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Approved NPC 3rd Assault-CF Armor Combat Group "Wilhuff Tarkin"

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: 3rd Assault-CF Armor Combat Group "Wilhuff Tarkin"
  • Affiliation: New Imperial Order || COMPNOR
  • Classification: Combined Arms
  • Description:
    • Formation and Size: The 3rd has been one of the first formed Assault-CF Combat Groups and the first Assault-CF Armor Combat Group. Its symbol is the image above depicting its namesake - the face of Wilhuff Tarkin, a legendary imperial. The combat group is comprised predominantly from veteran stormtroopers, mainly deserter Legionnaires from the Sith Empire, who have specialized in combined arms maneuver warfare, the outliers of the combat group are recruits from SAGroup. The 3rd is also one of the largest in size Combat Groups equaling a size of a typical division at this point of time.
    • Warfare: Experienced in waging blitzkrieg, the 3rd is usually the spearhead of assault operations capable of breaking concentrated hostile forces and encircling large swaths of enemy positions.
    • The First: What stands out as distinctive element of the "Wilhuff Tarkin" is the 1st Special Operations Detachment, commonly known as "The First", with a classified size (rumored between 200-300) which are personally led by Lt. Col Jaeger Harrsk and have an extremely selective recruitment process predominantly from New Imperial Storm Commandos and Death Troopers.
COMBAT INFORMATION:

Strengths:
  • Zeal: Completely loyal members motivated primarily by conscious adherence to the tenets of the New Order.
  • CompForce Training Methods: Assault's training methods instilled a strong sense of unit cohesion within its troops, alongside a willingness to fight on despite heavy casualties.
  • The First: The 1st Special Operations Detachment is renown for its elite capabilities.
Weaknesses:
  • Expendable Zeal: With the number of recruits poured out from SAGroup, commanders are not as reluctant to attempt suicidal missions with high chances of failure thus decimating the combat group.
  • Internal Conflict: As zealous members of COMPNOR, the 3rd often gets into conflict with Stormtrooper Units which may lead to tactical and strategic miscommunication and disparity.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The 3rd Assault-CF Armor Combat Group was officially formed after the victory at Muunilinst from the most zealous of the 12th Armored Assault Army who acted as the tip of the spear in the piercing of Sith-Imperial entrenched lines of Harnaidan. As COMPNOR's influence grew so did the 3rd's. With the rise of insurgent factions within newly establish Imperial worlds and the necessity of behind-the-lines operations against the Sith, Lt. Col. Jaeger Harrsk recruited former associates of his from the One Sith Intelligence to form the core of officers of the 1st Special Operations Detachment known as "The First".
 
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Fevris Derzelas

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Hello! I'll be reviewing your submission. I am a judge-in-training, so this will require secondary approval.

Everything looks good to me here except one thing:
  • The link in the Historical Information field for the 12th Armored Assault Army leads me to an archived sub, the codex rules state that no archived submissions should be linked.
    Do not place links in submissions to threads that are within the Archives or anywhere that cannot always be publicly viewed.
    You can still mention the army, but I'll have to ask you to remove the link. Once that is done we should be on our way!
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Fevris Derzelas Fevris Derzelas | Jaeger Harrsk Jaeger Harrsk

This looks good so far, just a few small points to clean up.

1) Affiliation

Although you did link the NIO and COMPNOR you linked to a page within the faction. According to codex rules:
  • Do not place links in submissions to threads that are within the Archives or anywhere that cannot always be publicly viewed. (Ex. Faction Groups/Google Docs/Etc)


Although the faction pages are open at this time that doesn't mean that they will remain this way and if they were to be made private this link would not be viewable by everyone. Please redirect the links to the front page of the faction.

2) Equipment

You have classified this unit as an Infantry Unit, however, you have then included both mechanized armour and starfighters as part of their equipment list. According to Wikipedia infantry is categorized as:
Infantry is a military specialization that engages in military combat on foot, distinguished from cavalry, artillery, and armored forces.

Could you please clarify this discrepancy? I would either suggest making them a
 
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