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Approved NPC Aelia Kenway

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 43
  • Force Sensitivity: Non Force User
  • Species: Human
  • Appearance: She looks like she's in her 20's through unknown means, she's 1.524, or roughly 5'6. She has a birth mark on her back on her right shoulder blade that looks a fair bit like New Zealand. She has a thin body, and generally looks like a 20 year old model, but more subtle and lush. She weighs no more than 60 kg and feels light for her weight. She usually wears an expensive dress or outfit in white, blue, maroon or black.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Aelia Kenway. Title: Lady Kenway. Alias: Madame Kenway, Lady Kenway.
  • Loyalties: She is loyal to the Kenway family, more specifically, Caesar Kenway.
  • Wealth: She is fairly wealthy due to being nobility like Caesar Kenway, and often asks for some of his money when in need.
  • Notable Possessions: A corvette that she rarely uses, and an entire wing in the Kenway mansion.
  • Skills: Charming and Persuading.
  • Personality: She is friendly and calm, slightly charming aswell. She finds ease in persuading her family into doing things for her. You could also describe her personality as concerned, and cute. If presented with the option of spending time with her family, she'd accept near instantly. The same reaction could be expected if you offered her upwards of a thousand credits to do some menial task quickly, for example: a dare. She is very protective of her intelligence and family, and would defend both fiercely. She is not known to surrender any form of battle, whether it be verbal, mental or physical. She has a tendency to stop talking midsentence, or just not talk at all. She is shy when dealing with others, that's no secret. She also tends to get very emotionally attached to people if she does get attached.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: Her weapon of choice would be her wits, or a dagger or small blaster pistol.
  • Combat Function: She would be a liability in actual combat, but a strategist and leader from the back lines. She's not good in actual combat at all, and would be better off hiding or running. She's not a very good runner, and is quite slow, she is not strong at all.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Born eleven years(roughly) after Caesar Kenway, she is the younger sister of him, and often teases him. She gets slightly jealous of females taking and interest to him for reasons neither of them know. She has assisted him with a large amount of his work and often times even runs his companies for him while he is busy. She often also accompanies him to parties and such things. She is quite incapable of actual combat, and couldn't hit a bantha from point blank range. She often finds herself hiding behind her older brother during fights, literally.

At age 18 she graduated High School with straight A's and perfect grades, and began College, specialising in Economy and Business, succeeding in them greatly. At age 25 she was due to be married, but her fiance cheated on her, causing her to spend the remainder of her life hanging around Caesar, who has thus far been supporting her, and was the only person to comfort her when she was cheated on. He was also the one who paid for their wedding that never came. At age 30 she got over it, but never got over how Caesar had helped her and what he had done for her.

Among the Kenway family circle and those trusted outside of it, there exists a rumour of Aelia Kenway having a form of crush on her older brother, Caesar Kenway.
 
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This hyperlink leads to the how to properly source your image thread. I've also typed it out manually and found no page with the image on it. If you require any help with finding the source or this image, please let me know :)

Other than that, I would like to see you flesh this submission out more. It needs more meat on it for it to be accepted, mostly in the historical information part, but also a little bit in the personality would be great. As with the image sourcing, if you require any help, don't hesitate to ask.
 

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[Member=Scherezade deWinter] Be honest with me here, could you give me a more in-depth answer as to what you want in the personality and history sections of the submissions? because I can't seem to get how I'm meant to make a paragraph out of somebody or something's personality. I really can't, basically, if you could more or less explain what you mean by adding more meat to the submissions, that'd be great.
 
[member="Caesar Kenway"] Personality can include quirks, certain reactions to certain things, an elaboration of things that have already been written, etc. The history needs way more fleshing out; you can describe the life of someone who's lived 43 years in much more than 3 lines. Submissions need to be meat-full, and not just mention that the NPC exists.
 

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[Member=Scherezade deWinter] I've edited for now, I may come back to it tomorrow if you require me to. But as for now, I will edit the other submission for Wolffo briefly, then work on a post to a thread.
 

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Alright, just to be clear. [Member=Scherezade deWinter] You can see that's an actual link right? because I took it straight from that Deviantart page. I swear I did.
And it turns out that line is cursed or something, I went on the next one down and it's working fine for me now.
 
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