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Zef Halo

Zef Halo

Member Since 04 Mar 2013
Offline Last Active Today, 04:08 PM
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#1812251 House Vizsla, LLC.

Posted by Zef Halo on Today, 06:13 AM

Approved.




#1812250 The Castellax Foundation

Posted by Zef Halo on Today, 06:13 AM

Approved.




#1811939 Starship Submission Modifications

Posted by Zef Halo on Yesterday, 04:21 PM

Updated.




#1809255 Company & Workshop Modifications

Posted by Zef Halo on 16 June 2018 - 01:55 PM

Done.




#1808320 Bes'manda Ori'kad

Posted by Zef Halo on 14 June 2018 - 11:47 PM

<p>Approved.</p>


#1808131 Bes'manda Ori'kad

Posted by Zef Halo on 14 June 2018 - 03:59 PM

Mishka Larraq

Interesting submission. At first it really gives me a high fantasy vibe, even too much. Nonetheless, this sword is pretty strong but I don't see a glaring, extreme issue to prevent me from approving it.

That said, though, I'd like to see the melting durasteel like a lightsaber feature removed.


#1805105 Alan Perl

Posted by Zef Halo on 09 June 2018 - 08:00 PM

Alan Perl

Stop it


#1800007 Lodestone Device

Posted by Zef Halo on 03 June 2018 - 02:18 PM

Approved.




#1798617 Valiant I-class Star Destroyer

Posted by Zef Halo on 01 June 2018 - 03:43 PM

This is ready to be reviewed


#1796129 It is done...

Posted by Zef Halo on 29 May 2018 - 01:15 AM

When you asked for feedback regarding Ijaat going FU from a complete NFU and by complete NFU, I really mean complete, I wasn't really for it. But I was wrong. As Jorus and Seydon both said - try new things, try changes, accept transformations. It always pays off - whether it becomes a mess and you learn a valuable lesson or the opposite - it turns out pretty sweet and I think the latter could be said for Ijaat. I noticed that when you shifted to FU you seemed to have some complications adapting (I might be wrong) or at least's those were observations but you reigned it all in and I think Ijaat became a character worthy of his own book through all the twists and changes in his story and positioned in a really niche character concept of his own.

 

Been a good ride, man, and it's ending fitted Ijaat after all he's been through.

 

As a writer - I've always enjoyed your writing but I am not a capable writer as either Seydon or Jorus to give you a critique worth its salt. 

 

My piece of advice wouldn't be too different than the aforementioned and it's an advice I've given another long-term writer - Darth Carnifex - and it's try new things. Explore new waters, new horizons, stuff you've been uncomfortable with or not feeling like writing. Leave that comfort zone and you're gonna be really delighted, or at least I was when I did that by making my first Jedi - Ember Farseer.

 

Before I could succeed in exploring a new 'horizon' such as Ember, I failed more times than I could count in doing so, but that didn't stop me and I am sure as hell that won't stop you! 

 

So do it.

 

Ijaat Mereel




#1795686 The Dusty Sparrow

Posted by Zef Halo on 28 May 2018 - 02:52 PM

Approved.




#1795677 Castle Morpheus, "The Leviathan Tantive"

Posted by Zef Halo on 28 May 2018 - 02:39 PM

Approved.




#1795493 Shroud of Desolation

Posted by Zef Halo on 28 May 2018 - 08:02 AM

Approved.




#1794871 Arch Flintlock Pistol

Posted by Zef Halo on 27 May 2018 - 11:39 AM

Approved.




#1794870 Dual Machine Guns

Posted by Zef Halo on 27 May 2018 - 11:39 AM

Approved.