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Approved NPC Adenic | Secret Santa 2019

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[SIZE=12pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Intent[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: To Create a hound companion for a Secret Santa gift 2019[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]​Image Credit[/SIZE]: https://www.pinterest.dk/pin/439171401160920479/
  • [SIZE=12pt]Role[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: A Canine soldier[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Links[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: [ Provide links to any relevant threads, characters, companies, locations, equipment, etc here. ][/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]PHYSICAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Age[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: 10[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Force Sensitivity[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: Force User[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Species[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: Vornskr [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Appearance[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: 0.8 Meters Jet black fur with a scar running down the left cheek[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]SOCIAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Name[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: Adenic[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Loyalties[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: CIS, Eli-Mae Forrest[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Notable Possessions[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: Armor weave vest[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Personality[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: Shy at first, however once you gain his trust he is fiercely loyal[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Training[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: Trained for guard duty, stealth infiltration, tracking[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]COMBAT INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Combat Function[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]: Adenic is not well suited for large engagements, however in small engagements Adenic does extremely well. His main weapon is his Whip-like tail which limits his range to personal[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Strengths:[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Force sensitive: Being a Vornskr Adenic is force sensitive, Having the force allows him to track most living being from long ranges by tracking their force essence[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Loyal: Once a person earns Adenic’s Trust they have it for life furthermore should anything attempt to harm someone who he trusts Adenic would fiercely defend them[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Weaknesses:[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Vulnerable: Adenic does not have any natural resistance to blaster bolts as such he wears an Armor weave vest to help protect him[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Short range: When in combat Adenic has only his Teeth and tail to use as weapons[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]HISTORICAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Taken from his home world of Myrkr by smugglers Adenic’s journey in the Confederacy started off shaky as the smugglers were stopped by a Confederate patrol as they tried to smuggle Adenic and a Rancor to the Outer rim world of Xagobah to sell on the black market. It was as the patrol came upon the animals being held that Adenic acquired the scar that would mark him as one of the smugglers attempted to take his life with a vibroblade. This would have surely been the end of Adenic had it not been for the Grey Jedi knight @Eli-Mae Forrest, She had been with the patrol when they had stopped the ship, she stepped in and healed the animal forging somewhat of a bond with him. He was then formally gifted to the Grey Jedi before she gifted him again a few years later. In the Time Eli had Adenic she trained him with basic military commands[/SIZE]
 
Good Evening [member="Eli-Mae Forrest"],

This is a nicely put together little submission, there are jsut a few small things I want to bring to your attention before we move forward to approve the submission.

1) Image



Eli-Mae Forrest said:
​Image Credit: https://www.pinteres...71401160920479/
You have provided the image credit, and while it's not required to have an image in the submission itself, I just wanted to make sure that you hadn't forgotten to provide an image while you were posting the submission.

2) Your name



Eli-Mae Forrest said:
[member="Eli-Mae Forrest"]
When linking yourself in a submission using @ won't work, instead please use [member="your name"].

3) Armourweave



Eli-Mae Forrest said:
Notable Possessions: Armor weave vest

Please link the wookiepedia article for armourweave which can be found here.

Please read through my points and tag me back after you have made your changes.
 
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