I mean is that I am using their style of redundant shields(which is used by other ships by the way). I am not stating that I am using Mon Calamari shields.
 
 
I added the other stuff to the special features section, and added Heavy Armor Plating to the strengths. Also added that its a good EWAR frigate
 
Alright; I edited this stuff as well. Put the hull back to the way it was before.  Also removed the Subpsace Transciever I had, and added a Hyperspace Transciever instead. 

 

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I gave you 4 options on your shielding

1. Just do redundant shielding with no development 2. Keep it as a copy of Mon Cal Shielding, remove the molecular shielding part, list it as triple redundancy, and do a 20 post development thread reverse engineering them. 3. list it as molecular shielding with 10 posts development for limited production molecular shielding 4. list it as redundant molecular Shielding with 20 posts development for limited production redundant molecular shielding

you chose the Redundant Molecular.

Mon Calamari shilding is not just redundant. There are alot of types of redundant shielding out there. Mon cal shields are triple redundancy. If you want Mon Cal shielding you will have to reverse engineer them and they will not be molecular.  So I will ask for a third time, Please remove the Mon Calamari reference. 



 


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@Reshmar 

Done


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Done


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Krayzen then wanted the ship to have sufficient defenses. He therefore had the armament consist of Flex Tube Launchers, each featuring a G-03 Tracker. Known for its versatility, it can fire a variety of missiles, including his ownMBLOR Missile. Some of the more powerful weapons the ship has is its 4x M4020 Sensor Jammers(each worth 10 capital weapons/turbolasers), another one of his own designs. The rest of the ship features some sensor scrambler turrets, as well as point defense laser canons.

 

one last thing. PLease list these weapon systems in armaments. It is just so people can find them better. 



 


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Done 


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