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Hey,
Currently 525 posts with Lily and figured I would do one of these feedback things.
Be good to hear where Lily is doing well, improvement to make her more interesting for others, what isn't working currently.
Be honest, I can handle it.
Council Chambers
Outfit: Factory Link | Wedding Ring
Tag: Kahlil Noble Kassogtha Cthylla Jasper Kai'el Zark San Tekka Amani Serys | Lily Decoria Briana Sal-Soren
"Please come forward, Knight Sal-Soren and Padawan Decoria."
Valery had watched them enter the Council Chambers after the...
Location: Coruscant, Jedi Temple
Outfit: Casual
Tag: Briana Sal-Soren
Master Briana Sal-Soren. Master Sal-Soren. Master Briana. Jedi Knight but she had to call her Master, that was what auntie Kat said. It was something confirmed by Master Valery Noble as well and Lily knew she had to make the...
THE EMPIRE
STEVENS HOMESTEAD | LORRD
CASTLE OF GLASS
It had been over a year.
A year since she had pulled the trigger. Literally. Since everything has changed. Since a part of her died with her father. But ever since Veroleem, he'd been stuck in her thoughts.
It would have been his birthday...
LILY STEVENS
Music
Sorry I'm not dead
Full name
Elizabeth Stevens
Aliases
Reaper
Class(es)
Stormtrooper
Special Commando Advanced Recon Trooper
Birthplace
Lorrd
Age
30's
Personality Traits
Headstrong
Loyal
Compassionate
Cool and calculated
Touch of innocence
Education...
Kelinna Tryn
Thread
501st legion
lily
new imperial order
special forces
I do this every so often, last time being after my return in August, and I've decided today is as good a time as any for another one of these threads.
Roast me if you'd like, or give me any feedback/criticism/etc on any of my current characters or my performance as a writer.
Location: Above Mustafar
An impact rocked the Lieutenant's Split Wing T-90, a flash of light followed by fire and smoke erupting from the starboard thrusters. The young woman swore as she attempted to compensate, transferring power and flicking switches, only to be interrupted by another...
Location: En Route to First Order Space
The Split Wing T-90 dropped out of hyperspace, the bright streaks of light falling into place on the all encompassing black canvas that surrounded the two starfighters. "Grey Leader to Trex. You with me Trex?" sounded off Lieutenant Lily Kilia. The...
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Cinnagar City, Core District - The Verge Cafe
For every day of Lily's life, she had been someone. Be it the daughter of an infamous Sith, or maybe the daughter of the business titan Alric Kuhn, and more recently she'd been known almost exclusively as "Empress". Rarely ever, if ever, was the...
NAME: I'm Lily Kirsche Kuhn.
ALIASES: I don't think I'm known under any other names..?
SPECIES: I'm a human, just like almost thirty percent of the galaxy.
RACE: Well, I was born on Empress Teta, so you could call me a Tetan, I suppose.
SEX: I'm a woman.
SEXUALITY: None of your business, really...
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To continue expanding and improving the outfits worn by the commonwealth
Image Source: Molly Hayes
Canon Link: N/A
Permissions: My Subs
Primary Source:
Kingdom of Dreams
City of Dreams
Void Stone
Exotic Matter
Bangmangi Station
Programmable Matter...
[member="Lily Kirsche Kuhn"]
Rose cleared her throat.
She stood tall, her hair tied into a pony tail, her clothing dusty, but well kept. She wore a single flak jacket with a tank top beneath it, a knife was strapped to her ribs and a blaster hung at her hip, she wore thick cargo shorts filled...
Alric sat quietly in the living room of his old family home.
There was a Datacron sitting on the table in front of him, it was half open and the small hologram of one of this twin daughters sat atop it. There were tears in his eyes, and the steaming cup of caf within his hand seemed to transfer...
A holo-projection would appear. Bright blue and illuminating, a 3d image of Alric Kuhn sitting in a small chair. His hair was disheveled, his beard had grown, his eyes had bags under them, and he looked as though he had been carried through the nine hells and back. There was a deep sadness that...
Image Source: The Witcher 3 - CD Projekt Red Forums
Intent: A pretty dress for Lily.
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Kamperdine Clothing Specialists
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Lily Kuhn
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material:
Glistaweb
Shell Spider Silk
Classification: A Dress.
Weight: 1...
Image Source: The Witcher 3
Intent: To make a submission for something mentioned so often in every thread Lily is in.
Development Thread: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/38361-training-a-monster/
Manufacturer: Kamperdine Clothing Specialists, Lily Kuhn
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Lily Kuhn
Modularity...
Image Source: wallspaperwa.com
Intent: A lightsaber for Lily Kuhn, the elder twin of the youngest Kuhn siblings.
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Silara Kuhn
Model: N/A
Affiliation: [member="Lily Kuhn"]
Modularity:
Crystals may be exchanged (Requires re-sub or modification request)
Blade...