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Full name: Saya Taiyou-Fyre Species: Zeltron Age: Young Adult Human height: 163cm / 5'4" Hair color: Burgundy (Natural), Blue (Dyed) Eye color: Amber Complexion: Light Pink Force sensitive: Yes Force alignment: Neutral Faction: Rimward Trade League The adopted daughter of Dax Perl and...

Location: Nar Shadaa The last time Dax had been on the world...well he couldn't say it was good. He'd ended up with a stranger about thirty levels down in gang territory and no way back up to the surface...but, that stranger would one day be his wife, so he couldn't say it was the worst...

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Location: Coruscant Coruscant was one described as a mausoleum of glass. Well apparently whoever said that had never see the blasted planet for themselves because all Dax could see was endless rows of duracrete buildings and polluted fog. Sure, most days one could see the blue sky above, but...

Location: Nar Shadaa The city around the Master bustled with a fervent need. The kind that screamed at oneself until they could bear it no longer. Dax couldn't say he was in any kind of particular love with the city. Last time he was here, he'd been shot at...a lot...so it was safe to say...

Location: Kal'Shebbol The humid air made it a little difficult for Dax to breathe, and yet, he didn't mind. He was glad to be breathing at all. Kaeshana, only recently concluded, had left the man a little worse for wear. The wounds were still fresh in a very literal sense. But here, within...

Dax stood before the holoprojector aboard the Revenant Dawn, arms held behind his back, shoulders cocked back slightly, just enough to seem somewhat professional, despite his not very professional dress. The man didn't own anything fancy after all, he wasn't the kind to attend balls and what...

The metal spires of Coruscant stretched upwards, infinitely tall, cutting the sky into thin slivers of blue. The platform on which Dax stood, however, was far less enchanting. The level was dirty, grimy, and above all smelled. Like way too much body odor and spoiled food. The Rogue crinkled...

Location: Golgotha Alpha, a moon orbiting Golgotha, Sirat Wen System The icy winds whipped around Dax, his nose running from the intense cold. He pulled the snow jacket around him tighter, better to fend off the cold. What made him think that he could find anything of use here was beyond him...

Location: Naboo The Revenant Dawn dropped out of hyperspace before the glowing gem of a planet. Naboo. A beautiful world, filled with serene lakes and falls, rolling grassy knolls, and gorgeous architecture. And yet even a perfect world such as this had its flaws, no matter how desperately...

Location: Naboo The Rogue Knight breathed in deeply, held it for a moment, and then let it out. Finally, a moments peacefulness. Dax was sure he'd never felt such serenity in his entire life. He decided he'd have to come back here one day. Gazing out over the balcony at the lush greenery...

Location: Taris, the Lower Levels The former Jedi shuffled through the crowd deftly, avoiding those that milled around him, his hood pulled up over his head, eyes focused on what was before him, hands in the pockets of his jacket, pressing the lining to his body. He made sure that his sabers...

Kalyn had been assigned to go along with [member="Lily Kilia"] to travel to Obredaan and acquire a rare substance, cortosis. Lily was a pilot who Kalyn hadn't had anything to do with, she had no idea what to expect from the new pilot. Whether she enjoyed her company or not though, she had a...

Location: Cato Neimoidia Dax shifted uncomfortably, the plush seat beneath him just a bit too plush for his tastes. He didn't know how the Neimoidians did it...he could never live this comfortably. It seemed absurd and wasteful to him. The Knight leaned back a little and rubbed his eyes...

Location: Imahalyan It had been quite a while since Dax had last step foot on the planet. At least a year. Most likely more than that. And yet it remained the same. People remained happy and content. A world at peace. Imahalyan appeared to be an aberration in an all too tumultuous galaxy...

As my first character, Dax is approaching 1000 posts (yay!) I was looking for some feeback regarding him as a charcter, and me as a writer. So yeah hit me with it! Also, I realize some of my posts are unduly short, but I find that's because I want to give the other writer a chance to respond...