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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: To create a medical unit for the Empire, consisting of Combat medical Bagrade for the armed forces, Imperial mobile superficial hospitals, and a dedicated MEDEVAC air group

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Role: To provide medical treatment to IMAF and their allies in a combat setting

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Characters, Equipment, Ships


GENERAL INFORMATION

Unit Name: 4077th Imperial Medical Corps{IMC} Kolto cowboys

Affiliation: The Empire

Classification: Medical support

Description: Made of several smaller units the 4077th IMC has a combat medic detachment, 4 IMASH units, and a dedicated Medevac airwing They usually have a caring, compassionate mid-set, as their primary mission, to save lief and keep Imperial and allied forces, alive, patched and in the fight, and if the sickness or injury is too bad for them to fix to get medevac to the proper medical facility as safely and quickly as possible.

Unit emblem :
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COMBAT INFORMATION

Unit Size: Medium

Unit Availability: Rare

Unit Experience: Veteran

Equipment:
X (as it would, be extremely long to list all this individually)


Strengths: Very skilled in respective skill sets, Mobile, moderately fast deployment capabilities, highly trained in their respective fields


Weaknesses: Heard replace member due to extensive training required, supply dependent, Will all members of the unit are trained in combat, some of the other units outside of the combat Medic brigade, aren't as proficient in as out combat unit as their primary mission, providing medical treatment and evac to the IMAF and their allies, IMASHs take a moderate amount time to move up as combat unit advance.




HISTORICAL INFORMATION

The Imperial Medical Corps was a division within the Imperial Military of the reconstituted Sith Empire that was charged with the medical treatment and care of the Imperial forces—though, like much of the Empire, the Corps discriminated against those who were not Human or pureblood Sith. The division was deployed on both active battlefields and conquered planets, and the Corps fell under the jurisdiction of the Sphere of Biotic Science and the member of the Empire's ruling Dark Council who controlled that Sphere of Influence within the Empire. The IMC has excited in one form or another in every incarnation of the Empire, this is the latest incarnation of IMC, It is made up of some of the best medical minds and practitioners in the Empire, to keep their troops alive, patched and in the fight as unlike previous incarnation of the empire, this version actual values it solider’s seeing them as more as mere dap tools to throw at an enemy, till the enemy was overwhelmed by the share number troops sent against them, this incarnation also doesn't have the xenophobic mentality of past incarnations the Unit a fairly new addition to the IMAF, created after repeated suggestions, from Stormtrooper Medic Colton Renfro MT 40179
 
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Always love seeing some support units! The name is very fun too, however there are a few issues that I see with this submission that will need to be amended and modified before I can approve this for you.

Going down the list the first thing you're missing is an Image Credit link for the image you've used in Unit Emblem, this will need to be fixed. For Affiliation a link to the Empire faction is also needed, but these two changes are pretty minor.

There are some major issues though. For Equipment while they may indeed have a wide selection of tools and gear, a simple link to medical technology is simply not suitable. Surely they don't have everything on there right? In addition you mention ships and other vehicles early in the submission but haven't listed any such vehicles in the Equipment section, not to mention any sort of armor and weaponry. Also, given that this is a combat NPC submission format, you're missing the entire Combat Function bullet point which should be underneath the Combat Information section. This is the area that needs the most work but ultimately nothing that can't be done!

Just tag me whenever your edits are done!
 
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