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1000 days

Jak Sandrow

"Nobody cares for the woods anymore."
1000 days today I have been on SWRP.

And I want to know how good I've become. Well, at least, how much I've improved...

Because I know that I'm a lousy writer. I know that I leave threads hanging, unintentionally or not. I know that I am terrible at writing more than a few lines. And I know that my character is a bit of a Twinkie.

But I want to improve. And like all good medical procedures, you can't treat the illness unless you know what the diagnosis is. So I want all of your diagnoses.

Tell me what I'm doing wrong, so I can stop doing it.

Tell me what I'm doing right, so I can continue doing that.

And most importantly, tell me how I can help make SWRP just a little bit better.

This has been an incredible, otherwise indescribable 1000 days. I hope that the next 1000 are even better.
 
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Jak Sandrow said:
And I know that my character is a bit of a Twinkie.

So...your character is a sponge cake with filling?


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