The Eye of the Storm
Jonyna's been through a roller-coaster since getting unfrozen.
How y'all feel about her?
How y'all feel about her?
Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos
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Green Bean
Keep on putting off this but I have free time so I might as well type up my opinion
I think you've been doing great with Jonyna. There's been a few times where I think she's came off as a bit more aggressive than a Jedi should be, and a bit more vengeful but you've explained in the past why she's that way so I'm not totally against it. It's not much of a concern anymore. It is an interesting aspect of her character I think though, with a potentially large amount of stuff to explore with Jonyna discovering more about herself.
I also like the family aspect she has with her species. Being almost like a leader to them, which whilst it would make sense to them to revere Jonyna because of her being frozen and thus having lived a long time, also makes sense that she'd be a bit more hesitant over it. I've always enjoyed the threads we've done together with her and SHan, even if it hasn't been that much. I also enjoy seeing her rmentoring of Ko, and the little of I've seen with Rayia.
I'm not really great at giving feedback or anything, so that's roughly all I have to say. Just want to say I think you're doing great with her and I can't see where she goes from here.
I think you've been doing great with Jonyna. There's been a few times where I think she's came off as a bit more aggressive than a Jedi should be, and a bit more vengeful but you've explained in the past why she's that way so I'm not totally against it. It's not much of a concern anymore. It is an interesting aspect of her character I think though, with a potentially large amount of stuff to explore with Jonyna discovering more about herself.
I also like the family aspect she has with her species. Being almost like a leader to them, which whilst it would make sense to them to revere Jonyna because of her being frozen and thus having lived a long time, also makes sense that she'd be a bit more hesitant over it. I've always enjoyed the threads we've done together with her and SHan, even if it hasn't been that much. I also enjoy seeing her rmentoring of Ko, and the little of I've seen with Rayia.
I'm not really great at giving feedback or anything, so that's roughly all I have to say. Just want to say I think you're doing great with her and I can't see where she goes from here.