Approved Starship Adril Class Starfighter

[Soell Alberio]

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Intent: To create a standard starfighter for the Firemane company and their clients
Manufacturer: Silk Holdings (Production) Firemane (Design)
Model: Adril class starfighter
Affiliation: Firemane Company and Clients
Modularity: None
Production: Mass Produced
Material: Titanium Alloy
Description: A swift and capable fighter, the Adril class starfighter is highly maneuverable and capable in dogfights. Its design is meant to support larger vessels designed by Firemane by devastating enemy bombers and starfighters before they can attempt to cause damage, while also maintaining thick armor of their own to withstand enemy fire for an extra hit or two. With their missile launchers they're also able to lightly damage small enemy capital ships. It is Firemane's answer to the call for more versatile starships, named after the Eldorai Jedi Knight Adril Tythorin. The fierce master and lover of Siobhan Kerrigan and who eventually gave her life to defeat an Eldritch abomination. As such this swift and lethal starfighter is meant to honor her as the Firemane company expands its production basis into military starships in the wake up the recently initiated conflict between the Republic and the Sith.

Classification: Fighter
Role: Starfighter
Height: 5 Meters
Width: 11 meters
Length: 15 meters
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Cryogenic Reactor
Hyperdrive Rating: Class 1
Minimum Crew: 1
Optimal Crew: 1
Armaments:

• 4 Laser cannons
• 2 Concussion missile launchers (4 missiles each)

Non-Combative Attachments:

• 
  Communication array
• Standard targeting system
• Standard navigation system
• Military grade sensory array
• Military grade deflector shield

Passenger Capacity: 0
Cargo Capacity: 113 kilograms
Consumables: 1 and 1/2 weeks
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 2

 

[Domino]

Hello! Sorry for the wait on this, it's a very nice ship and there's only a few procedural mistakes in the sub that need to be corrected or looked at.

Firstly we generally like a slightly longer description, maybe an area it's lacking even if it's fluff or something to give it a bit of personality. If you need ideas you're free to brows other subs for topics.
Classification would be fighter as there are no other categories for one besides balanced while roll would be what you intend the ship to do. (For an all-around fighter like this, Starfighter is fine catch-all)
You don't need to have a hyperdrive, just put down N/A in the slot and add a line about it to the description (if you like) just so we know it was an intentional omission.
'Light' isn't a laser modifier we recognize but you can leave them as they are or bump them up to regular cannons.
[member="Hecate"]

 

[Soell Alberio]

[member="Domino"]

Fixed! I think!

TuT

Thanks for alerting me to the mistakes!

 

[Domino]

Okay, looking good, there's just one last thing.
I'm going to need a missile count for your launchers (4 each) is the max allowed. Take care of that and you're golden.
[member="Hecate"]

 

[Soell Alberio]

4 each it is then! Thanks [member="Domino"]

^w^

 

[Domino]

Pending RPJ stamp then!
[member="Hecate"]

 

[Fabula Caromed]

You had me at the name. I miss her office on Kuat. D:

Approved.