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Sooooo, been about... seven months since the last one of these... which wow, my pace has really dropped, and I need to get back on the wagon clearly. This should have happened a few days ago, but the muse has not been musing, but now hopefully has returned, sorry to all those who have been...
Hey everyone!
After 3k posts I'm looking for some feedback and critique on Braze. I want to know what others think. I know a lot of you have interacted with him or followed his arcs, and your insights would be invaluable.
Some things to think about:
What stands out to you about Braze...
Hey,
Currently 525 posts with Lily and figured I would do one of these feedback things.
Be good to hear where Lily is doing well, improvement to make her more interesting for others, what isn't working currently.
Be honest, I can handle it.
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How is Connel doing so far ? Life and circumstances got I
in the way of his recovery arc but he is on an important one.
Anyway...
Anything good?
Anything I should work on?
Because I haven't written this guy that much and want to keep a personal record of my struggles with developing him, I'm going to provide my own feedback/list of issues to address. Then y'all can add yours in the replies, if you want.
I Can’t Figure Out How to Write a Seer Without Metagaming...
Sooooo, been about... five months since the last one of these.
Oh wow, writing that out, realising that was a faster pace than I thought it was lol.
You know the drill, to all the people who have written with Malum, and even to the people who haven't and either want to or just simply have read...
Hello everyone!
I've been rping Zaiya, my Lovalla 14-year old character, for a little over two and a half months. I originally created her back in August of 2020, but unfortunately, wasn't able to get her to stick to really get her going.
Thankfully, this time around, I had a great start-up...
I haven’t written Thelma in a while, mainly due to losing interest in her story/becoming invested in other characters. But she did manage to make it to over 500 posts, and people still occasionally mention her. So I’d like to know what you all think of her, why you like or dislike her, what...
I meant to do this earlier on, but it got away from me. I've been writing Briana now for...well, this will be the third year in just a couple of months. She's easily become my main and preferred character, replacing her mother whom I'd written off and on for years, and I'd like to know how I've...
I'm nearing the 1k post mark for Braze give or take and I've more or less participated in 100 threads with him. I am opening the floor for critique and feed back.
I feel like I've developed him in to a more complex character thus far and am interested in hearing other thoughts for the green...
I've done a fair few different threads with people with Shan, plus he just broke the 500 post mark, so I just want to see what people think of him. What do they like, what do they dislike. Any suggestions on where you think I can go with him! Eager to hear people's thoughts!
I figure at least a handful of people have done threads with Adeline, soooo what do people think of the twisted occultist? Has it been fun to meet the character? Would you like to meet the character?
There, I said it.
I get it. Zef Halo made divs cool. I get it. but please please I beg of you I'm just a boy, I can't read your posts with all that going on why is there a spinning circle and a planet and the flute section of the london symphony orchestra in your post
and sith if you could...
^ Here's a lineup of some of the art I used for Inanna over the years. Was a pain to find the files, but hey, it's kinda cool to see the visual progression of the character/the different guises she's assumed.
Inanna Hoole/Yomin/soon to be Harth was my first female character on Chaos. She's so...
So, slowly getting back into posting more and feeling the need for more threads and posts to do. Here are the characters I am interested in starting threads with some ideas, let me know who you are interested in writing with!
Dreidi Xeraic - Jedi/Witch who is still fairly early into her...
These are always some of my favorite threads to post up, mostly because there's always things I don't think about or see when I write my characters that can be changed to help make em better. And I like making my characters better. This time though it's gonna be specifically about Iris here. 2k...
When I use the Search bar in the top right corner, or when I use the "View Content" button on a member's profile, I can't see any posts made after June 4th. For example, if I do a search for posts by The Mongrel, I can see posts made on June 4th and all days before that, but any newer posts...
Hey y’all! I am unable to access the last two posts, so here is this new one.
I feel like right now in Okkeus’s story is the perfect time for him to meet some new people.
After Ziost, he pretty much left the NJO Temple and hasn’t returned yet. He is going through some depression and PTSD, and...