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Approved NPC 2V-T4

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[SIZE=11pt]Name: 2V-R8[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Loyalties: @[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]Vaelak Za’atiris[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt] @Zakir Thaun[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Role: To act as a varitized house/shiphold service droid and pilot a vessel.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Age: Approximately 4000, shut off since his production until he was sold to Vaelak.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Model: 2V-R8 ([/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/2V-R8[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt])[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Appearance: Human male physical build and programming, blue metalic plates covering it’s insides as the outer skeleton and grey metalic legs, plus a pair of red-glowing eyes.[/SIZE]
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[SIZE=11pt]Personality: The droid appears to be very clumsy and over enthusiastic. The droid is often not aware of the danger surrounds him.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Combat Function: The droid will always go for hiding, inside his vessel or find cover if he manages outside. He will not surrender his files and data if threatened.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Notable Possessions: None but the intel and data it documents upon request, overall protocol-service droid.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]History: During the Old Republic era, approximately four thousand years ago, a line of mass-produced service droids of the R8-series service droids by the Sith Empire. This praticular droid was not activated until being purchased by Vaelak in a droid store in Serreno. The protocol-service droid's history with Vaelak starts on the planet Serenno, where he was bought by him. One time, while taking a stroll to the lower city of Carrania in Serreno, Vaelak was confronted by random thugs, and as he reached for his pistol, the thugs were fast enough to shoot directly and damage the droid’s logic processor, leaving the droid shut down, disabled on the spot. After the fight, he was no more than a statue in Vaelak’s apartment, until he recently had his logic processor replaced. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Intent: No more than a minor NPC to aid with maintaining the vessel and other household manage.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Links: [/SIZE]
 
Zakir Thaun said:
Combat Function: Incapable.
Instead of stating that your droid is incapable in combat, please elaborate on how they would act in combat. Would they flee? Would they mindlessly wander in the midst of battle? Would it take a blaster bolt for its master? This only needs to be a couple of sentences long, but you can include as many details as you'd like.



Zakir Thaun said:
It was found in an abanhe protocol service droid's history with Vaelak starts on the planet Serenno
I am not entirely sure what this line means. Is there a typo here?



Zakir Thaun said:
disable on the spot.
I believe you mean disabled here.



Zakir Thaun said:
Please include this under links rather than in the history.

Everything else looks fine, so once you take care of these edit requests your submission is good to go! If you have any questions just ask.
 
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