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[Jonyna Si]

It's that time again!

Jonyna has gone through a significant journey since I've started her on Chaos, and an even longer journey since I started her on my TTRPG game. I've always made her to be a bit of a counterculture character, not sticking to the tradtional way of being a jedi, or even a traditional female character.

I'd love to hear people's thoughts now that she's in the jedi council, having achieved her dreams, and sits as one of the powerhouses of the NJO.

 

[Azurine Varek]

I absolutely love Jonyna. Her and Azzie hit it off so smoothly and they play on each others banter so well!

I wish I could say I have some constructive feedback for you other than keep doing what you're doing, but I honestly really don't lol

All in all, a well written, well rounded character that is fun to bounce improve and adlib off of, so I'd say you're doing amazing!

 

[Jenn Kryze]

Hi, it's me, the most unbiased source on the topic, thank you, thank you.

I remember following Jonyna posts from afar when I was still returning to the site proper and getting my bearings, out of curiosity. She already struck me as a very willful character back then with a clear identity to her you were not afraid of committing to, no matter how unorthodox it might seem, and I think that is your greatest strength as a writer.

My only critical feedback doesn't touch upon the character, whose motivations have always struck me as consistent whilst also leaving room for growth, and it's not necessarily something you particularly need to amend. That would be the topic of post length / reactivity, where sometimes it feels like particular things aren't addressed / answered, though never to an extent that really bothers me.

Anyway, 10/10 would eventually marry flawless character.